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Man the virus

Man the virus

For all the fantastic achievement’s
For everything super nova discovered
For trying to beat the things covered
By the mystery of life itself

He destroys

Yet he employs such skill
With optimism and blanket deceit
In ways so bad

He-so criminal
He-so sad
Man

And man
Why
Club furry creature?
Why spear the camouflage feature
Of leopard?
Or fell the tree rings of a thousand years
Or pollute the sea things with the salty tears of greed
Spoil indeed he does
This wonderful planet

And evolve he must
Evolve with his carved bust of progress
He who worshiped those before
The Openheimer and the double helix
The seeping pores of progress
The chores of mathematics solved
Nothing that would already evolve
Anyway

and

we Are polluted by him
and god is neither woman nor man
neither critic nor fan
of us

he just sits there
with the patience of four hundred billion years

The world was already perfect.
You have not advanced
The virus strained came enhanced

Specifically for you.

◄ Bad Kebab

the long hot summer of 1976 ►

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Francine

Sun 7th Jun 2009 01:19

So true...

'He destroys

Yet he employs such skill
With optimism and blanket deceit
In ways so bad'

Some things are better left unknown...

<Deleted User> (4281)

Tue 6th May 2008 05:10

Peter!

It is good to be on a mystery site. I love poetry and enjoy reading and commenting. Thank you for the lovely compliment. I do know that all writers like hear a word what others think of their work - comments help… I remember when I joined this site there were just few poets placing comments. Thought this was so sad! ‘Write Out Loud’ site is very nice and it is pure pleasure to be here.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Pete Crompton

Sun 4th May 2008 19:46

Zuzanna!
You always take the time to read through all the poets here! You are the Queen of this land.

Peter

Thanks so much for your encouragement it helps so much I dont know if you know

you are the wonderous one
and a mystery too!
x

<Deleted User> (4281)

Sun 4th May 2008 17:33

Hello, Pete

I like your poetry. There are lots said in your poems about the real life in today’s World. You are unique and creative writer. Yes indeed, man is the one who destroys many natural things, like the Rain Forest for just one example...Thought provoking and educational write.

GREAT JOB !

Zuzanna

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