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M.C. Newberry

Sat 26th Nov 2022 15:59

A charming and very relevant analogy to the problems facing the human condition.

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Sat 26th Nov 2022 15:28

LOVE it!








Rose 💋

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Greg Freeman

Sat 26th Nov 2022 14:03

Clever poem, this, Julie, and warm-hearted, too. A good combination!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:31

"Walk in the Light", I think was the title of a hymn/song we used to sing in church.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:24

True.

But what of the traitrous enemies within?
In the UK Parliament?
In the filthy money launderette which is the City of London?

NB. I refer of course to the Russian oligarchs at the seat of our government, and their friends who in a time of war would be "consorting with the enemy".

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:19

What an education is the world of poetry!

But I think I need to get a life.
I found myself tapping out the syllables to see if it was a PROPER Haiku!😄

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:13

"Follow the money".

A term I increasingly use in the pub and elsewhere, whenever we're discussing political and social problems which the UK and the world face.

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raypool

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:11

Some wonderful lyrical lines here John. The unreachable is always a temptation when the imagination is stirred.and you have managed that to conjure up that feeling. Poetry should always reach in and touch us and this has done that.

Ray

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 26th Nov 2022 11:07

Excellent advice, and well put.

I need all types!

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John Coopey

Sat 26th Nov 2022 10:45

If I remember reading rightly, Kevin, the OBR quantified on decreased trade the effect of Brexit as 4%. It isn’t the sole cause of the recession obviously, but it is a part. But politicians “dare not speak its name”.
And thanks for the Like, Adam.

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julie callaghan

Sat 26th Nov 2022 10:36

Thanks for the likes and very kind comments. Lost my writing flow recently. 🌈

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Andy N

Sat 26th Nov 2022 08:58

Great stuff guys (:

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kJ Walker

Sat 26th Nov 2022 08:12

There is no doubt that Brexit, among other policies brought in by Boris et alia who have followed has caused the situation we are now in.

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John Coopey

Sat 26th Nov 2022 08:05

Fine work, JD. As she has given you this poem, you should give the poem to her.

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John Coopey

Sat 26th Nov 2022 08:00

The time-honoured practice of making money out of promises.

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John Coopey

Sat 26th Nov 2022 07:51

A somewhat unique take on the country’s economics, MC.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 26th Nov 2022 05:11

A truly beautiful, profound poem, Hélène! 🌷

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John Botterill

Sat 26th Nov 2022 02:57

Thanks for the likes Aisha and Holden 😀

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Nov 2022 22:08

If the contemporary Conservative and Unionist Party was still
the Party of long ago (national interest and famous financial
probity), it is doubtful the this financial situation would exist.
Budgeting scores of billions on an unnecessary rail link to save
the time it takes to drink a Martini when locking the country
down is hardly fiscal probity. As for Hunt, he is the elephant
in the room, a "placed man" for wider global interests that saw
no profit for its aims with the Truss plan for national financial
growth over a longer term. Note Hunt's observation that we need more immigrant labour - to do what in an increasingly
automated workplace, except undercut what is being paid to
our own workforce and increase the profit margins of global
interests in business that see purely national concerns as
obstacles.

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John Botterill

Fri 25th Nov 2022 20:58

I like the poem and your commentary upon it, Russell.
The style is open and left for the reader to interpret. A story for our times.

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John Coopey

Fri 25th Nov 2022 20:53

Indeed, Rose.

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John Botterill

Fri 25th Nov 2022 20:25

The answer to Rose's question is a definite NO!
Another stunning light sabre, Helene

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John Botterill

Fri 25th Nov 2022 20:22

Pithy and witty.
You are right on the money, Uilleam. 👍

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raypool

Fri 25th Nov 2022 19:16

Excellent John. I hardly ever get involved in analysis like that, but it is I think a good use of the site when inspiration hits! Glad you approved.

Ray

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Fri 25th Nov 2022 18:48

Apart from the fact that he looks the spit of Toad from Wind in the Willows I LOVE scare mongering Nige 👍

as to the lazy sods-give em a bleeding brush n binbags and get em to clean the fast food crap wrappers that those who don't have that shite delivered have left there in the first place dump on our streets along with syringes, laughing gas canisters, beer cans. bottles etc etc etc-after they've finished anti-socialising that is-GRRRRRR!!!!



Rose 👎👎👎

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Fri 25th Nov 2022 18:23

Helene, are you capable of writing a bad poem? 😉

I definitely don't think you are!




Rose 💋

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Fri 25th Nov 2022 18:21

Deeper and deeper you go the more I like it H! 👍






Rose 💋

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Fri 25th Nov 2022 18:19

Wowsers! brilliant Helene!







Rose 💋

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HÊlène

Fri 25th Nov 2022 16:47

Lovely, thanks for sharing.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Nov 2022 16:38

The global tale of slavery is a hugely diverse subject over
many centuries, mostly but not totally consigned to history.
The worrying aspect of modern life in that neck of the woods is
the apparent disregard for the safety and the lives of those
imported to provide the labour. The reported numbers alone
indicate something badly wrong with attitudes there, akin to
those existing in other less aware or caring times when the
value of life was measured in purely financial worth, with
any conciences assuaged by differences in religious beliefs.
Heresy anyone?

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John Coopey

Fri 25th Nov 2022 16:33

Thanks for your comments, guys.
You don’t think Brexit (whisper it soft) contributes, Graham? Certainly Jeremy Hunt said as much, the OBR thinks so as does the IFS. And it’s worth noting that both you and I are recipients of state benefits, as are my in-laws, aged 91 and 90. The idle bastards.
I was indeed, Telboy. Never forget the old socialist maxim - “ by hand and brain”. And I used my brain to pinch money.
And thanks for the Like, Aisha.

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Telboy

Fri 25th Nov 2022 16:23

And too many people doing well paid non-jobs.

John, by your own admission, you were one of these methinks?

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Telboy

Fri 25th Nov 2022 16:19

Like the poem Russell, and also your comment about the scissor-wielding hairdresser.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 25th Nov 2022 15:49

Sooner or later the people of the UK will have to come to terms with the fact that there are just too many lazy sods in this country who can't be asked to work for a living. Is the a big enough elephant for you?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 25th Nov 2022 15:44

Quite right, John. We should take Nigel to tusk..... (Perhaps Donald - remember him?)

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John Coopey

Fri 25th Nov 2022 12:43

Stop making me laugh, Uilleam. I’ve got a cracked lip.
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick and Greg.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 25th Nov 2022 12:30

No no no, you just don't understand.

That's PROJECT FEAR!
It's at the root of the UK's troubles.

That elephant's in the room because the UK is full up and it has nowhere else to go!
If only old people would just do away and die and stop being a burden on the NHS, then elephants would have somewhere else to go, and they could graze the sunlit uplands along with the Unicorns!
PROJECT FEAR!
PROJECT FEAR!
PROJECT FEAR!
Say it often enough and it will become true, I promise..........




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Fri 25th Nov 2022 12:00

A wonderful read Helene thank you

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 25th Nov 2022 10:45

Normally when I get my hair cut the conversation turns to football or holidays, mundane stuff, this time I had full on meltdown as my lady told me of her marriage break up and all the details,
When a distraught women has scissors in her hands you must sympathise profusely.

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John Botterill

Thu 24th Nov 2022 21:57

There is a real sense of sinister mystery here, Ray.. Your poem is very clever in its own 'world of complexity' and its unerring balance. Bravo!

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John Botterill

Thu 24th Nov 2022 21:49

Thanks Ray. You are quite right. It's what I intended. It's a slip of the word processor. No, honestly it is! As you can see I have changed it. 😀

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 24th Nov 2022 21:40

Thank you, Stephen, for your comment.

And thanks to Ray, Brenda and Aisha.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Nov 2022 20:00

Powerfully understated

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Nov 2022 19:57

A good grumpy write. Brain defrosted 👍

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raypool

Thu 24th Nov 2022 18:56

Hi Frederick. Thanks so much for joining in the fun, it seems to be quite a cherished pursuit after all. I agree with the consensus but my wife was very relieved when it gained control again!

Ray

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raypool

Thu 24th Nov 2022 18:54

Thanks all for your likes , much appreciated!

Ray

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raypool

Thu 24th Nov 2022 18:50

A nice robust pace and no nonsense feel mark this out as a good poem John, and I do like the last line. May I be cheeky and suggest a tiny change to it though. Just a thought - "when then" seems like a sort of stumble to me. "A day in Malton when the sun had shone" I fancy. Choose to ignore if you wish of course.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 24th Nov 2022 18:43

This reminds me of the photography of Ansel Adams who captured the landscape with such clarity Mike and Yosemite in particular. A nicely expressed piece.

Ray

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John Botterill

Thu 24th Nov 2022 17:32

Thanks Stephen. A typically generous comment! 👍

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 24th Nov 2022 17:21

Well done, John. The book is very entertaining and I think you have beaten me in the pseudonym department.

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