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Sunshine

Mon 15th Jan 2024 08:27

Isabella seems to be spiritually growing everyday.

Thanx Nigel 💐

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Reggie's Ghost

Mon 15th Jan 2024 07:42

This is about the West losing interest in the Ukraine war I think., which is exactly what Putin is banking on.

Not about class war, or maybe Uilliam is right.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 15th Jan 2024 07:36

Good to see you again, John. A lovely poem to start with.

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John Botterill

Sun 14th Jan 2024 23:09

Thank you, Manish. It's good to be back. I'll try not to be a stranger again! 🎈

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 14th Jan 2024 20:34

Nila
No I wasn’t but I suppose it can be construed as such
I just write what comes out . No thought to it I’m afraid !
But thanks for liking

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sun 14th Jan 2024 20:10

Firstly, it feels so good to read your poem after such a long time, my friend!
This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem, and a wonderful dedication indeed. The ending of it really moved me!
You had once called me your friend, and I'll forever be one.
Thank you.đŸŒ»

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 14th Jan 2024 20:00

Ah yes, "our people".
For 13 years, our people, the UK's little people have been put last. Now those reponsible want to divide us with hate and envy to distract from their misdeeds....time for another war, that'll show their plastic patriot admirers how much they care for us...Yemen anyone? Argentina's such old hat!

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Tim Higbee

Sun 14th Jan 2024 19:49

The true vision of youth often sees the humor in our mistakes that we overlook.
Loved it Hugh
Tim

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John Botterill

Sun 14th Jan 2024 19:46

Thanks Manish. #truefriend

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Tim Higbee

Sun 14th Jan 2024 19:44

Hard truths told in a humble tale.
Very nice.
Tim

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Tim Higbee

Sun 14th Jan 2024 19:02

Very familiar territory Eric. My family were the equivalent to strangers living under one roof. Belonging nowhere and everywhere simultaneously is the fate. You are more kin to water. Flow where you choose. The path you take is where your meant to be. Water has the power to choose its own path and only it can create the story of its journey. Nothing in life is permanent only flexible.
I liked the poem, Eric. Enjoy your path.
Tim

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Nigel Astell

Sun 14th Jan 2024 16:53

Isabella's heart
pumps desire courage strength

footsteps taken
faith and honesty
prayers and truthfulness
belief and kindness

more footsteps taken
warmth in light
with so
much love.❀

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R A Porter

Sun 14th Jan 2024 15:06

Thank you Stephen, Carole’s was indeed an “admirable life”, filled with love and laughter - her son is a playwright & two of her young granddaughters are already very good poets, the best possible legacy for a teacher and storyteller,

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 14th Jan 2024 12:11

Oh Ray, I think you've opened up a very big can of worms here. Music gets into people whether they like it or not!
For example, why does one suddenly break out into a version of the intro to Layla without any forewarning, why?
That bloody puppet has a lot to answer for!

Great piece by the way!

G

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Steve White

Sun 14th Jan 2024 10:37

And, as if by magic...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZ6TGDjwVwM

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Nila

Sun 14th Jan 2024 09:48

It was an amazing poem.Were you personifying death in the poem

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 14th Jan 2024 08:24

Thank you for sharing this, RA. A fitting memorial to an admirable life.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 14th Jan 2024 08:17

I enjoyed this poem, Rob. Atmospheric and stirring the senses.

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Nila

Sun 14th Jan 2024 07:12


This poem is about how Harry might have felt at the end of Order of Phoenix, this is something that I thought he would be feeling.
Padfoot is the Marauder name of Sirius Black who is Harry's godfather. Cedric Diggory was a Hogwarts Champion in the Triwizard Tournament who dies at the end of Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire

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Sunshine

Sun 14th Jan 2024 04:35

Thanks U. O. C

Thanks NigelđŸŒ·

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John Marks

Sun 14th Jan 2024 00:51

Thank you Uilleam and thank you Stephen, Pete, and Carlton.

“Níl luibh ná leigheas in aghaidh an bháis”

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Jan 2024 22:07

Nothing to add to this, John. ( Superbly written and tragic.)

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Jan 2024 21:59

An excellent, rhythmic poem, Tim.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Jan 2024 21:54

A fine poem beautifully read, Tom.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Jan 2024 21:46

A beautiful poem, Mike.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 19:48

Thanks HélÚne.

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John Coopey

Sat 13th Jan 2024 17:38

Thankyou, Robert.

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Robert Mann

Sat 13th Jan 2024 14:45

Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

Delusion, the fuel of celebrity
Illusion, a pill easily swallowed
Confusion, the party we all attend

Bemusement, all we have to share
Amusement, playthings of the powerful
Anti-movement, left and right divide us

Stagnation, its always been this way
Castration, no way to create change
Damnation, how it will always be

Purgatory, perpetual insanity
Transitory, hope and love and life condemned
Memento mori, something to look forward to

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Robert Mann

Sat 13th Jan 2024 14:27

Gentlemen of a certain age, I raise my glass and my aim in alliance and comradeship.

