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Mind Over Matter

Take me into your sweet mind
show me all the things
you need me to find.
I want to serve you,
allow you to serve meĀ 
now one, who once were two.
Twist me in your lust,
lash me to your heart.
Let this be.
Just the start.

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kath hewitt

Mon 8th Aug 2011 15:22

I found this hard to read, almost like there are too many words, particularly 2nd and 3rd lines.
I'm not sure i think the title is quite right either.

I've said this 'cos it's what i think but don't have any suggestions for you lol :-)

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