Hello,Dai

Quite impressive write. Words etched from the Bible into more naughty style...Eh?

Zuzanna

Comment is about What Do I Know? (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hello, Phil

Quite a story here; Loved the way you presented your tale in a form of poetry.
Fantastic Write !

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Disabled of the Round Table (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Hello, Phil

Beautifully penned very romantic poem.
Totally enjoyed your words from your heart.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Love's Internet Shore (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

HI, Antonio

I had to Google the name as there is very little information who this person is...?
Well, I guess to bad for her that this happened.
Your poem is perfect and on time for the mishap.

"Troubled singer Amy Winehouse is not ready to return to work, according to her producer Mark Ronson."

GREAT JOB!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Ain't life a bitch? (blog)

Hello, Jeff

Thank you so much for your kind comments my friend in poetry. You have traveled to Lithuania. It must be a great memory from there. This part of the world is close to me as I have friends from there…‘Memory of Lithuania'...Smile

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

Original item by Jeffarama!

Its rare she isn't dishevelled so she doesn't do much for me, not that I can talk! Like your poem though, nice one! cheers Jeff

Comment is about Ain't life a bitch? (blog)

Absolutely brilliant, very thought provoking take on the earth and yes slavery still rife! Only thing I wasn't sure of was the last word, know what you're saying but was expecting more of a (big) bang at the end. Hope thats constructive Alvin. Anyway, all the best with the performance!!! cheers Jeff

Comment is about Earth, Our Mother Earth (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

True love an ocean apart. Life on t'internet can be harsh when you fall for anothers words. I can associate with this one.... but don't tell the missus!

Comment is about Love's Internet Shore (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

You certainly like your current affairs commentry. I've not decided from this if you paint her as a minger or a pin up in your eyes.

Comment is about Ain't life a bitch? (blog)

Hey, Anton

Thanks for reading.

Comment is about Bastards (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

hey, Zuzanna

Thanks for reading.

Comment is about Bastards (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hey, Anton

Thanks for reading.

Comment is about It's Jack! No Doubt About It (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

hey, Danny. I'll have two for you!

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

hi, Clarissa

Nice to see you again. Thanks for reading.

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

hey, Zuzanna

Thanks again for reading me!

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Thanks all. I'm busy rehearsing so that i don't have to read it from the page.

Alvin

Comment is about Earth, Our Mother Earth (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

Thank you for the review. The open Mic' night poetry contest sounds great! I will always miss the participation in such superb event, due to the distance and the location where I am. The only thing that I can say it is that you are all fabulous poets and have done great performances. Thank you once again.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna Musial

Comment is about Better Late... By Louise Coulson (article)

ahh shucks mahhhn thank you. err no I cant memorise it. I so so so wish I could. any ideas?

Comment is about Poem from a train (pathetic am I) parts 1 & 2 (blog)

Hi Alvin, very nice poem, good luck!

Comment is about Earth, Our Mother Earth (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

hey, Danny. Thanks for commenting. I hope your fig leaf is big enough!

Comment is about What Do I Know? (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

hmmm ... so you were both on a private beach for nudists? Congratulations on taking a chance. I had a grin reading it. Now where did I put my fig leaf?

Comment is about What Do I Know? (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

The wonderful world of performance poetry. It's certainly a different way of writing. I'm quite new to it but recorded some stuff over at myspace (link in the profile). I enjoyed reading through your work and I can certainly see how it would be rewarded when performed live.

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

I bet that comes over strong and loud when spoken over a huge PA system. Go for it. I hope you get the reception the work deserves.

Comment is about Earth, Our Mother Earth (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

Hello, Dai
Great Adventure around the World in 80 Days…A poem - Based on History of Thomas Cook and his discovery from sailing around the World.

Thomas Cook, the Leicester-based pioneer of tourist travel, led his first package tour around the world in 1872, the year in which Phileas Fogg and Passepartout made their own momentous journey. It was the last great challenge facing a man who had begun his business-taking excursionists to Temperance rallies.

Great write!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

HI Paul, glad to have you with us all.
Nice poem!

Comment is about Brink (poet profile)

Original item by Brink

HI Antonio, Nice poem, I read about it in the news, so sad, that so many are always hurt every year by these weather events. Makes me wonder why they dont move inland?

Comment is about A lovely warm spring day (blog)

HI Dai, Cool poem!

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

HI, Antonio

Excellent write, on time too… You have brought to my attention - "Could weather’s violence bring us back to peace?" - I wish the weather changed the World before the Catastrophe will hit the Earth. The axle of the Earth is already changing and in 2012, there will be major one when the sun will enter the Milky Way. That was supposed to bring many dangerous eruptions, like Volcano's and Earthquakes.

RALLY GOOD WRITE-BRAVO!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about A lovely warm spring day (blog)

I think they call it salvage! Not something I've ever had an opportunity to do so can't say if I would or not. Have a tot for me!

Comment is about Ghost Ship (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

A comment on a recent event. Brave write.

Comment is about A lovely warm spring day (blog)

Hey, Zuzana

To please you is such a pleasure! Thanks!

Comment is about Taking his Advice (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Hey, Zuzana

Thanks! You're very encouraging! What would I do without you?!?!

Comment is about A Symbol of Nature (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

So, Antonioni... you're a misogynist too!
'i hate women - swiming' they are but phonetic minimal pairs.
I swam the channel tunnel once - does that count?

Comment is about I hate swimming (blog)

As always your poetry is very entertaining

Comment is about Gordon Zola (poet profile)

Original item by Gordon Zola

HI, Steve

Thank you for the lovely comment!

Appreciated, Zuzanna

Comment is about garside (poet profile)

Original item by garside

Steve, I have not written any decent lyrics.
Thanks for the feedback, hey maybe I'll try some.

Mel where ya been????????
thanks for feedback

Comment is about One shot at life (blog)

As Shelly D has said, I also feel this would reach maximum impact read aloud. Plenty of stuff in there to think about.

Comment is about Truth or Lie (blog)

Hi Sweet Pete

A very emotive poem. you have a wonderful ability to draw the reader into your poems.
A powerful subject, written with your usual sensitivity. Lovely.

Mel
x

Comment is about One shot at life (blog)

Oh steve

You charmer you...thank you for your lovely comments.

Mel
x

Comment is about Steve O'Connor (poet profile)

Original item by Steve O'Connor

Hi Tomas

thank you for your lovely comments. I think your poem 'shall another read my words' is so beautiful.
mel
x

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hi Shelley
Thank you for your lovely comments. Love the poetry that you write.

Mel
x

Comment is about Shelley Ann Dwornik (poet profile)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

Peter!

It is good to be on a mystery site. I love poetry and enjoy reading and commenting. Thank you for the lovely compliment. I do know that all writers like hear a word what others think of their work - comments help… I remember when I joined this site there were just few poets placing comments. Thought this was so sad! ‘Write Out Loud’ site is very nice and it is pure pleasure to be here.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Man the virus (blog)

HI Antonio,
Nice poem! I wont pretend to know a thing about "football" I know its a game, and some play and many watch it.
As for the rest of the poem I loved it! Yes we girls had to dress to the NINES as well, and now I have 2 boys and a girl, all teenagers, and I tell you, I think the boys may be worse, at what to wear and the hair! LOL great poem! LIFE!!

Comment is about Manchester Yesterdays (blog)

Hello, Antonio

The first stanza refers to 1966 World Cup...?
To bad, you did not have a team in your Town.

"The 1966 World Cup was held in England - there were 4 groups with the top 2 teams of each group qualifying for the quarter-finals. England, who played all their games at Wembley, qualified top of their group and then went on to win the World Cup."

Then the write goes down the memory lane, sounds smooth, even though it was not! In your writing, there are some funny and happy times.
***"Against the unfairness of life and love. Their shirts impressed"***I guess when at young age the shirts and the entire dress has to be Spic and Span!
Your rhyme came on time to in all the endings of each stanzas which is PLUS for you and I say it COOL!!

At time, it shows how much struggles needs to overcome to meet the ends and ODDS life offers!...Smile. The work looks great!

I guess I said enough for this one.
Great poem - Totally enjoyed...(((~.~)))

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Manchester Yesterdays (blog)

a school field scarred with creosote - class Pete

Comment is about the long hot summer of 1976 (blog)

i like the rhythm Pete - do you write lyrics also?

Comment is about One shot at life (blog)

Im sure some live this way, and I could never, nor can I even imagin this type of life. You know I hate needles, and drugs are well, should slap the shit from them. Im tired of people wasteing life, its sad. true life and not worth it. tragic. your too good at poems like theses!

Comment is about One shot at life (blog)

Hi There Antonio,
Its just great! Where is the hot tub? Ill skip on that over chlorinated pool too!

Comment is about I hate swimming (blog)

drat
I never heard about this
it sounds great
I would have liked to have a pedal too

Lets hope it tours

Comment is about Ben Mellor's Voices of Descent (blog)

Original item by Dominic Berry

great performance poem!

Comment is about I hate swimming (blog)