And now, fascists, colonialists, including so-called 'Christians' want to take us back to those good old times.
Comment is about Dickens Said It All (blog)
Original item by Hélène
Thank you, Trevor. I'm sure I will always remember my first day at school and all the early stuff. But at some point middle age will start to get hazy. And what was the name of that...?
Comment is about Nostalgia (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
A tender, heartwarming poem, Ralph. Thank you.
Comment is about Return to Waterloo (edited) (blog)
Original item by Ralph Dartford
Thank you very much, Rolph. Yes, true forgiveness requires healing and reconciliation. Otherwise, the old wounds just continue to fester, as we have seen all around the world.
Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Very moving and effective, John. Sixty-two twice over - far too young.
Comment is about Sixty Second Minute (blog)
Original item by John Gilbert Ellis
Thanks for the Likes, Redbrick and Tom.
Comment is about THE DEVIL'S PISS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Uilleam, absolutely! It's humbling to think about how much we don't know, despite all our advancements. The "arrow of time" debate is a perfect example—how we confidently march forward in time, yet can't fully grasp what it even is. Philosophers and scientists have been wrestling with these questions for centuries, and yet, reality, existence, and consciousness remain some of the most profound mysteries. It's almost comical how we pretend to have it all figured out when, in truth, we're just scratching the surface. Here's to embracing the wonder and the questions!
Comment is about The return of the living dead (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Robert Mann, thank you for your words! I'm truly glad it resonated with you. Your support means a lot.
Comment is about The Silence That Remains (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Flyntland, thank you so much for your incredibly kind words! I'm truly touched that the poem resonated with you so deeply.
Comment is about The Silence That Remains (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Uilleam, magic stuff, indeed! That cocoa powder sounds like pure nostalgia. There’s something so special about those simple, homemade recipes—no additives, just real ingredients and good memories. Your dad’s drink sounds like the kind of comfort that can’t be replaced by anything store-bought. Cheers to the real stuff and the warmth it brings!
Comment is about The cake (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Hélène, I'm glad you liked the poem! Thank you.
Comment is about Bob Dylan (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Graham, thank you for your words and your movie recommendation!
Comment is about Bob Dylan (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
"Derek disagreed" extremely clever Jonathan.
Comment is about Derek’s Theory of Quantum Stiles (blog)
Original item by Jonathan Humble
Love this! Brilliant Derek. I think Einstein would approve.
Comment is about Derek’s Theory of Quantum Stiles (blog)
Original item by Jonathan Humble
Thanks for your likes and comments:
Red Brick Keshner
Tom Doolan
Holden Moncrieff
K. Lynn
Rolph David
Naomi
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No. 9. Testicles] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
Thanks for your comment, Rolph.
A. It depends on what you mean by ‘meditative’!
B. a ‘seasonal’ reference is no longer regarded as necessary in modern English Haiku.
May I refer you to the OE reference Dictionary, in accordance with which, my ‘traditional’ use of two metaphors does involve the ‘natural’ world….a ghastly scene indeed on which to meditate! 😟
For the sake of clarity: my metaphors refer to a failed politician turned gossip columnist, who evidently regards some human lives (those of Palestinians) as being of less value than others.
No offence taken!😉
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No. 9. Testicles] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
Sun 9th Feb 2025 13:00
Thank you Marla and Rolph! I think, the idea that the macro is depicted/replicated in the micro has really captivated my mind. The cyclic nature of things (set to continue unless the learnings are implemented) is scary at the same time reassuring. It is quite mind bending to even attempt to understand the grand scale!
Comment is about Egocentricity (blog)
Original item by pallavitryingthings
Your poem is both strong and serene,
and could also describe my much-loved Oak Tree which stands, strong and dependable, in my garden.
I planted it about 35 years ago and it has rewarded me with its shade and ambiance. "A silent solace" indeed.
There are so many phrases that resonate with me that I felt I ought to stick to one, otherwise I would just reprint the whole poem.
