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Greg Freeman

Sat 1st Dec 2018 16:32

There's a link to the publisher's site at the end of the review, as is our custom, MC, although I can't see an ISBN number there. I'm sure you could track it down yourself, but seeing as it's you, here it is ... ISBN 978-1-912111-74-9. Don't come back to me if it doesn't work for any reason!

You're very kind, Trev.

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Randy Horton

Sat 1st Dec 2018 16:14

That's a bit more literal than I intended, but I really appreciate your kind words. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:42

But some might even settle for "Big Ben"! It's merely a question of inclination and time in hand.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:41

Hi DK

Very tasty - positively Cordon Bleu!

Jennifer

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:38

Isn't optimism merely the coming to terms with pessimism?
The theme of hope against disappointment in the daily rituals of
life is well caught.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:33

Do you have the ISBN for this book? Handy for an online order.
MC

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:31

Thank you for commenting Brian it is life and what is it they say..'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
Thank you everyone for the likes always very welcome and appreciated..?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:27

I imagine that all parents are "amateurs" as far as a first birth is
concerned, no matter how much advice - written and verbal - may
be available. It's clearly very much a "hands-on, learn-as-you-go"
process. These lines certainly convey that to the reader, adding
the effect of the transfer of parental priorities to a new born.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:25

Enjoyed this M.C. ?

Comment is about TESTING TIMES - a Saturday "theme" poem (blog)

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jennifer Malden

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:01

Lovely villanelling! Agree about the sleepless nights -and then one has to go to work as well.

Jennifer

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Trevor Breedon

Sat 1st Dec 2018 14:58

There should be a copy of this in every NHS waiting room.
Another great review, Greg.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 14:35

A parents lot..wonderful but fraught with pitfalls..x

Comment is about My first-born (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 14:02

Oops - sorry about that - due to an electronic hitch...re-entered
and re-titled.
MN

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kJ Walker

Sat 1st Dec 2018 13:38

Hi Steve. Thanks for your comment on " Albert Edward Burrows". I have read a lot about his case, and I wanted to share the story so that people know what an evil man he was.
Cheers Kevin

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Nigel Astell

Sat 1st Dec 2018 12:46

Thanks for your comment Po

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Nigel Astell

Sat 1st Dec 2018 12:44

I like instead of merry you use red and green with such a good effect!

Nigel

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 1st Dec 2018 11:40

Top stuff mate, took me back a bit, great rant great rhythm with some of my favourite music in there Beno! One of first poems I ever wrote was called Punks not Dead, its still at the very start of my profile, if you get chance to have a gander, enjoy all the best Jeffarama!

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Dominic James

Sat 1st Dec 2018 09:58

Patrick, you put me in mind of Virginia Woolf's wise appraisal of Conrad, in whom she recognises that tension between a writer who finds there is everything to say, and the seafarer who knows there is nothing to be said. Hopkins troubles me, his occasional jump off the page genius, and his profound understanding of sound, I follow at... more than a pace or two. For the general crisis, here's a favourite, one of his quiet pieces, i'm sure you know it.

Heaven-Haven
(a nun takes the veil)

I have desired to go
Where springs not fail,
To fields where flies no sharp and sided hail
And a few lilies blow.

And I have asked to be
Where no storms come,
Where the green swell is in the havens dumb,
And out of the swing of the sea.



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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 1st Dec 2018 09:51

It's life isn't it Taylor...learning to bounce back from disappointment.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 1st Dec 2018 09:49

A lot of responsibility on his shoulders! I'm sure you are great parents.

Comment is about My first-born (blog)

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Sat 1st Dec 2018 08:01

It's a conundrum Don...wife or WOL.answers on a postcard please.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 07:39

This kept me hooked. What beauty, longing and hope is expressed in this wonderful poem. It is worthy of praise and acknowledgement..??

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 07:32

Nice bit of humour Don..?

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Sat 1st Dec 2018 06:56

Thank you to everyone who posted comments.
Well done to Jennifer with her acute observational skills. I guess I don't have a particular style because it depends on which one of me is writing the poem that day. I was really drunk when I answered the Q and A's Jennifer. ?
Really like that you liked my poem Mr Braddock. Coz your work is very special and I am a great admirer of it.
Kate G your comment was very clever. I loved it.
Not sure what big Sal meant.
Thanks again Anya.
Mr Sherwood, I blushed after your comments.
Ray, I always enjoy your comments RE my work. It's great your enjoyed it. Made me proud of myself, which isn't normally my thing or objective but it felt nice.
And thank to everyone else. Lovely.
Beno.

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d.knape

Sat 1st Dec 2018 03:08

thank you Jennifer for your comments on
"Eat This Poem". was it tasty?

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Big Sal

Sat 1st Dec 2018 00:39

The last line of your sample is great.?

Whole piece really flows well by inserting three words per line. . . Really shines.?

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Big Sal

Sat 1st Dec 2018 00:33

Each line could be dissected and from that, it's own poem would spring up from nowhere.

This is much like a starfish or underwater treasure in its durability and enduring value or merit.

Well done again, Keith. No weak beams here.?

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raypool

Fri 30th Nov 2018 22:36

Nice one, Jennifer. You're up on me there, but I saved some heads in September to dry as pot pourri and they've sort of gone a bit grey! Thanks for liking it.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Nov 2018 21:17

Wilde's wit and his way with words saw him achieve literary fame
in his own time. It was his titling at windmills - against the social
limits of "acceptable behaviour" of his time and social status that
caused his fall from grace. The Victorian sexual underworld was
unhindered until it intruded very publicly into the wider domain,
causing consternation and fearful (and fearsome!) responses.
Writers like Frank Harris were adept at portraying "the time and
place". Hypocrisy is a plant with many shoots, but bending the
knee to respectability in a class-ridden age was certainly expected
by the middle and upper classes of that time. L.P Hartley's novella
"The Go-between" succeeds brilliantly in its depiction of the
frowned on and socially ruinous affair between a young woman
with potential as the bride of an aristocrat and a local young farmer.
The theme of social rejection and the maintenance of the securely
guarded "status quo" in the face of sexual behaviour that was seen
as a threat to a well-ordered society, in which people knew their
place and were frequently very willing to accept and retain it, was
certainly not restricted to the homosexual milieu.

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eve nortley

Fri 30th Nov 2018 20:24

I just wanted to thank everyone who has read this piece and particularly those people who have commented and shared their own stories and thoughts, which can't have been easy.
I hear terrible asylum stories regularly in the course of my work, but the stories from Congo stand out as being particularly brutal and horrific.
Congo is a beautiful country, with incredible natural resources which makes the situation even more bitter.

I hope the asylum poems I have shared will encourage other people to write about mans inhumanity to man and hopefully change the world one attitude at a time. We could all write about the beauty of the natural world and the joy of the festive season etc but life is both bitter and sweet and everyone's stories deserve to be heard, so please join me in telling how it is.

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raypool

Fri 30th Nov 2018 19:42

Thanks for your comments as follows:

Poemographic - thanks for landing on my offering. I take that as a compliment! I like it.

Kate, always nice that you read me. Glad you liked it, even though it is saucy.

Wow Mark. That is really a tongue twister.... !

Eric, your comment made my day. Really its nice to be analysed in that way. It had me thinking about the elements of writing.
Thanks so much.

David, Shostakovich is often shocking, Rachmaninov is enrapturing, but either way tempted by that hint of stocking(sorry Stockhausen). Glad you liked it mate. I was thinking of you as I wrote it.



Thanks Brian, Anya, Jon and Taylor for your invaluable support.

Cheers and love to all.

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Big Sal

Fri 30th Nov 2018 18:50

Great title.?

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Big Sal

Fri 30th Nov 2018 18:43

I only eat my poems out of sheer jealousy for others' work.??

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Nov 2018 18:38

Seconded. A clever and well written poem with a superb ending.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Nov 2018 18:33

Jan,

Thank you for your comment which cannot be disputed. However, had Wilde been more prudent in his behaviour then we would never have realised his wit, intellect and genius which is a gift, particularly to the literary world.

Thank you again,
Keith

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jennifer Malden

Fri 30th Nov 2018 17:17

Lovely Ray - as usual. Found out recently that there is purple, blue and grey lavender, as well as French - the tassled stuff.
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Fri 30th Nov 2018 17:11

Nice - loved it. Unfortunately too true. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Fri 30th Nov 2018 17:06

Nice! Very true. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Fri 30th Nov 2018 16:57

Hi Beno, just thinking, the language you use in the Qs and As seems to have no relation to the beautiful words in Raven Beauty, for example, but neither to the gripping and brilliant 'heavy metal' use of words in Scooter Club?!!!!!

Fantastic writing anyway. Jennifer

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Eric Maynard

Fri 30th Nov 2018 15:38

This poem says so much by suggestion, working on multiple levels from one line to the next, complex characters living complex lives, yet you make it accessible. This poem is so complete and information-dense, it's like the mathematical equation of a person, distilled to their most basic.

Sometimes I find your poems lyrical, sometimes poetic, but always enjoyable. Thanks for sharing

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Eric Maynard

Fri 30th Nov 2018 15:11

loved - "Minds of the better off"

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jan oskar hansen

Fri 30th Nov 2018 14:40

well, Oscar Wilde was wild he had no discretion

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Becky Who

Fri 30th Nov 2018 14:26

Thanks as always folks. Sorry life is usual madness at the moment, I'm painfully aware I'm not taking the time to thank everyone individually. BW xx

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 30th Nov 2018 13:18

Yes I liked this mysterious piece of poetry. Thought provoking. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 30th Nov 2018 13:16

Clever poem Randy. I know where you are coming from ?

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Big Sal

Fri 30th Nov 2018 12:55

This read very much like a story or a film script. Each line held the keys to the next (scene) before by the time the reader is ready, the piece ends.

Well done on the structure and imagery.?

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Big Sal

Fri 30th Nov 2018 12:40

That repetition and rhythm is subtly entrancing. Well done on conveying such a theme and carrying it in each stanza until the end.

The imagery is top notch as well.?

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Randy Horton

Fri 30th Nov 2018 10:47

And I usually just ruin my own verse. ?

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raypool

Fri 30th Nov 2018 10:38

Hi Martin. I've got an open framed incinerator and a dustbin one; the open one is more fun and gives more of a buzz, but I always take a hose there just in case! The smell doesn't go down well, but I don't mind it. More appealing than ciggy smoke I suppose. Thanks for enjoying!

Ray

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steve pottinger

Fri 30th Nov 2018 09:36

Congratulations on telling this story so well, and maintaining the rhyme and rhythm so successfully over such a long poem. Bringing tales like this to life is one of the functions of poetry, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

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