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Cinema Poem

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We’d go to the cinema in the afternoons
Then for coffee later.
She’d studied film for four years
And when discussing it afterward
She sounded like a police mortician
Diagnosing the cause of death,
The more lavish and Hollywood the affair
The more bloated the corpse,
“Exposition, complication, climax”
She'd say and draw a curved line on a napkin
Depicting the three stages of composition.
One day she said,
“Only life can teach us how things explode”
And it was true I thought-
Most men drop dead
In the middle of their story or
Have nothing resembling a story at all.
When she finally left
I carried on visiting the cinema in the afternoon
I sat so long in the dark
That my senses grew confused
The most simple story perplexed me
I found myself laughing at death scenes
And weeping at the jokes.
Even years later the random sight 
Of falling buildings and planes
Had similar effect,
Now nothing made sense at all
No matter how well explained and 
Beautiful the arc.
 
 
 
 
 

◄ you are not bukowski and neither am i

Brief Poem 08/08/11 ►

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Tom Harding

Tue 9th Aug 2011 18:46

Thanks all.

Philipos

Mon 8th Aug 2011 17:45

Very enjoyable and thought-provoking read - theatres eh! God they're good for stirring up the old thoughts - almost a thing of the past now.

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Ray Miller

Mon 8th Aug 2011 15:53

Enjoyed this, Tom.
I'd cut these lines, though - excuse the pun.

The more lavish and Hollywood the affair
The more bloated the corpse,

The more Hollywood lavish
the more bloated the corpse


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John Coopey

Sun 7th Aug 2011 22:18

Me too, Tom.
Enjoyed v much.

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 6th Aug 2011 20:58

Your poems have really changed! I liked them then - and I like them now. Very much!x

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