A beautifully written poem that only you can write. Thank you
Comment is about A LINDEN'S EMBRACE (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Loving the last line, bringing together polarised ends of human experience. 🌷
Comment is about Pen to Paper (blog)
Original item by Hélène
On “not to the swift “- Thanks kindly Hélène 🙏🏻🕊🌷most definitely includes the poets of our contemporary generation/s 😃
Comment is about Hélène (poet profile)
Original item by Hélène
Thanks kindly Hélène 🙏🏻🕊🌷most definitely includes the poets of our contemporary generation/s 😃
Comment is about not to the swift (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
On “not to the swift” - Thanks Mike! Good to know what works in any given poem. You are much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊🌷
Comment is about Mike McPeek (poet profile)
Original item by Mike McPeek
Thanks Mike! Good to know what works in any given poem. You are much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊🌷
Comment is about not to the swift (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Hey Rolph,
I can’t tell you how much it means to me to hear your thoughts on the poem. You really captured the essence of what I was trying to express—the struggle of caring for someone else while hiding your own feelings. It’s not always easy to put those emotions into words, so knowing it resonated with you like this is really special.
I truly appreciate you taking the time to reflect so deeply on it.
Take care,
Naomi
Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thanks, Maria. Because light takes time to travel, everything you see is - by a fraction of a fraction of a second - in the past. So you are the centre of - for you the only - present.
Comment is about Miracles (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Thankyou Graham and Rolph and to those who have sent likes.
People can graduate from little lies to huge ones.
The trick is seeing the small ones before it's too late and the accumalative product of the lie has created seemingly unstoppable power and wealth.
Calling it out is the thing, even then look at what is going on in the world right now.
David RL Moore
Comment is about One thing becomes another (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
On "piecemeal" - Thanks DavidRLM, that is so true! And that something however little or significant is sometimes the only thing we have of the other person. Much appreciated, as always 🙏🏻🕊️🌷
Comment is about David RL Moore (poet profile)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks DavidRLM, that is so true! And that something however little or significant is sometimes the only thing we have of the other person. Much appreciated, as always 🙏🏻🕊️🌷
Comment is about piecemeal (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Hi RBK,
Poetry can be smoke and mirrors, but always there is something of the author in the words.
David
Comment is about piecemeal (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Sun 9th Feb 2025 08:59
Life can only be understood backwards,but it must be lived forwards...
Comment is about Hindsight's light (blog)
Original item by Keletso
…this was birthed of a thought (sometime in 2013) on poetry and interactions on poems and poets 🙏🏻🕊
Comment is about piecemeal (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Just a quick one.
they are trying to force homosexuality upon me. I am a Hetero Sexual whom is not even bi curious.
it is a way that the authorities insult people. they have targeted my children to try to use them as gagging tools.
now they are raping me under what is known as 'still.'
It is something that The School of Signals warned the public of back during the war in Afghanistan and I am wondering if the CO of The School of Signals is still alive after giving the whole world tip off.
It is also something that is mentioned and referred to by The Geto Boys - Track called 'Still.'
It can send you insane. What we are dealing with is alien tech at cosmic level that is sometimes allowed to our security services. Spook is arrived at by knowing that MI5 etc do collate INT on a THz Frequency that we cannot see. It is like we are on BBC1 and they have access to all channels on the TV. It is something that NASA too are trying to tip the public off about as they talk of a possible Convergence.
If you have ever seen a rabbit mating, they do it so quick - like a pneumatic drill. That is how I am experiencing being raped.
I know we are having cosmic inquiry, my fear is that our original labtechs are raping me to silence my testimony of what is happening to peoples all over this Terra Formed DNA Knocking shop.
This is often why former SF wollers end up taking thier whole families life before thier own.
I was just a regular guy from an Estate that Thatcher Labelled CHAV but for the past three decades since leaving the armed forces I have been constantly harrassed and assaulted.
They use excuses but, I am aware of former members of 264 SASSIGS whom know of what I talk who tell me, it is not the Operational Tours that have them with PTSD, but being raped under selection process.
