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Greed

This weeks rhymers theme..overeating


Greed Haiku

The scales of doom loom
On the floor of my bathroom
Greed you may assume


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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 6th Jan 2019 23:03

Thank you M.C. much appreciated comment.
Like it a lot Trevor..

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Jan 2019 18:19

Having failed to contribute to this theme, I don't think I could have
improved on this succinct and tasty blog.

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Trevor Alexander

Sun 6th Jan 2019 13:45

with heavy decrees
my own talking scale agrees;
one at a time please

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 6th Jan 2019 10:19

Thanks KJ..scales re-zeroed. That works nicely..

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kJ Walker

Sun 6th Jan 2019 09:50

Nice one
we all put a bit of weight on over Christmas
have you thought of re-zeroing the scales

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 5th Jan 2019 20:33

Thank you for reading and liking the poem, Lisa, Jon and Becky..x

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 5th Jan 2019 20:22

Thanks Po nice to be back. Time to start flexing the brain muscle once more.
Hi Don thank you for the comment nice to be rhyming again.
Hi Brian, I have taken your advice, scales locked safely away..

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Sat 5th Jan 2019 07:55

Easy solution Taylor...hide the bathroom scales!

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Jan 2019 06:46

So clever Taylor ?

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