Anchored to anachronisms,
Unnerved by the footfall
Of antiquity, wavering
Before the wink
Of posterity, clinging
To an infantile innocence
As compass through
The maze of counterfeit
Embraces, pleading
For alignment of era,
Purpose, honesty
On faces...
Sat 8th Feb 2025 16:27
Dear Holden,
Your poem "(Mis)aligned..." creates a powerful image of feeling out of sync with the world around you. The tension between clinging to past values and the need to find purpose in a rapidly changing world is palpable. I love the contrast you draw between innocence and the more "counterfeit" aspects of modern life. The yearning for alignment—both personally and within society—is something that many can relate to, especially in times of uncertainty. The imagery and choice of words pull the reader into a reflective, almost disorienting space, which makes the poem feel deeply introspective.
I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Rolph
Mon 3rd Feb 2025 17:34
Thank you so much, Stephen and Flyntland, for your kind and thoughtful comments, I'm truly grateful! 😊💖
"As compass through
the maze of counterfeit
embraces.
I hate todays lack of dignity and shallow friendships.
I was born during a time when we did not keep touching each other - and we were not expected to keep grinning at everyone all of the time. I hate being hugged and kissed for no reason.
But your poem is so much more than that and I love it.
'Clinging to an infantile innocence' sums up so many modern social pursuits, Holden. Thanks for this.
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Holden Moncrieff
Sat 8th Feb 2025 23:40
Thank you so much, Rolph, for such an insightful comment, and for taking the time to interpret the poem so deeply, I'm truly honoured! 😊