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Robert C Gaulke

Sat 13th Jan 2024 13:38

Cheers, Uilleam.

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John Coopey

Sat 13th Jan 2024 12:50

It’s not a conundrum that affects me, Uilleam. The bogs are always so far away in Spoons that I usually piss myself on the stairs.
And thanks for the Like, Tom.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 12:32

Lovely. We've just changed the duvet cover-quite a technical operation - inside out and all that!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 12:26

Thanks, Steve.
My mum always drilled into me that your "health is your wealth".
I consider myself to be wealthy, in that he NHS saved my life on two occasions: at my birth, and some years ago, enabling me to continue providing for my family, pay off our mortgage and to keep a roof over our heads.
The current shower have vowed to destroy everything that made that possible, hence the social problems we now see in the UK.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 12:09

Mock ye not John!
I for one, eagerly await my chance to enjoy that singular benefit of Brexit; to sup a pint of wine at the Unicorn Ranch bar instead of all that foreign muck in litres!

Speaking of pressure; I was always taught in maths to not mix my units, so condsider the following scenario:
I’m in ‘spoons supping in imperial measures; I wish to nip upstairs to take the proverbial; how should I go about it...to be specific, regarding pressure and flow, should I work in:
a. pounds per square inch (psi), or in millibars (mbar)
b. in pints per second, or in litres per minute?
or carry on as normal?

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Mike Bartram

Sat 13th Jan 2024 11:07

Thank you very much for reading and to Stephen for the lovely comment...really appreciated.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 11:06

or..."One bad turn deserves another"?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 13th Jan 2024 11:04

💗

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Steve White

Sat 13th Jan 2024 07:36

House prices have risen from approximately four times average earnings in the 1990's to nine times or more in recent years, and home ownership has fallen as a consequence. A third of millennials, it is suggested, may never be able to afford to buy their own home, and half of them will still be renting in their 40's.

Our generation(s) have sleepwalked into a world where our children will not have the opportunities that we did. They regard homeowners as wealthy, because that's what they are.

But yes, Reggie's Ghost, the banks do very well out of mortgage lending.

I find Gary Stevenson's YouTube channel very informative on all this stuff.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 13th Jan 2024 01:47

You know your work fascinates me Alexandra. I remember another young lady here on WOL years ago who wrote in a similar style. Pity we can’t talk about the way you put these streams of consciousness together.
Good to see you still writing

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Jan 2024 22:09

Trains of Thought on New Lines Travel

Yellow Train
Citizens Advice
Ticket information
Workshops available

Green Train
Burnage Library
Platform Poets
Expressive delivery

Blue Train
Ghost carriages
Souls depart
Angel Station.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Jan 2024 21:59

Isabella looks back with so much pride to describe her journey.
Achieved with God guiding her all the way with so much love and faith.❀

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Reggie's Ghost

Fri 12th Jan 2024 21:31

People with homes wealthy? Well not for 25 years whilst paying the mortgage. Then not long after finish paying you're an OAP.

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Steve White

Fri 12th Jan 2024 20:04

Thanks Uilleam and Carlton. I have a feeling that I missed a comment that got deleted before I saw it.

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John Coopey

Fri 12th Jan 2024 15:21

What! And deny myself the pleasure of pissing on Tim Martin’s property until we arrive on those “Sunlit uplands” of Brexit?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jan 2024 14:52

Clever and inventive, with a satisfying rhyming process that
suits its stimulating subject. Congratulations.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jan 2024 14:43

That's a bit long-winded but in keeping with your other contributions. Innate moral goodness? Find it where you can
and be grateful. But it can often be a self-interested hydra in
human inter-action.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jan 2024 14:34

Ha...poetry not in motion! I am particularly aware of how
readily the medicos are partial to recommend their various
"treatments" for this common "later in life" condition whilst
being apparently (or intentionally?) unaware of the vital
importance of diet & homeopathic alternatives in combating it
and preventing any worsening towards invasive disease that
is made so much of in their oft-seen advertisments on TV and
in print. A practical hint in closing: A better more "resolving"
stream can be obtained by pinching the male organ immediately behind the glans. This serves to build up some
useful pressure and results in a more forceful completion.
Give it a try when feeling not quite done. As things stand (no pun intended) you have the personal equivalent of the political
inadequacy that is their p..s poor approach to Brexit. 😑

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Manish Singh Rajput

Fri 12th Jan 2024 13:45

Another beautiful poem to your growing collection, Tim. The concept here is very interesting; a lot can happen in the blink of an eye, pleasant or poignant. The lines, "Our lives are full of spontaneous events
Tiny little snippets of time without hints", is so very true. And in response to the last line, I feel that there are "moments before the moment" in which we truly feel the rush of emotions and feelings, the topic which I'm going to write about in the near future.
Thank you, I loved it!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 12th Jan 2024 11:04

Not a cynic thenđŸ’Ș

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 12th Jan 2024 11:02

Time to put the washing out-or not?

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