Poetry Blogs (2019, grooming)
Lump in my throat
This is about the guy who groomed me so language feedback would be 'really appreciated:)
In the sauna
I was an open wound.
My skin was anger:
sore and raw and
so self-conscious-
always naked.
I'd be feverish,
dehydrated,
and shaking.
The constant craving for salt,
was provoked by me,
so it was 'all my fault'
he was so thirsty.
He'd tear me apart...
Sunday 30th June 2019 6:44 pm
GROOMING
Stripping my terrier
could not be a hairier
task
Want to ask
Doesn't it seem odd
to breed a dog
That needs to be plucked
like a chicken?...
By Lynn Hahn
Wednesday 25th January 2017 4:00 am
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