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Return to Waterloo (edited)

Return to Waterloo

These once children chiselled on a bench – 
holding hands. A July southern seafront.
They are hostages to screeching pushchairs,
feral dogs, styrofoamed fish and fresh doughnuts.

Aged now and rugged up against theremin winds  
they are a poet’s monument to displacement. 
Lost within the century of being misunderstood
with its unreliable narrations of self-assessments.

An ancient seagull swoops falsetto.
Not searching for chips or prophylactics,
but filming the soft end of existence. 

All eyes beaded on promises. 

A return to Waterloo.

“I’m sorry, Terry. 
It was the mistake of my life!”

“Did you need him, Julie?”

"No, just his money 
and his silly dreams. 
I was a fool. 
Do your coat up,
it’s getting chilly. 
Here, I’ll help you.”

“Thank you, Puffin.”

“God. You remember that! 
What a silly thing.”

“You used to call me pudding."

“Such childish names for each other.”

“We were inseparable.”

“It was sixty years ago.”

“Yes.”

The found couple shuffle through.
Orphans to the storm of tomorrow,
the day after, and the day after that.
The rain comes, they clinch each other.
The pitter patter of a five o’clock dénouement.

“This is my bus, Terry.”

“Oh.”

“It’s been super seeing you, 
after all this time.
Thank heavens for Facebook.”

“I miss you, puffin.”

“Don’t cry, Terry please.
We shouldn’t behave like this."

"Why?"

"We are old!"

“Please let me come with you.
I only have this heart.”

“Just memories, Terry. 
That’s all.”

“Please!”

Julie gives a sigh that only means love.
She takes off her glasses, 

wipes the years.

“Ohh. Come on then. 
You big, delicious pudding.”

The exhausted seagull takes flight with faith
as the bus tyres spray the kerb with possibilities.

A fleshed sun breaks open the streets. 
The tenderness of the season
rising in heat to a new sunset.

To their unfinished sonnet?

 

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 10th Feb 2025 08:54

A tender, heartwarming poem, Ralph. Thank you.

Rolph David

Sat 8th Feb 2025 15:41

Hi Ralph,
What a great poetic reflection on love, loss, and the quiet joy and pain of revisiting past relationships.
Its emotional depth and rich, nostalgic imagery make it a compelling exploration of the human experience across time.
Thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Rolph

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 7th Feb 2025 10:16

So many good words in this!

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