Love
"Democracy of our society,Looks like who is more mighty"
Nice work :)

Comment is about Can't Be Indifferent (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Tom, guess we all angst with this present situation. Tried to ode my feelings on it but thought again. Your poem tells it how it is - nice one.

Comment is about Brief Poem 08/08/11 (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

Hello Ann, thanks for commenting on 'Darkness and Light' from my perspective it was an absolute joy to see the Kingfisher streaking its resplendent colours so vividly across the canal basin.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

It was written in a moment. Please! Do me a favor and write your comments and...show me my mistakes or...may be tell me how to write it better.
Thank you in advance.
With love and respect,
Laura

Comment is about Can't Be Indifferent (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Ellen, a warm welcome to WOL in all its meanderings. Winston

Comment is about Ellen McAteer (poet profile)

Original item by Ellen McAteer

Thank you for your kind comments on 'Darkness and Light' Tom, much appreciated.

Comment is about Tom Harding (poet profile)

Original item by Tom Harding

Thanks all.

Comment is about Cinema Poem (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

Your welcome.
Your Poem "Crying Out" inspired me to post my haiku poem, "Anger". I haven't posted it yet but hope to in 3-4 days.

Shirley

Comment is about Kath Hewitt (poet profile)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

I was part of a gig last night John and I performed one of your poems; it went down so well that they asked for an encore, I won’t tell you what the poem was but I said “I’m not doing it twice.” When you said you didn’t mind me doing your stuff, you also stated that if any pint pots where thrown the poem was not yours; on the other hand you instructed that if I was showered with money then the proceeds should go to the man who holds the copyright.
I was last on and finished at 11.pm. At the eleventh hour the throwing of
Pint pots or money had not been undertaken; instead they just threw Knickers and bras. The question is what do you want me to do with them, should l I keep them or send them of to you. Before you answer John I must point out that; that is the last
Stag Do I shall ever perform at.
Cheers mate. Tommy Mc.

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

Hi Laura, thanks for the comment on Bible Pages - much appreciated!

CR x

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

It can be arranged . . . ;)

Comment is about The Scourge of God (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

I absolutely love Cornwall. Do you really live there ? Now I know why you write beautifully

Comment is about Ann Foxglove on the radio (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Woman , did you get my message about poem arm wrestling?

Comment is about Ann Foxglove on the radio (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

When Attila the Hun died, apparently of a nose-bleed, the River Tisza was dammed so that they could bury his body in a coffin lined with gold, then sliver, then iron, in its river bed. The dam was then breached so the Tisza would permanently conceal his grave.
To make sure, the burial party was then killed.
(I want to go like that!).

Comment is about The Scourge of God (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

..hello Ann...I knew it was confusing. It's about Jean Peters. I saw her in 'Pickup on South Street' on tele' a few weeks ago. I wrote it quickly last night while watching this tribute to her two or three times on 'youtube',
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ajl9UEoQdeg
then in the last verse added it to real memories...cheers..chris.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

You'll be even more famous now Anne. I did this with Preston F.M. I held the mike in my right hand
How about you? x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove on the radio (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Such a poignant last verse, vivid to the senses that warning of a potentially lethal sting from a wasp in the trojan horse of a sweet smelling rose. I hate to see bees doing their rounds and suddenly attacked by a lurking spider.

Comment is about O Sweet Confusion (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Very enjoyable and thought-provoking read - theatres eh! God they're good for stirring up the old thoughts - almost a thing of the past now.

Comment is about Cinema Poem (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

i like this a lot. it's economical, startling and neat.

Comment is about Wolves And Matchboxes (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

A galaxy of images and metaphors to savour here Kealan- thought the first verse especially alluring to the reader.

Comment is about Wolves And Matchboxes (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Thank you Jules for the comment.

Comment is about SINFUL SOULS (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Enjoyed this, Tom.
I'd cut these lines, though - excuse the pun.

The more lavish and Hollywood the affair
The more bloated the corpse,

The more Hollywood lavish
the more bloated the corpse

Comment is about Cinema Poem (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

You mean the poem is unfinished? It's not so bad as it is - the last line is a killer. Good luck with it.You might consider an alternative to "appreciate", summat like cherish.

Comment is about Headbands (blog)

Interesting poem, I enjoyed it.Lot of good bits, though I like the opening and closing verses - "momentary bliss" might be better for sonics.
I thought "with dirt from dirty fingers" was a bit naff. Likewise "rifle-fire that punctuates his stifling desire" But as I say, mostly good stuff, I think.

Comment is about Bible Pages (5/8/11) (blog)

I found this hard to read, almost like there are too many words, particularly 2nd and 3rd lines.
I'm not sure i think the title is quite right either.

I've said this 'cos it's what i think but don't have any suggestions for you lol :-)

Comment is about Mind Over Matter (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Powerful read, moving narrative & great use of language.

Comment is about Bible Pages (5/8/11) (blog)

Hi Shirley,
RE Crying out, thank you for taking time to comment on it. bit of a surprise since it was blogged ages ago lol :-)

Comment is about Shirley Smothers (poet profile)

Original item by Shirley Smothers

Great title, great poem. Moving, brutal, with knowing nods and a good knowledge of the situation.

Comment is about Bible Pages (5/8/11) (blog)

Ann is right, it's still on the site but is no longer on the blog list. Odd. Still, apologies to anyone who felt offended by my post, I am sorry.

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Yay - I think we should all sneak on here now and again under false profile names - just to insult each other and be generally disagreeable. You have to admit - so long as you don't take it too seriously, it has livened things up and given us all a laugh!

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

I've just seen it also.. Without been horrible, didn't do a lot for me but as Ann says it's a free country and I agree.. A

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

The best tribute I can give to your poetry John is I would like to perform them at my local folk club.
(The Red Lion.)With your permission?
Newburgh.

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

!?****?^^<++!!!!!!**?:)
(cloth-ears!)

My Grandma used to call me cloth-ears sometimes, I think it's rather sweet!

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

I have a friend who comes from Cornal. I recently read a poem called Turtle Doves at the wedding.....

Comment is about The Trellis Of Cornwall (blog)

Nice rhythm, nice length, nice rhyme....

Comment is about No End To The Show (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

interesting....

Comment is about Foolish (blog)

A ghost poem! I have written Ghostly Memories as my contribution. I have had a poem called Rain published in the Northern Echo today. I have now had over 50 published in newspapers and magazines....

Comment is about SINFUL SOULS (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Interesting factual story....

Comment is about Bible Pages (5/8/11) (blog)

I had it in my mind that Merps were larger marbles but I've checked it out and my elder sister says it was an old Wigan word for any type of marble. She spells it Mirps - but I'd go with my spelling LOL. We used to play with marbles a lot as I recall. A poor man's croquet/boules I guess!

Comment is about Underneath the Horse Chestnut Tree (blog)

Original item by Nash

Did somebody speak?

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Cynthia - you made me blush. Now that takes some doing! Thank you for your comment on Dissonance, means a lot. Hope to meet you again sometime. Take care, Laura x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

IT'S STILL FLIPPIN' THERE! Am I the invisible woman? Why are you all ignoring me? I'm going off to London in a huff now! (xx)

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Sorry Kenny, don't know what this is about. He must have pulled it himself, if you'll pardon the expression.
I would by the way, have every reason to pull his comments after the offline message he sent to me: " Jillian Love...". But I didn't.

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Thanks isobel - very kind...but I have to ask...Merps?

Comment is about Underneath the Horse Chestnut Tree (blog)

Original item by Nash

Thanks guys. Friend Allen Forster is on this week, he'll be worth a listen, a very amusing chap. And it's possible from today to hear previous programmes in the series. Last week Vonnie Carter was on. She is an artist but also writes great stories and poems, often with a science fiction element. The week before the guest was Les Murton, a really good Cornish poet who publishes Poetry Cornwall magazine.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove on the radio (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

AW thanks Win - I'd save the last dance for you any Sunday!x

Comment is about groove around the kitchen - it's sunday! (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Well I can! It's still there this morning. It's called "To Whomever..." and it's his first blog - honest! Will no one believe me in this godforsaken wilderness? ;)

(He's posted a few more since so that's prob why you didn't spot it. The last one is called The Trellis of Cornwall - not sure if that's Mrs Trellis!)

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

4 ! For one last weekend dance. Go easy though, my legs are rather wobby after cycling up the Calderdale hills today. Win x

Comment is about groove around the kitchen - it's sunday! (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Well I can't see it. Maybe he took it off himself - with his own left hand...

Comment is about We can write what we want, but you can't... (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Well that's three nice men for me to dance round my kitchen with today - thanks guys! xxx

Comment is about groove around the kitchen - it's sunday! (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove