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Stephen Gospage

Tue 16th May 2023 07:59

Thank you, John. It is remarkable how nature reasserts itself.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 16th May 2023 07:55

This is great, Mike. Liverpool did Ukraine and the whole of Europe proud.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 15th May 2023 22:48

I think instinct is a massively underrated characteristic. I think it’s the only paranormal entity that we all believe in. You make us think Katarina!

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Grace Meadows

Mon 15th May 2023 20:37

I wholeheartedly agree with Keith and John, thank you Helene.

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Grace Meadows

Mon 15th May 2023 20:35

And I agree with both previous comments Clare such a lovely pi piece of writing, thank you.

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Grace Meadows

Mon 15th May 2023 20:30

So beautiful Katerina-thank you.

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Grace Meadows

Mon 15th May 2023 20:24

An interesting and scary poem Hugh, it seems that we are living on a knife edge these days.

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John Botterill

Mon 15th May 2023 17:04

Correct about the fossil fuel, John. I wanted to honour the miners and celebrate nature at the same time. A tricky juggling act.
Thanks for referencing my use of metaphor, Manish. I was inspired by Clare( as I often am) and her superb Tenter Hooks series.
Thanks too for the like, Keith. 😀

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 15th May 2023 15:26

Loved the way you conveyed the message metaphorically, of a covered up mining ground (nature's bruises) to that of a battered person's wounds.
A very elegant poem this, John B.🌿

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th May 2023 15:14

John, a poem which spoke to me in many ways. Bells send messages and almost speak. A tolling bell at a funeral, the clarion bell at the elevation of the host, the Angelus to tell the time of day and to remind us of the incarnation and wedding bells which peel out their joy. I also love the sound of bells on the continent as their sound is quite different to our bells. The bells in Rome on a Sunday morning. Dare I say that they ring in my head. We seldom hear them these days but thank you for a poem which once again ignites their significance.
Keith

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John Coopey

Mon 15th May 2023 11:08

I had 20 years in the mining industry, John, and I owe it for my character, memories, wages, pension and my wife (I met her while she was splitting lumps with her head). Nevertheless, it is good to see the use being put to reclaimed sites, not to mention the benefit of abandoning dirty fuel.

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John Coopey

Mon 15th May 2023 11:01

Thankyou Leon and Uilleam. I’m afraid she only entertains gentlemen, Leon 😇. Yes, Uilleam, we were there for a wedding over the weekend. We must go back again for a few days - I need to get the thre’pence back on my empty pop bottle.
And thanks for the Like, Red Brick.

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Rick Varden

Mon 15th May 2023 10:57

Ha ha indeed

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 15th May 2023 09:26

A Victorian era pleasure pier. I know it so well!

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Mon 15th May 2023 00:48

You DO have her address John? 😂




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Mon 15th May 2023 00:46

😂 This would be funny Rick if it wasn't such a pain in the bum!

( the subject not the poem ) 👍


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Mon 15th May 2023 00:42

Just the ticket!





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Alexandra Parapadakis

Sun 14th May 2023 22:56

Thank you for your thoughts Graham

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John Botterill

Sun 14th May 2023 22:06

How beautiful and heart warming. Great stuff! 😁 Well said Keith, too.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 14th May 2023 21:42

Beautifully written, as usual 🌈

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John Marks

Sun 14th May 2023 20:06

Thank you Leon. Your words encourage me more than you can know. So, thank you kind sir.

“Poetry is the journal of the sea animal living on land, wanting to fly in the air. Poetry is a search for syllables to shoot at the barriers of the unknown and the unknowable. Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.” — Carl Sandburg, from The Atlantic, March 1923.

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keith jeffries

Sun 14th May 2023 13:42

Clare, thank you for a continuation of this poem which is an insight to a world few see or experience, especially men. It is an illuminative piece of writing and brought to pen and paper from the heart.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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Sun 14th May 2023 12:53

As always John, an absolute pleasure to read your poetry
thank you sir!



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John Botterill

Sun 14th May 2023 10:19

This could be used a mantra for mindfulness, Helene. Stunning!
'The heart gathers it's scattered remnants of sorrow '
Wow!

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John Botterill

Sun 14th May 2023 10:05

I want to tell you that your series has been a highlight off my WOL experience, Clare. Much as people used to wait by trains for a new installment of Dickens' latest novel to be drpped off, I click on WOL to look for your Tenter Hooks poem.
A triumph. Thank you for writing it ( though I'm sorry you had to experience it first). 💪

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Hélène

Sun 14th May 2023 03:50

I agree with everything you said Clare about WOL and so appreciate your heart-wrenching, transformative Tenter Hooks series and other poems. Poetry really can be a form of therapy and part of the road to healing (it is for me). Blessings on all involved with WOL.

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Hélène

Sun 14th May 2023 03:46

Really good! An inspiration. Lookly deeply into what motivates unkindness can sometimes turn it around. Thank you Clare.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 14th May 2023 00:15

Clare, WOL is a wonderful resource but is only so because of it membership. People like you! We thank you for your thanks and hand them back a hundredfold.

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John Marks

Sat 13th May 2023 23:52

As will I Keith. And thank you so much for your continued encouragement of my work. The thin days of May pass so quickly, while the thick days of November linger so chillingly.

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th May 2023 22:46

Clare, you have enriched us all at WOL with your poetry. Please don't stop writing as you are a very gifted person.
Keith

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John Botterill

Sat 13th May 2023 19:29

Fabulous poem. There is much truth in what you have written. Maybe some people do use unkindness as a defence mechanism. Your approach is admirable and strong, Clare. 😎

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John Botterill

Sat 13th May 2023 19:25

Your poetry is truly amazing, Clare. Spare, succinct and absolutely on the money. I am fascianated by this series of poems. Great!

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John Botterill

Sat 13th May 2023 18:54

Thanks Manish, Keith and Stephen for your kind comments. I wanted to write a poem about a different subject and a snippet from the Shakespeare miscellany jumped out at me. It's my tribute to the genius who changed the world with his pen. But, maybe the playwright was really Sir Francis Bacon or the Earl of Oxford, after all? 😂
Thanks for the likes, too. It means a lot.




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keith jeffries

Sat 13th May 2023 18:39

A poem which has a very profound opening stanza which then begins to explore our emotions. I must admit that I found a good deal of myself in these words. A good poem borne out of experience.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th May 2023 11:32

A very well crafted poem which accurately describes those dark hours which cast a shadow on our souls.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th May 2023 11:30

John,
It may be the month of May but as your poem says November is ever present, if only in our psyche. The language in all your poems is highly descriptive and in this poem it is excelled. The line which deals with wine guzzlers and laudanum tipplers takes me back to the Yates Wine Lodges? Do they still exist? I recall two; one in Blackpool and the other on the Strand in London.
Thank you for this. I shall continue to cherish the month of May.
Keith

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 13th May 2023 10:16

it may be someones teuth but its just an imagined story for me, thank you for the comments much appreciated 😎👍

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 08:49

Thank you, Keith, Manish and John. Your kind comments mean a great deal to me. I fully agree that Putin and co need to be put in the dock. We should never forget who started this senseless conflict. In the end, war is a tragedy for everyone, especially the foot soldiers who have no say and just serve as cannon fodder, as well as their families. 'Collateral damage', as some would say.

And my thanks to Nigel, Holden, K Lynn and Grace for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 07:48

It's wonderful to see this kind of original work being aired at national events to a massive audience.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 07:43

Ah, the arbitrary nature of things, John! A case of what might have been, or not. What if Mr Plague had turned right? Our civilisation might have collapsed, or never existed at all. Or some other writer may have come to the fore.

A beautifully written and rhymed poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 07:37

A chilling masterpiece, Russell.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 07:36

I was deeply moved by this poem, Clare. It has real quality in its spare but flowing style.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th May 2023 07:32

Thank you, Kevin. Rob Burrow's story is one of courage, tragedy and inspiration. This poem is a worthy tribute to his battles and to the support of colleagues, family and friends.

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Red Brick Keshner

Fri 12th May 2023 21:43

Thanks Manish, your kind words have thus made an indelible print. I am most appreciative and your reviews are most welcome 🌷👍 Freds.

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 12th May 2023 21:31

Keith, I'm truly grateful for your very kind comment! 😊

Kevin, thank you! 😂

John, thank you so much, as always, for the encouragement, it means a lot! 😎

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John Botterill

Fri 12th May 2023 21:31

Intriguing poem. Has the ring of truth, JD. Painful but I enjoyed it! 👍

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 12th May 2023 21:25

John, we'll play Leeds in the Premier league when they escape relegation & we go up 😆.... i hope

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John Botterill

Fri 12th May 2023 21:21

Excellently poem. Vivid, biting, Holden.

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 12th May 2023 21:21

Thank you, w3sko, I really appreciate it! 😊

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Clare

Fri 12th May 2023 21:03

Thank you for sharing this story with us. Your grandfather was a good man and he taught you well.

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