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kJ Walker

Sat 27th Feb 2021 07:40

You're still a king.
But not necessarily of the same kingdom.

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kJ Walker

Sat 27th Feb 2021 07:32

One of your very best Jason.
Definitely a keeper.

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Nazia Khan

Sat 27th Feb 2021 03:25

You are an art ???

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 27th Feb 2021 02:45

Thanks for reading Your Royal Poetess. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Love your pen name!

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John Marks

Sat 27th Feb 2021 00:06

Grazie mille Jennifer. Spero che tu stia bene. Il tempo è lento.

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jennifer Malden

Fri 26th Feb 2021 23:20

Fantastic story-telling, all three episodes. jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Fri 26th Feb 2021 23:06

Thanks Stephen G, Stephen A, KJ and Royal Princess, for the likes.

Jennifer

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 26th Feb 2021 22:48

Thanks Chelsea, that's one of the most heartwarming and the most touching comments I've ever read, it's really put a smile on my face, to the extent that even if no-one else had liked it or said anything about it, I wouldn't have cared (Although I'm glad they did ?), but it would have been worth it just to read your comment and hear your memories. All things eventually pass, but as a very wise person once said, "Don’t cry because it’s gone, smile because it happened." ❤❤❤

J. x

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John Coopey

Fri 26th Feb 2021 22:44

Thankyou for the Likes, Jordyn, Aviva, Stephen and MC.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 26th Feb 2021 19:34

Thank you MC for commenting, there was much to think about, I'd say that fear is more a recognition of trouble rather than a way of avoiding it, but that's just because I separate the emotion of fear and the 'reactive action' to fear as two separate things - even the emotion of fear can be a false alarm that might be caused by previous or current misunderstandings. Bundled together, the emotion of fear and it's reactive action, I wish that fear really were a way to avoid trouble except human history suggests otherwise and that's because of the choice of 'reactive action' often being unwise despite humanity's capacity to reason (I think a better jury than I would need to decide whether the broader category of 'other animals' are more or less reason-bound than the narrow 'human animal' category). All words are merely human definitions, by definition, and I think other animals do share the definition of fear, they just might be afraid of different things or show it differently. So oddly enough since we disagree on quite a bit of the nuances, we both agree that application of reason makes all the difference and is quite essential for a good outcome where fear is involved.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 26th Feb 2021 18:21

There are so many fabulous lines in this, but my favourite lines are:

Two-dimensional people of today,
snapped and shot, could not stand in his heart.

and

Survivors file past departed windows
no more than wounds now, black holes.

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Mike McPeek

Fri 26th Feb 2021 17:13

Thanks Stephen and YRP! I wasn't sure about the last stanza, as the "wolves at the door" phrase is a bit of a cliché metaphor. I tried several variations, but kept coming back the original. Just seemed to work best.

Best
Mike

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 26th Feb 2021 16:44

Thank you for all the likes on my poems, I really enjoyed reading yours ?

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Chelsea Crossman

Fri 26th Feb 2021 16:11

Jason, this is beautiful.
This captures something everyday me can connect to, everyone can relate to and everyone can hold on to.
My mother always said “this too shall pass” as a child they became simple words because she often said them but she was never wrong. It’s important to remember that while your here you worries are fleeting and the time you devote to freedoms the more time you’ll have. Thank you for a stroll down memory lane with my mother

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Chelsea Crossman

Fri 26th Feb 2021 16:11

Jason, this is beautiful.
This captures something everyday me can connect to, everyone can relate to and everyone can hold on to.
My mother always said “this too shall pass” as a child they became simple words because she often said them but she was never wrong. It’s important to remember that while your here you worries are fleeting and the time you devote to freedoms the more time you’ll have. Thank you for a stroll down memory lane with my mother

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 26th Feb 2021 15:43

Droll comes to mind. Simple truth too! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 26th Feb 2021 15:32

I tend to think of fear as nature's way of avoiding trouble. All visible
life forms seem to demonstrate its manifestation in action. After all,
isn't the word itself merely a human definition that other animals
do not share, let alone comprehend except via instinctive response
to perceived threat of whatever sort?. Humanity has the advantage of reason and can gainfully employ it to overcome the relative threat according to circumstance.

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Michael Kwack

Fri 26th Feb 2021 15:30

Adam, Jordyn, Stephen (Gospage), Stephen (Atkinson), Aviva,
Thank you all for the likes on my Résumé which is dull and absurd. --M.K.

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Michael Kwack

Fri 26th Feb 2021 15:23

Thank you Stephen, Hope, Holden for your liking my letter to spring which can be a letter to you, too. Have a wonderful springtime 2021. --M.K.

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 26th Feb 2021 13:32

In memory of Trayvon Benjamin Martin - 5th February 1995 to 26th February 2012 ?♥️

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Dewald

Fri 26th Feb 2021 13:22

Hi Aviva

True, no debate there, but since it is a poem, I will get away with the expression of an emotion.

Perhaps underlying here is that many times in life you here the notion that one person is more in love with the other one. Or, like in the movies, the one would say that he or she got “enough love for both of them.” ?

We can, therefore, argue that the one partner is expressing more or less love, and even that is not wrong, since we all different people expressing love in different ways. Where there are different expression levels, one can always appreciate it hence the poem speaks to the fact.

I am a true believer that Love is an expression.... in need of an answer. No one can love another person in isolation.

So, in the final analysis, I think what the poem is trying to say is that where both partners are equally passionately in love with each other, one can feel the magic ?

But it still stay just words on paper, born from an emotion that appreciates that thing we call LOVE.

~D~

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 26th Feb 2021 12:26

Thank you Hope Ray for your comment and support.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Nazia Khan

Fri 26th Feb 2021 06:42

Oh my God thank uh for commenting
Thank uh so much ??????????

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 26th Feb 2021 06:37

Ah, the unexpected heights of love!

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Fri 26th Feb 2021 06:34

A wise decision. Thanks for enlightenment. ?

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julie callaghan

Fri 26th Feb 2021 06:27

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julie callaghan

Fri 26th Feb 2021 06:23

Thank you for the likes Aviva, Hope and Stephen A.
Thanks also for the comments Hope and Aviva.

Aviva, apologies I was referring to the news story bringing a tear or two. I could never guarantee my writes would spark such emotion. I can’t believe I missed this story from back in December. The picture reminded me of the end of a Pixar movie, never a dry eye moment ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 26th Feb 2021 05:28

Fork Handles? Sorry, we're out of stock of those until Tuesday.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 26th Feb 2021 02:48

Thank you, Stephen A., Stephen G., and Holden for your likes.

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Fri 26th Feb 2021 02:33

May the true friends be loyal and honest forever. May their pain subsides and May both of them find their true love partners from earth till eternal life.

A cute poem.?

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Fri 26th Feb 2021 02:25

Good thought and advise.?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 26th Feb 2021 02:14

Beautiful poem with perfect song!

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Nigel Astell

Fri 26th Feb 2021 01:20

Sexy eager Zombies
tune your rhubarb guitar
play you at cards
then have you for supper.

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Luis Francisco Hernandez Martin

Fri 26th Feb 2021 00:25

Muchas gracias Keith, si ahora mediante internet puedes tener el cine en tu casa

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Luis Francisco Hernandez Martin

Fri 26th Feb 2021 00:24

gracias Keith

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Luis Francisco Hernandez Martin

Fri 26th Feb 2021 00:23

muchas gracias Keith por tus palabras

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 25th Feb 2021 19:39

lovely poem but I need my money back for the guarantee...
luckily it was a free poem so that money back won't buy me much.

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julie callaghan

Thu 25th Feb 2021 18:30

Thanks for the comment and like Stephen G, also for the likes Aviva and Holden.

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Andy N

Thu 25th Feb 2021 18:20

Thanks Nazia for the like too. (:

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keith jeffries

Thu 25th Feb 2021 18:08

Great rhyming and true to boot.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 25th Feb 2021 18:06

Esta poesia es verdad y mas interesantes. Ahora el cine es en mi casa con muchas canales y peliculas. Yo no necesito ir a el cine. El cine es demasiado caro. La casa es mas comodo.
Gracias
Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 25th Feb 2021 17:58

Me gusta muchisimo y gracias
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 25th Feb 2021 17:37

Yes. It is so strong and direct.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 25th Feb 2021 17:13

Thank you, Julie. Yes, it is something to look forward to, although there may be the odd bump in the road.

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Thu 25th Feb 2021 15:50

Thank's be for Springs always fulfilled promises, Keith. My floral hero's, are the snowdrops, always first in line, with their heartwarming appearances no matter how grim the days are.

Lovely poem KJ!



Rose ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Thu 25th Feb 2021 14:28

Artwork by: Mario Sanchez Nevado ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 25th Feb 2021 12:47

I don't really understand this, all types of love are magical.
In fact, come to think of it, absolutely everything is magical.

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julie callaghan

Thu 25th Feb 2021 06:47

Thanks for the likes folks.

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d.knape

Thu 25th Feb 2021 03:43

good advice M.C.
women give advice although unsolicited.
men give advice although most of the time it's wrong.
?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Thu 25th Feb 2021 01:52

(Smiling) Yes, Aviva
Poems and tea
are good for me and thee.

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