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"I see you've been out on your bike again,"

said the woman who's worldly and wise.

"Does my helmet hair give it away?" I asked.

"No, your forehead is splattered with flies."

◄ Sparky

Not a tit at all ►

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Elaine Booth

Tue 11th Oct 2011 18:57

Good to read so many poems that really raise a smile in gloomy October. Nice one, Dave.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 6th Oct 2011 11:39

Funny :)

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Andy N

Thu 6th Oct 2011 08:53

made me smile, Dave.. nice one m8

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Dave Carr

Wed 5th Oct 2011 19:33

Ha!
Thanks for comments.
I raise my helmet in salutation.

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Wed 5th Oct 2011 18:46

HaHa - here's to you and your Helmet !

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Steve Regan

Wed 5th Oct 2011 18:19

Isobel, you durty, durty gurl!

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Wed 5th Oct 2011 15:45



Heh, heh...dunno if I am laughing at your write or Isobels comment!..

Made me smile thanks :)

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winston plowes

Wed 5th Oct 2011 13:34

Ah yes, although cycling helmet hair is vedry different to motobike helmet hair! lol, Room for everything on these pages including this little chortle.

Incidentally just been looking at KRAX magazine. You might want to submit some of yours to this?

Win

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Isobel

Wed 5th Oct 2011 12:33

Helmet hair? flies? The mind boggles... xx

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 5th Oct 2011 08:21

Ha, nice one Dave and thanx for your comment on It Just Aint gonna happen!, Elvis might be at the Reebok too if things carry on as they are! cheers Jeff

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Lynn Dye

Tue 4th Oct 2011 21:56

Good one, Dave - made me smile!
Just noticed your Papa Oscar Echo Mike, I think it's brilliant. x

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