HI, Pete

Sounds like your poem presents walking on memory lane - Memory, imprinted in your mind still alive to this day. Great imagination and good write.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about the long hot summer of 1976 (blog)

HI, Dai ~ quite interesting twists in your poem - I found your writings educational and thought provoking.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Taking his Advice (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello, Tomas

Nice and true write. I hope that all the poems stay preserved for the next generations.
It will be nice to be remembered what writer tried to expose in his/her work!

Thank you for sharing.
Zuzanna

Comment is about Shall Another Read My Words (blog)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hello Dai ~ Great title and the entire write!

I agree it happens that they are here too. I am glad that my sons are older now and the era is over for being a part of the gang...Thought provoking write.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Bastards (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello, Antonio

Do not know how much fiction in your poem and how much you based on truth. To be honest I am allergic to Chlorine and cannot swim at all in the local swimming pools. I do not like swimming either so I agree with you on the subject... Well written!
Now I understand why one of my sons did not like to swim either...Smile

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about I hate swimming (blog)

Hello, Pete

I like your poetry. There are lots said in your poems about the real life in today’s World. You are unique and creative writer. Yes indeed, man is the one who destroys many natural things, like the Rain Forest for just one example...Thought provoking and educational write.

GREAT JOB !

Zuzanna

Comment is about Man the virus (blog)

Hello, Alvin

IMPRESSIVE !

Very profound writing here you exposed the truth what is happening with our World today.
There are many educational and thought provoking lines in your write. I wish you best of luck in the life microphone presentation.

GREAT POEM !

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Earth, Our Mother Earth (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

Hello, Pete

Sounds like a real world for some out there, the needles and drugs all together sooner or latter it is definitely gravely road. Thought provoking, interesting poem!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about One shot at life (blog)

for sure, we will be poeting in the Novel Cafe on Lake Road in Ambleside from 730 on Thursday 8th May, everyone is welcome and again we will be in the Queen Cellar Bar on Sunday from 2ish til 5ish - there will be a poetry competition of sorts on the sunday which is open to all. Also, anyone is welcome to attend Poetic Justice at the Novel on the Thursday. Really hope you can make it. CAtch you there.

Comment is about Mark Underwood (poet profile)

Original item by Mark Underwood

I can't edit out my spelling mistakes. Sorry for them.

Comment is about Death of a Forest (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello Dai.
I like the idea of the last call of the lark.

It made me think hmmm wonder if the lark is really saying he will be back.

Man the virus must change if he is to survive.
Nature will always find a way.
If someon argues we are the next step of evolution I would argue back and say that even in nature there are glitches.

For all our good
for all our fantastic achievements, we let ourselves down for these materiel gains.

To destroy a forest is criminal to our planet.

Dai,

I think nature will strike back.

Well done with this poem

It got me thinking and on a roll.
I'm off to write.
Please
any more eco / animal stuff for me to read?

thanks for your words

Peter

Comment is about Death of a Forest (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hey, Zuzanna

Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, you are right. Trees are being felled and birds are leaving. Sad, very sad!

Comment is about Death of a Forest (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello, Dai

Interesting and mysterious though provoking write;
I like the poem; it shows that there is something there in your area that requires attention.


Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Death of a Forest (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello, Phil

Nice Poem!

"I may be old and dreamy; in my forgotten state

But I still dream of developers before it'd too late"


Enjoyed reading- these last two lines are really giving a reader a lot of to think of.

GREAT JOB!

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Canal, the end? (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

I realy enjoyed this more contemplative poem from you. I'd only previously read and heard you perform work with a harder edge. Thank you for showing a tender heart.

Comment is about The Runaways (blog)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

Hiya Mia, Okay, their looking at me funny here because I have a stupid grin on my face and it's your fault. The whimsical nature of your poems sounds more like something a lad would be writting about, perhaps even funnier because your not. Give us more!

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

An excellent choice from the collection of an exceptional poet. A sensual snapshot which made me sigh and fall back into my own memories.

Comment is about I'd like to live in a French Film (article)

Exceptional work. Smooth flowing imagery with emotion that doesn't overwhelm, delivered in a controlled manner.

Comment is about Gaia Holmes (poet profile)

Original item by Gaia Holmes

A fine choice Helen. This poem is a brilliant example of what i believe 'Poetry' is all about. It has everything. Superb, Gaia. Well done.

Comment is about I'd like to live in a French Film (article)

Gemma your an excellent poet. You are one of the greats and I never get tired of reading them so hurry up and get a book published of them so I can read them all the time

Comment is about Gemma Lees (poet profile)

Original item by Gemma Lees

This poem is lovely it has such feeling well done!

Comment is about Isley (poet profile)

Original item by Isley

Dominic who?!

'Bout time you turned up here!

Can you imagine?... There's people here who have never attended FREED UP!

Just thinking about that sort of thing scares me.

My Favourite Meals - Well, you know what I think of this.

Cheery-bye
Steve

Comment is about Dominic Berry (poet profile)

Original item by Dominic Berry

I interviewed Ben Mellor for a program for channel M at Uni, nice guy, he performed a poem in the studio aswell

Comment is about Ben Mellor's Voices of Descent (blog)

Original item by Dominic Berry

If I was a fruit machine
I'd want you to nudge me
If I was the victor
I'd want you to begrudge me
If I was a poet
I'd want you to judge me
But I'm just a thief
A lyrical gangster
- so just kill me

No but seriously, seriously I think this is my favourite poem on here

Comment is about If I was… (article)

Great poems why though people haven't commented and said as much I will never know perhaps I will start a trend!

Comment is about Katie Sheila Haigh (poet profile)

Original item by Katie Sheila Haigh

Well done Gail your poetry was excellent I enjoyed it very much, hope we see you next month

Comment is about Rod Whitworth at The Old Boar's Head, Middleton April 2008 (photo)

Comment is about Rod Whitworth at The Old Boar's Head, Middleton April 2008 (photo)

Dear Carol

I am thinking of you and will keep you in my prayers. I am sure all will be fine my friend in poetry. Trust the Lord.

With my best wishes!
Zuzanna

Comment is about Carol Falaki (poet profile)

Original item by Carol Falaki

Hello, Shelly

Beautiful ‘Nature escape’ poem- I love the colours of summer and the fall as well.

"The snow covers all that surrounds us
And now we eat nuts and melt ice; but in sorrow
We made love one last time
And then we wrote this
For we know we won't 'be here' tomorrow"

You have ended the poem in a wonderful rhyme, and wrapped in a lot of truth.

I am going to quote this... :)

"Enjoy every moment in life as the next day is not promised to us"

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about The Runaways (blog)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

Mia Darlone - is this an anagram of your name ? 'A random lie' possibly..?

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Mirrored ceiling. Glad you enjoyed my latest offerings - I trust I shall see you in the audience of my play 'Below the Belt' in July?! (Will start some major plugging once venue confirmed). See you at FREED UP.

Comment is about Steve O'Connor (poet profile)

Original item by Steve O'Connor

Once again you've made a happy man very old. No - that's not right - you know what I mean don't you?
Mia - your poetry is laugh out loud funny. When are we going to hear it performed at Wigan? Well, anywhere for that matter.
More from Mia. Brilliant.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Hiya Mia

In work - skiving - and decided to read your new poems...

So glad I did. You've really cheered me up... You've made an old man very happy... Erm... Can we agree that I like your poems in a manner that doesn't make me sound like a perv?

Great. Porn.

F(ine) art's sub-title (Done as a posh bird) made me laugh out loud. And The liver is evil and must be punished reads well off the page, though it'd be worthwhile thinking about putting some audio samples of your work up here - you perform it well too. Both of your poems cover an important area of poetry rarely addressed. Namely - getting pissed; being sick; bad sex and farting. Well done! I'd like to see Larkin write stuff like that - given that he's dead.

And just WHAT are you looking up at in that new photo of yours?!

No. Wait. Don't answer that.

Steve

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Dear Carol

The poem shows that you have quite a lot on your mind at present time. On the other hand, it is just another imaginative write. I found poems sort of release of some thoughts that occupy my mind and the writing brings a feelings of freedom to my busy mind.

Excellent poem!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Crossroads (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

Good Day Antonio

Last Goodbye to Geoffrey, It seems like a little commotion with flowers there but at least you have the successful conclusion cheering for Geoffrey. Sad and thought provoking poem though.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Old Geoffrey (blog)

Hello, Richard

Amazing write this is...Your imagination shines.

Interesting concept somewhat imaginary, dreamy type- Out of body experience, spiritual of some sort. Thought provoking that is sure.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about God and The Giant (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hello, Richard

Thank you for the comment you placed on my poem...Appreciated.

Kind Regards,
.Zuzanna

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hello, Richard

Oh, I do not like Mondays!
I see the dislike in your poem as well. It is hard too get the sleep when relaxing over the weekend. I like the reality poem. Except the line that you were scared not to be awake anymore because of stop breathing, well that is a dark line in your poetry.
The poem is nice.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Sunday Night Blues (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hi Artist,
I really enjoyed this work of yours! Im always one for questioning everything, I have had these same questions, not sure if Ill ever get an honest answer, while alive. Good work!

Comment is about Truth or Lie (blog)

Hello,Artist@Large AnkSteady

Excellent write presented. I know there is a big lie in 911...All has been done to create terror. Well, the truth came out. Thought provoking story;
Thank you for brining this for discussion and comments!

The Truth will be the Victory.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Truth or Lie (blog)

Enjoyed this Shelley, lovely sense of adventure, Jeff

Comment is about The Runaways (blog)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

hey you are good. Enjoyed all your poems and you have great musical taste. Tc Tim

Comment is about Richard Brooks (poet profile)

Original item by Richard Brooks

very thought provoking...it takes courage to question......shouldn't swallow lies...it's bad for your digestion....

i bet this sounds powerful out loud

Shelley D

Comment is about Truth or Lie (blog)

nice one, I can hear a performance in alot of your poems, very amusing!

"In the morning you may regret,
that greasy kebab you ate,
your head in the toilet all day
till that bad kebab has all gone away!
till friday night comes again
9 pints, maybe ten?
pasta will not quench an ibriated stomach!
the bad kebab will cometh!

Comment is about Bad Kebab (blog)

a short poem, I could have made it longer, but this is all that came out and a poem shouldn't be forced I don't think....

Comment is about Gargoyle's (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hi Jeff, thanks. Yes I think we all get there sometimes. I get the feeling I am being driven or taken.
The real choices may seem small but their cosequences are often bigger.
Sat-nav, is just one cause, I'd rather get a bit lost and see what happens. I may even find myself.

Comment is about Crossroads (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

I'm sure we need to hear and read more of your work. You have a real energy when you perform your pieces. Every feeling conveyed. Till the next time... Daniel.

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

Hello, Richard

Thought provoking well written poem.
Very colorful and mysterious.Great read...:)

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Fallen Angel (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

4th one of the day, good stuff, cheers Jeff

Comment is about Fallen Angel (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

I could identify with that Richard. Having just been through a difficult time lately, it meant a lot, thanks Jeff ps - have a look at the blog I put on today - Just Believe

Comment is about Strength (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks