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julie callaghan

Sun 19th Dec 2021 11:54

Thanks for the likes for my silly write.

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John Botterill

Sun 19th Dec 2021 10:51

You are very welcome Stephen. πŸ˜€
John

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John Botterill

Sun 19th Dec 2021 09:28

I agree with MCs comments. A fine poem which mirrors my own experience dk. I must reflect upon that.

I have.

It hurts.

John the Alien πŸ˜€

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Sun 19th Dec 2021 08:44

Hugh I've just had a quick word with Boris who says that, heartfelt as your piece is, he won't be following your advice.

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clyde McCulley

Sat 18th Dec 2021 20:53

Thank you, I will be listening!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 20:21

Hugh and Holden - thanks for the "likes". Compliments of the
Season to you.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 20:13

Stephen - It's my contribution to the genre of Christmas hymns
= not quite happy-clappy style, but meant to lift the spirits in a
mixture of modern and traditional! Thanks for the comment.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 18th Dec 2021 16:59

A thoughtful and interesting poem, Keith. I believe that human beings are basically decent. It's just circumstances and the temptation of easy solutions which drag society down sometimes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 18th Dec 2021 16:53

A joyful verse with lovely tight rhyming, MC. Really enjoyed it.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 15:30

Banging our own drum certainly has its place in the context of
world history - with the emphasis on "world". Has there ever
been an empire that has achieved so much and handed it back
- adorned by the benefit of law, science and democratic government? This despite (or perhaps because of) our own centuries of internal conflict and bloodshed that obtained our
mental awareness of the cost of the necessity for finding a
way for our peoples across the UK to achieve a successful harmony of respect, recognition of other values and the common ground that saw us become a beacon for many
in the world...past, present (check that out!!!) and no doubt in the future. But our first duty is to look to ourselves again if we
are to be able to look to helping others in this rapidly evolving
era of world affairs. Everything in existence has a breaking
point and heaven forbid that we exceed our own and descend
into the chaos of disappointed expectations. .

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clyde McCulley

Sat 18th Dec 2021 15:18

You are so correct, M.C.
I could hardly sleep on Christmas Eve, it was so magical.
I am glad the poem made this impact on you. Merry Christmas!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 15:11

An enjoyable and educational analogy with life itself. Have you
noticed how the brightest can fail when facing the basics of
life's demands and obligations as they move through this existence of ours? It's almost as if we can sometimes be overqualified in what we set ourselves and to fail when it really matters. Politicians seem adept at this!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 15:00

We happily greet
The glad upbeat
In this verse
As things get worse! πŸ‘

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Dec 2021 14:55

Kevin - glad you enjoyed it. Your comments encouraged me to
realise I'd missed a verse in this posting,,,now corrected here. πŸ‘

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Joe Williams

Sat 18th Dec 2021 13:55

I wrote this one a few weeks ago. It feels like it has a different meaning to it now.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 18th Dec 2021 12:54

Nothing wrong with sentimentality. Even us 'woke' 'snobs' recognise that it has a time and place. Dickens wrote A Christmas Carol to bring home the evils of mid-Victorian poverty. We could do with an updated version today.

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John Botterill

Sat 18th Dec 2021 11:34

I loved the lines
In the glass of the parting doors
I watch myself get torn in two
Very accomplished, Tom.
I admire your skill!
John Botterill

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 18th Dec 2021 10:02

Hi Clyde! Just to let you know that your poem will be featured on my show this Sunday after 4pm GMT on Allfm.org if you want to listen. Thanks a million for taking part ☺

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d.knape

Sat 18th Dec 2021 00:39

not exactly the Sage I was talking about
haha

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d.knape

Sat 18th Dec 2021 00:36

Amazing?

You were forced into reading.
Now you will never be the same!
πŸ˜ƒ

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:33

Ah...the power of childhood dreams and expectations. I was
transported back down the decades to my own childhood and
the excitement of waking on Christmas morning (having hardly
slept!) to see what Santa had left at the end of my bed.. Those dreams and expectations never quite go away, do they? πŸŽ„

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John Marks

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:30

Exactly right Mark. Intellectual and social and cultural snobbery - pure and simple. By-the-way, a very happy Christmas to you and to yours. John

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<Deleted User> (30611)

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:17

Have you been talking to a certain Mr Coopey Julie?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:17

There can be a certain snobbery towards what is often derided
as "sentimentality". It smacks of a want of humanity that I find
repugnant.

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John Botterill

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:16

Awesome imagery, Tom Very touching and unnerving for the reader.
John Botterill

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Russell DuPont

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:14

I’ll make a larger file and replace it.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:11

Connecting and healing. A grand combination.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Dec 2021 23:04

KT - thanks for the one word very acceptable appreciation.
Ditto your earlier comment about "Thoughts At Christmas!.
JC/SA - M,y PC has problems (or rather I do perhaps) uploading
the musical version this time - but, like "Christmas Snow", it
can be listened to via its listing under "audio" entries on my
WOL profile page. Give it (them?) a try. πŸ˜‡

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julie callaghan

Fri 17th Dec 2021 21:37

Thanks for the messages Keith snd a Stephen G. Difficult decisions to be made on the run up to Xmas. Let’s hope the figures show it’s a much milder variant very soon. Thanks also for the likes. A more cheery, just for fun poem posted.

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keith jeffries

Fri 17th Dec 2021 21:33

Stephen and Gail,
thank you. I believe this to be true. We are good and decent folk no matter what others may say. I personally hold firm to this.
Thank you both
Keith

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John Coopey

Fri 17th Dec 2021 20:41

It may have been within the rules or not, John. I’m not competent to judge. But it was plainly naturally unjust to eliminate an 11 second lead to nothing.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 17th Dec 2021 19:10

Taut & Joyful M.C. I'm definitely singing from that hymn sheet.
And like John says, where's the audio? My headphones are at the ready πŸ˜‰

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 17th Dec 2021 19:05

Eloquently written & like John, I still believe!

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 17th Dec 2021 19:02

Wonderful writing, about an all too familiar subject these days, Tom.

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John Botterill

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:58

Very powerful John and funny, if it wasn't all so damned unfair!
John Botterill

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John Botterill

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:52

Beautiful, elegant and true. At least, I want to believe that it is. Thanks Keith.
John Botterill

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John Botterill

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:49

I felt identified immediately with the sage, dk. Very clever, as usual! 😊
John Botterill

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John Botterill

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:44

Very amusing dkπŸ˜€
John Botterill

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keith jeffries

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:24

Mike,
Poems of clouds and trees are very special to me as they speak of a living world which often may seem dead. As you say in the final stanza God didn't design them to stand still nor us also. A world which comes and goes, of changing seasons and moods.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 17th Dec 2021 18:18

Russell,
The print is difficult to make out as it is too small. Could you re post on a larger scale.
Thanks
Keith

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raypool

Fri 17th Dec 2021 17:53

Thanks Mark. Yes indeed the food aspect is a highly contentious one, offering the alternative of buy by and sell by. The best option is to say by bye and in the bin, but at what cost?!

I recall that Clement Freud had on his gravestone: best before (and then the date) !

Thanks John, Stephen and Holden for the additional likes. Aythangyow.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 17th Dec 2021 17:48

A great metaphor is struck here Tom. So many ideas that carry the imagery into the human predicament, and a highly accomplished use of language to convey that. Good to read your work. It does feel like the voice of experience !

Ray

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John Coopey

Fri 17th Dec 2021 17:32

Technically difficult in such a tight form, MC. You capture the spirit of a Christmas hymn wonderfully. Where's the audio, though?

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John Coopey

Fri 17th Dec 2021 17:28

Thanks for your further thoughts, MC and Stephen.
And thanks for the Like, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 17th Dec 2021 16:20

Very fine response to a sad situation, Julie. Although case numbers are currently dropping in Belgium, Omicron is around and it seems only a matter of time before they start going up again.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 17th Dec 2021 16:17

I like this, John, and the analogy is very much to the point. I seem to remember a cup tie many years ago where a team was leading four or five nil when the game was abandoned due to bad weather. When it was replayed, they lost. Funny old sport, motor racing, especially all these guys in baseball caps who seem to be playing space invaders during racing, not to mention all that wasted Champagne.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 17th Dec 2021 16:05

Thank you, John. The 'brief history' idea had not occured to me, so many thanks for this comment. Perhaps I will change the title! It seems so right.

And thank you to Branwell, Stephen, Brenda, Holden and John for liking this poem.

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Tom

Fri 17th Dec 2021 15:26

Thanks Keith. Habit is a trap and it's so easy to get stuck. Recognising the tricks you use to justify these behaviours to yourself is a good place to begin in breaking out of them. A new year's resolution, of sorts. Thanks for reading.

And thanks to Jordyn, John, Keith, Holden, Stephen, Stephen and John for reading and liking. Much appreciated.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 17th Dec 2021 14:59

A fitting comment on the situation and a reminder that, truly,
rules are for the obedience of fools and the guidance of wise
men! By the way, citing football as an example, I've a healthy suspicion about the efficacy of foreign officials when recalling Maradona's "handy" allowed goal and Frank Lampard's disallowed goal in another international event - in both cases obvious to the rest of us watching.

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d.knape

Fri 17th Dec 2021 14:28

I was one of
those riders!

wink.

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