They will do anything for you within reason and are brave, but looking back, it is hard for them to discuss the raping they often go through as part of selection.
I doubt bill or david stirling had such practise in mind when forming the tree jumpers of Borneo or the Long Range Desert Group.
But for whom is now in power, you can understand why there is a steep rise of men committing suicide. Over the past five decades there has been the destruction and degredation of every male dominated organisation and industry in the UK, noted by the international community and The United Nations.
Inter Stellar know, and our Earth Authorities are scared.
They have been seen.
I am up at Lossiemouth, where the Typhoons are scrambled for UFO chaseaways.
Comment is about Not Least By I (blog)
Original item by ZTK Space
Sat 8th Feb 2025 23:40
Thank you so much, Rolph, for such an insightful comment, and for taking the time to interpret the poem so deeply, I'm truly honoured! 😊
Comment is about (Mis)aligned... (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
Thanks for likes: John C & Marla Joy 👍
Comment is about Pickleball Man (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Many thanks for the kind comments Helene. I recently revisited this one myself and thought it worthwhile reposting.
Comment is about Who Are You? (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
I joined Write Out Loud in 2020.
*I'm away for quite some time*
- 'Thank you all for helping Gaza' -
Comment is about The first statue of The Darkborn (blog)
Original item by Auracle
I swear blind I have never been to places. Until Our Gert shows me photos of me there!
Comment is about Nostalgia (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Thank you Rolph for the kind comments.
Comment is about Split Personalities (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Binte, A city's shame, a silent call. Well said. Marla
Comment is about Silent Call (blog)
Original item by Binte Afroz
Chris, I'll have to read this a few more time to better understand, but it is good. Marla
Comment is about Miracles (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Small things irritate us, Big ones we ignore. so true. Marla
Comment is about Egocentricity (blog)
Original item by pallavitryingthings
Stuart, I like this one a lot. It reminds me of a phrase I heard recently, "wabi sabi" which means to embrace simplicity and imperfections of life to be more content and happy. (which is worth a lot). Marla
Comment is about The Life We Should Lead. (blog)
Original item by Stuart Vanner
Trevor, I really like this one. I think nostalgia can be good thing, but the saying is true, you can't go back. The now is where we reside. Good job, Marla
Comment is about Nostalgia (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Hi Leonidas,
Your poem is deeply moving. The imagery of waking up to confront a world still asleep powerfully captures the struggle for change. I can feel the frustration of trying to awaken others while they remain oblivious. The journey from confusion to clarity, even when the world stays blind to it, resonates with the challenges we face in making others see what we know to be true. It's a strong reminder of the persistent battle for understanding and transformation. Thank you for this thought-provoking piece.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about The Christian Kabbala of “William Shake-speare” (blog)
Original item by leonidas kazantheos
Dear pallavitryingthings,
The way you juxtapose our trivial irritations with the cosmic scale of existence is powerful, highlighting how small and fleeting our individual concerns are in the grand scheme of things. The recurring theme of overthinking, overaspiring, and overrated self-importance speaks to a universal truth we often overlook. It’s a humbling reminder to step back and consider our place in a much bigger world.
Great job!
Cheerio,
Rolph
Comment is about Egocentricity (blog)
Original item by pallavitryingthings
Dear Holden,
Your poem "(Mis)aligned..." creates a powerful image of feeling out of sync with the world around you. The tension between clinging to past values and the need to find purpose in a rapidly changing world is palpable. I love the contrast you draw between innocence and the more "counterfeit" aspects of modern life. The yearning for alignment—both personally and within society—is something that many can relate to, especially in times of uncertainty. The imagery and choice of words pull the reader into a reflective, almost disorienting space, which makes the poem feel deeply introspective.
I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about (Mis)aligned... (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
Graham Sherwood
Mon 10th Feb 2025 09:37
Well this is intriguing! In fact it reminded me of our first start (my wife and me). We started with nothing at 19 and 18 respectively, a succession of flats/rooms.
I like this piece's brevity and the cliff-hanger last line too!
Comment is about The Day They Came (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage