Delightful and at the same time heart wrenching.
We should all remember that all wounded birds have the right to fly away once healed!
Well done Manish.
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Many thanks for the recent likes, much appreciated.
David
Comment is about Seventeen Moments of Spring (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thank you for generous comment, Manish. Auracle - yes, infinite consumption will clash with the finite planet. Perhaps it already has! I'm aware that a poem is better at indentifying a problem than finding a solution!
And my thanks to Graham, Hugh, Stephen A, Holden, Tim, David, Bethany and Rob for liking.
Comment is about Devil (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thank you, Holden. I imagine that many things will come cheap at this particular juncture, or maybe I'm wrong. Good poem.
Comment is about In memoriam... (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
A good message, John. I went through this some years ago, although having been first tested at 50, I sorta knew it was coming. I was constantly described as a 'young patient'. A lot better now.
Comment is about ENLARGED PROSTATE BLUES (blog)
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Thank you, my friend. It means a lot to me.π
Comment is about Sacred Saussurea (blog)
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Nicely written, Bethany. Great in its imagery, and evocative.
Comment is about Of a meltdown (blog)
Original item by Bethany Sallis
Wow. This is brilliantly written, Tim. Deep and evocative. I loved it!
Comment is about The Uninvited Stranger (blog)
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God forbid any of you guys contracting this horrific disease.
Thanks to, Hugh, Holden, Manish, Tim, rob.
( note change of title? )
Bethany
Comment is about Cranial wintering (blog)
Original item by Bethany Sallis
you're welcome. still a very talented poet & writer on this website, mr. Stephen Atkinson π
Comment is about A Beautiful, Dreamy Poetry Day MASSACRE! (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
makes me laugh. ignorance I suppose π
Comment is about In memoriam... (blog)
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Sun 24th Mar 2024 23:21
There is something almost magical gently easing through the lines. Nicely as usual, Manish
Comment is about Sacred Saussurea (blog)
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I appreciate the creative forms that explore unknown territory.
Well done!
Comment is about A Brand-New Thought (blog)
Original item by Tim Higbee
Thank you, Stephen, & Auracle!
And for the likes everyone π
Comment is about A Beautiful, Dreamy Poetry Day MASSACRE! (blog)
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Thankyou, MC. I understand that prostate cancer is one of the most treatable types provided itβs caught early enough. Yet so many men seem reluctant to get tested. And thanks for the Likes, Holden, Stephen and Paige.
Comment is about ENLARGED PROSTATE BLUES (blog)
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Thanks for likes Holden and Hugh.
Yes,
Stephen, I couldn't recommend the Stars and Stripes but our local one in Sainsbury's has re opened and bucked its ideas up and the coffee seems to have improved - I hope it's not the virus kicking in!
Penguin you do me more than justice ! It's a strange device to conjoin two words that don't really make logical sense, but seem to work in the poetry framework, thanks.
Yes David there is an irksome quality to the process of standing waiting, probably no worse than being a frustrated motorist - it's a horrible facet of unreal expectation. I remember being in Abbey National once for ages and on reaching the hatch asked if they did bed and breakfast. Went down like a lead balloon of course. I really like the Nero coffee but sadly on this occasion there was a big problem on board, I'll go back, just a blip! Re the brackets it was a sort of an additional thought which I think would not have scanned too well if not separated - like an aside I suppose. Maybe "I thought was a man" would have been neater, but it's not my usual trait!
John, I'm no expert in the taste zones of the north, but probably no demarcation on the global brand in local terms.
Sadly our local Costa has definitely watered down the brew so it seems, less coffee same price hovering around the Β£3.50 mark. We've got a bookshop who do great coffee, so there!
Graham, you are an unashamed connoisseur on the matter apparently and who am I to interfere with that? In my dim memory bank there are strong coffee and brandy moments and never finer than when thus mustered.
Ray
Comment is about LOCAL NERO (blog)
Original item by ray pool
John/Manish/Holden and Hugh - thank you for the "likes".
In fairness, I certainly appreciated being paid for my various
published poems but I have spent far more in self-pubilshing
and contributing to the liks of WOL and suspect the existence
of a self-propagating world in which the aim is to obtain large
sums from the public purse in pursuance of a certain type of
poetical product via competitions and campaigns in various names that see a paucity of verse in evidence.
Comment is about WORLD POETRY DAY (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
An original rendition (shades of "Muddy Waters"π) that sings
soulfully of a nuisance condition that plagues mainly older men.
No medical reason has been discovered for its emergence and
it affects its victims to varying degrees. It is certainly to be
given attention but it is not necessarily linked to cancer. I've
been on the medical merry-go-round for years after my then
GP thought my PSA reading required urology attention. I was
told it was unlikely I had cancer but that was merely the
prelude to being kept in the "maybe it might be" syndrome.
DIET is worth mentioning ,with foods like tomatoes, broccoli,
pomegranate and turmeric possessing qualities that are
said to be good for the prostate, along with olive oil as a very
useful "lubricant" for the body and its circulation in general.
Moral: Eat wisely - live heathily...and keep everything moving!
π Good luck!.
Comment is about ENLARGED PROSTATE BLUES (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Sun 24th Mar 2024 16:31
Auracle, thank you so much, I feel truly humbled by your words, you are extremely kind! ππ
Comment is about Unrehearsed (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
A superb poem, Stephen, as always. The title, and the first line is so true.
Comment is about Devil (blog)
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Thanks a lot Stephen G and Bethany, it means a lot to me.π
Comment is about Sacred Saussurea (blog)
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A big thank you to the people who gave me a like. Love.
Comment is about does love need more words? (blog)
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Infinite consumption of a finite planet seems to be self-destructive π
Human rights organizations have destroyed the one-child policy, didn't they?
Then what are the other options left?
Comment is about Devil (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Reading this poem is one more reason to continue on living.
I have survived for so long already. I might as well continue. Why not?
Then you continue to inspire me, Holden Moncrieff
Comment is about Unrehearsed (blog)
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Kindly reveal your identity. The critic must be open and clear in communicating his or her opinion.
I respect the difference in opinion and perspectives.
Comment is about Acamas (poet profile)
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I think I take your point about moving forward, David.
Maybe analogies about the physics of the universe would serve us better if we could actually take a universal view of history, which doesn't really seem possible.
Thanks for your thoughtful contributions...
Comment is about War Poet (blog)
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Paul Holloway
Sun 24th Mar 2024 01:51
Wonderful. I remember Armadillo Sherry, and taking a bottle to the village supermarket to get it filled up. Rough stuff, but strong, and cheap, as your ode points out.
Comment is about Armadillo... Draught British Sherry (blog)
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Thanks folks one does ones best π
Comment is about Duping the duper (blog)
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Oh my word Leon, this such a superb and ever so well written poem. Thank you,
Comment is about Duping the duper (blog)
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And I totally agree with Stephen. Thank you Manish.
Bethany
Comment is about Sacred Saussurea (blog)
Original item by Manish
Great comments fellas, and a wonderful supply of likes, from,
Hugh, Stephen, Aisha, Holden, Manish, rob, and Leon.
All for which I am extremely grateful.
Bethany
Comment is about Entities part two (blog)
Original item by Bethany Sallis
Give me the coffee that the locals drink in France anytime over these over-priced milky warm examples.
Tradition, Grand Mere, Maison Cafe, bought by the kilo in solid slabs. Perfect!! As for customer service Ray! you've nailed it!
G
Comment is about LOCAL NERO (blog)
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Thank you Stephen and M.C. Newberry for taking time to comment and bang on truths from both of you .. cheers
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Thank you for reading and the kind comments...much appreciated.
Comment is about The Homeless People of Liverpool (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
I confess to being a Costa customer, Ray, although I would always use local coffee cafes in preference which are sometimes better and sometimes worse. Starbucks is like mazzy watter.
Comment is about LOCAL NERO (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Hi Ray
A good example of our sometimes needlessly hurried days.
I'm curious why you would retain the text included in brackets. It might endear you to a particular reader whereas it just might lose you others, just a thought.
As chains go Nero is one of the better ones, I think.
David
Comment is about LOCAL NERO (blog)
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Thank you stephen. This means alot to me. Love.
Comment is about time and space. (blog)
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A nice progression in, and conclusion to, this, Manish.
Comment is about Sacred Saussurea (blog)
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Comment is about Orange Coral (blog)
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Indeed, MC. And thanks for the Likes, Stephen, Holden, John and Leon.
Comment is about INTERNATIONAL BUGGER ALL DAY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Longest poem I have read here on Write Out Loud.
Comment is about The Thief of Breath and Hugs (part 1) (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
I love massacrART
Comment is about A Beautiful, Dreamy Poetry Day MASSACRE! (blog)
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You see, I should have worshiped this poem a long time ago.
You see, it's never too late!
You see, brilliancy!
Comment is about Declan the miser (blog)
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Thank you for reading and liking my poetry.
Comment is about Life (Poem) (blog)
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samu mini
Fri 22nd Mar 2024 20:03
I want to participate in this event.
Comment is about Away from home, just round the corner: New York's Nuyorican poetry slams at The Bowery (article)
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Many thanks John Stephen and rob π
Comment is about Duping the duper (blog)
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Ghazala lari
Mon 25th Mar 2024 10:31
Indeed a painful poem. But beautifully expressed.
Happy Holi brother.
Comment is about Duet (blog)
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