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Chris Co

Mon 24th Oct 2011 21:43

Please note we have moved from the 4th Wednesday of each month to the fourth Thursday of each month.

The current Gig Guide listing is out by one day (something that is in the process of being rectified).

Hope to see people Thursday.

My Best

Chris



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Lynn Dye

Mon 24th Oct 2011 21:34

Thank you Philipos, yes that is another idea I'm considering, thanks for the suggestion.
To be honest, we mostly just laughed this episode off - well, what else can you do? lol.x

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Philipos

Mon 24th Oct 2011 20:57

Hi Shirley, thank you for your kind remarks on 'The Tartan Bard' very much appreciated.

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Jack Pascoe

Mon 24th Oct 2011 19:41

T'was my pleasure to get your eyes a-twinkling. I really enjoyed your stuff also, it's very lyrical and really sticks in your head. As an avid music fan it's just right for me. Keep 'em coming :).

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Poets Corner

Mon 24th Oct 2011 19:04

Poets Corner at Glassfire -Hoylake Ch47 2AG...
'Where the most notable poem will earn a cash award from the Guest Poet on the Night'...

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Nick Coleman

Mon 24th Oct 2011 18:42

Thanks for the encouragement John, was a while before I dared go into that pub again after they heard that one!

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Nick Coleman

Mon 24th Oct 2011 18:31

Thanks for the comments on my work. I posted some here hoping it may kick-start me back into writing again (last few years have let keeping a roof over our heads take over my mind).

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Nick Coleman

Mon 24th Oct 2011 18:25

Thanks for comment on my efforts. Enjoyed an hour reading your works and will be back for more.

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Poets Corner

Mon 24th Oct 2011 17:58

Awww... thanks a lot Jeff..haha I went out with a young lady from Billericay many years ago..(back in the string vest days!) ha ha.. Young Love eh mate?

I wrote another one for City talk FM in Liverpool called 'The Pull' about how a man can get back in the stirrups of dating after 'Divorce'..mine was in 2005.

My book is called 'Observations On Life' available from www.countyvise or via www.Amazon or Me! or all you can call 0151 647 3333 (Birkenhead Press) or please ask at your local book shops!!..Thank you for your kind comments..I have just started up 'Poets Corner' at 'Glassfire'in Hoylake and there will be spots available for both 'Guest Poets'each month who will be given a 15 min spot to read their own work..they will also either judge or help to judge the most notable poem on the night! - plus 'FREE' guitarist/singer for a couple of say 10 min spots during the night in the future..so attention all you local Poets or Songsters just let me know if you want to perform as soon as possible ok? (just e-mail me at poets-corner@hotmail.com or FB me ok? Thank you and All the best to you and all at WOL... Graham..(keep it real)...

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steve mellor

Mon 24th Oct 2011 17:42

I particularly like poems that tell a simple story, simply (hope that doesn't sound offensive), and thsi does it for me

I'm a little bit like John, and I'd have probably left out the 'to' or the 'a', but then I didn't write it, and I'd probably want to chop somebody's doo-dah's off if they messed around with one of my pieces (none of which are perfect either).

Enjoyed this

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Philipos

Mon 24th Oct 2011 17:23

Hi Lynn - how about 'shamefacedly' this would accurately portray how he might have felt without giving him the cause. This was a difficult subject well expressed.

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Philipos

Mon 24th Oct 2011 17:18

I smiled at this. Schadenfreude eh? That's a name long enough to be a poem in its own right. My brothers are nuts about the game - but somewhere along the line I missed the point of it.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 16:08

It is your fault, Foxy!
You've got me all confusical about sighting otters locally (which I've been delighting in for the past year or so) with feeding them with thousands of pounds worth of fish!
The solution is this: when they've eaten the bleedin' lot I'll have to throw into the pond a fillet of haddock each night - that'll be much cheaper.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 16:07

J.C. - I read and re-read my line before
printing and even considered <"IN" silent rhyme> but it wasn't quite what I sought to say. As a lyricist I "sang" my line to myself and it sounded OK. I hear what you say but nothing's perfect.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 16:02

I agree with MCN (the poet, not Motor Cycle News).
Very evocative and clever how you use words to suggest smells.
Versatile too, as I know you've done a fair amount of excellent rhythmic stuff.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:58

"If my brother-in-law, a "Gooners" man,
Like poetry as much, he'd be a fan!!"
Short - and right on the money.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:56

At best you'll get moved on!
Nice image of "breath like smoke upon the air".
I thought the line "Up and down to a silent rhyme" was a bit awkward rhythmically - it needed a quaver to work.
(Nothing wrong with Quavers, although I prefer Cheesy Puffs)

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:45

There are reminders here of Laurence Binyon's poem "The Burning of the Leaves" and that is one of my favourites.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:36

You can really smell the arrival of autumn and
see the annual transformation as one season gives way to another. I am a "versifier" but if I wasn't, this would be my style. Affinity
and observation in equal measure. Nice work!

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Peter Asher

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:32

Thank you Stefan & Patricia (I'll regard you in the sungular). This piece has been revised with some grammatical and word changes I've also reformated the layout to make it easier to read, by putting the emphasis in the obvious places. They are always obvious to the author but one has to remember that other people come to your work blind (as it were) and hopefully leave it with a vision. Thanks again for your coments.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:00

hello mc
i could have written
this as a comment
but I've laid
it out like this
so now its
a Poem
also
ive put
the word fuck
in so now
its a
proper poem

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Sim Le Wilt

Mon 24th Oct 2011 14:54

Just want to say, along with the previous posters posts, possibly, that these three are all lovely and greatly amusing. Hope to catch you live sometime.
Cheers

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Mon 24th Oct 2011 13:28

I agree with most of the comments! Trust Banksy? Yes I'v dissapeared many times, to come back xxx

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Mon 24th Oct 2011 13:18

Did you write 'Beatiful Minds' after reading my poem?? haha I love it

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Lynn Dye

Mon 24th Oct 2011 13:00

Excellent, love it!

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Sim Le Wilt

Mon 24th Oct 2011 12:08

brilliant!

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 24th Oct 2011 12:02

In some ways, Ann, your point IS political, in that if poetry is about feelings and emotions, it is about how WE feel - what makes us feel good, sad, scared, fulfilled, elated, so forth; which is about how we (all?) want to live. I don't want loadsa money (luckily), I want to be happy as much as I can, I want the sense of fulfilment one gets from sharing with and caring for others, it is about those things we share as human beings that politics should be about. Politicians seem to spend their time worrying about how to keep the rich happy, yet they are never going to be happy because what they want is not money - it's MORE, which, as an aspiration, is unsustainable and ends up costing the earth and taking from, or exploiting, the non-rich. What need are economics as if people matttered, to quote Schumacher in his book, Small is Beautiful.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 24th Oct 2011 10:57

This is really interesting. I could/would never be a political poet. I honestly don't know enough about politics and I guess my poems are all about feelings and emotions. It's that combination that precludes me from political comment in my poetry. (Basic ignorance!)

Re Shelley's comment - what if the poets in question had views that were kinda awful? Or awful in our terms? I wonder would the resultant poems be as dead and un-involving as fascist art and statues of dictators?

Art and passion and political comment can work - Picasso's Guernica for example.

As to the (I am sure true) comment about WOL and open mic and performance poetry changing lives. I know that they change lives on one level but could they change political life? They should be able to. And it's all self-expression. And communication. So a good thing.

And I'm not sure how wonderful a compliment you have paid Anwen - just how many cellist/poets ARE there in Manchester Julian? :)

PS I love Roy Harper!

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 24th Oct 2011 10:04

Thanks for listening to Do the Write Thing, I'm really touched! At least that means about 12 people heard it! :) I've never been on the radio before and it was really enjoyable. The studio is smaller than most people's bathrooms, and gets really hot. Last Friday Sue and I were on with a guitarist and a bongo drum player. And all the mics got tangled up! But it was great! Keep writing!! I really like your poems very much. Wish you got more feedback. Maybe if you commented on some other people's poems they would read yours? But perhaps that's not important to you. Anyway, stay well my friend!

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Isobel

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:55

Lovely poem Ann. I'd agree with all the comments particularly Rachels.

John Coopey - it serves you right for having a flash pond in your garden. I think I'd rather have an otter. I'd probably buy fish to feed to the otter.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:53

Thanks for that last comment John - I thought you were blaming me for a moment! Sorry about the poor fish:(
(I've offered my condolences already - on FB) x

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:52

Thanks for that last comment John - I thought you were blaming me for a moment! Sorry about the poor fish:(

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:48

I'm a bit p*ssed off with Nature at the moment. I've got an otter or a mink getting into my garden pond. It's eaten its way through 70 fish, some of them specimen Koi carp. B*st*d, b*st*d otter. I set a rat-trap only to find it next morning half-way down the garden!
Rant over. (Nice poem).

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Lynn Dye

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:39

Hi Stef & Tricia, thank you for your comment, and hey, I believe you are right - how about "sheepishly" instead?

Colin's fine thanks, though his memory still isn't great - the doctors couldn't find anything wrong anyway - so I guess that's the main thing.

Thanks again,
Love, Lynn'n'him xx

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SPACEGHOST

Mon 24th Oct 2011 09:17

hallo Ann
thanks for your continued support
i enjoyed listening to you on Do The Write Thing
i like the soothing tone of your voice
im addicted to wol too
thank you take care

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Mon 24th Oct 2011 08:29

that gixer is just like mine - got 3 bikes in the garage right now - I Have had as many as 7 in the past including 2 ducatis (916 + 996) & 2 RC30s. I was out on the gixer just yesterday. Keep up the good work !!
Brum Brum........

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 24th Oct 2011 01:08

thank You Stella- :o)

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 24th Oct 2011 00:58

best thing to do for promo of calls for submissions is to submit to news@writeoutloud.net, preferably with a jpeg image.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 24th Oct 2011 00:49

Hi Harry, agreed. How do we want to live, might be the question to which we need an answer rather than politicians assuming all the time, especially ones who have not a clue what it is like to be poor, to not have the confidence or financial givens that the silver spoons bestow.

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 23:13

very moving poem Lynn-but!
(and with great respect)
lose the word 'shamefully'

not poor Colins fault
but I do get the sense of shame
he might mistakenly have felt
at the time.

how is he now?
might I ask.

certainly hope he overcomes the problem.

love

Stef&Trish.xx

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 23:06

Many thanks Lynn
for comments on 'dazzled or dulled'

love

Stef&Trish.xx

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 21:23

You dont look miserable or old? I enjoyed Fantasia! It came across as a spirit was with you?

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 21:15

I luv your poems! Must take you forever, I smile and wait the next line,I think you put an awful lot into them!

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 21:13


Love the journey..that walk is wonderful..did you then take the ferry?

I hope such smiles attend my departure.
I want no cross...corker..

I think I know that bloke with the parrot..wonder if it was the same one I saw with the bunny on a lead and the parrot on his shoulder?..and the Stone Roses reform as Westlife break up..good news all round..

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:51

The ending makes me think of rushing clouds? I love the beautiful picture, thankyou

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:41

I understand the sentiment, I would be torn too! I enjoyed the rhyming too xx

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Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:36

'Only Fond'! I love it. Thinking Back! especially last verse, funny and enjoyed reading it!xx

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Dave Bradley

Sun 23rd Oct 2011 20:21

Enjoyed this, Ann. It's fascinating how things that are out of kilter in Nature resonate with us.

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 23rd Oct 2011 19:40

Julian, good topic,

Shelly was talking beyond his brief,but you do have a point about political poetry.

It shouldn`t be about rounding up the usual suspects and subjecting them to a Kylie-style rant.

It should be about defending what (for want of a more acceptable term)are spiritual values - points of generally accepted national self-respect...in other words the effect of policies
on people (and not only the financial effect)

This should be more `poetical` to deal with than long rants about `poverty` in these days.



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Fran Hill

Sun 23rd Oct 2011 19:04

Phew! Quite a schedule. Enjoyed reading this and following links to see some of your videos. As an English teacher, the Troilus and Cressida project interests me a lot. Hope it goes well.

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