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Big Sal

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 13:51

Thank you for reading and the like Anya. . .🌷 Very much appreciated.

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Danny G.

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 12:54

Thanks Martin for the positive feedback! I appreciate it! 😊

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elPintor

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 12:24

It's quite a thing to admit now, but I'm somewhat dissatisfied with the form of this post. I wanted to try something new but feel like maybe I went a little overboard.

Thanks, all, for reading--maybe I hit something despite my personal sense of being off target.

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Rose Casserley

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 11:10

BEAUTIFUL! jan




Rose πŸ’‹

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Rose Casserley

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 11:04

very yummy food for thought Frances.






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Rose Casserley

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:48

thankful and muchly so is one that you Big Sal, Taylor, and Frances have done one proud.




Rose πŸ’‹

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:36

Thanks, Jane.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:34

So true.

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Anya

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:21

Damon, there is so much defeat in this poem...

I really feel for you...

Lots of love 😘

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Anya

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:16

Exciting colaboration!!! Thx guys for your creativity ! Combined power πŸ‘πŸ»

Anya xx

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Anya

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:14

Hi Avishek,

It is so hard to look beyond anger...

Thank you! Made me think.

Anya x

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Don Matthews

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:12

Ah, you do my friend. Tina, Tyson and Keith patents are safely held by you. I just patented the FUN BUS. After all it was your creations that helped get this whole concept started. I owe you a lot for that. Consider yourself a co-founder.

Gina, froggie, Princess - without you Brian we would never have been born..ribbit...meow... 😎

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Anya

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:10

Hi Hazel!

Nice to see you posting again πŸ˜ƒ
Brilliant like always . Thank you x

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Anya

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:09

Hi Jane,

We never know what people carry around inside. Great poem! Thank you x

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Nigel Astell

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 10:06

When you go Dorinda please pass on all our respects from our poetry group - - thanks

Mark Sheeky

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:40

Thank you Hugh for the generous comment you made on "Silently Sad"

Jane😊

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:38

Congratulations! A brilliant poem.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:27

You clever old thing. Timeless but very much of these times.

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Hugh

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:23

This poem is sublime,capturing her despair and full of rhyme .Well done.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:06

Thank you Jane from you that means a lot.πŸ’• Taylor

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 08:01

A tender and heartwarming piece. Excellent!

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:53

Rhythmic and romantic. Nice!😊

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:47

I like this poem, it carries a vital message. We should all try and make peace with our enemies.

Well done Avishek! Thank you. Jane

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:43

This is a heartfelt poem but the words and emotion don't seem to flow as easily as your other poems. A very nice effort though!😊

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:38

A rich man is truly the one in touch with his feelings. You are a very rich man! I especially liked the line "My lines are my identity". I can totally relate to this.

Well done...a great poem!

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:33

Your poem is rich in both emotion and pain. The reader can understand this. Nice work. Thanks, Jane

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:17

A well-written delicate poem I'd say. Very nice indeed. Thank you, Jane😊

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 06:50

Short, sweet and written with absolute precision! I love it!

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 06:35

...without a doubt, this is beautiful! It touched me deeply. Thank you!❀

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Brian Maryon

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 06:17

Talking of patents, I thought I held them on Tina and Tyson....

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Jane Briganti

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 05:53

Nice to meet you Fred. Thank for the lovely comment you wrote on "Wedding Bells". It is appreciated.

Your sample poetry is very enticing. I look forward to reading my way through your other poems.

Thank you, Jane😊

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Big Sal

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 04:42

This may be the longest poem I've ever been a part of, but shout out to Ferris Taylor for making it happen! Props dude, you fucking killed it! Top guns blasting at full mast, all cylinders firing hot, and the rhymes to make it all happen. πŸ‘πŸ‘


Written by Big Sal and Ferris Taylor.

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yajaira

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 04:41

Hi Big Sal, thank you for your comment on "My Strawberry Milkshake" I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing (:

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yajaira

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 04:37

Hi Martin, thank you for your comment on "My Strawberry Milkshake" (:

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Don Matthews

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 04:35

It is a cold case so who knows the background.? Agreed, children can follow the way of parents for good or bad. I think (?) they were charged with the murders but fell apart in court. Witnesses afraid of reprisals (?) Insufficient forensic evidence (?). In court it's a game being played between prosecutor and defence. May the best man win.
I don't like this analogy but it's true. Where's the justice in this ??

Putting a newspaper report into rhyme is not easy. You are restricted to words. Thanks for your encouragement

D😎

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 04:12

Thank you, Keith and Martin. Although I am sorry you met 'one' today, Keith.

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Big Sal

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 03:49

Haha thanks Ferris! Glad someone counted! Keep spitting that fire. . .!

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elPintor

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 02:42

Please forgive...I posted this once in a different form and realized that it seemed to be built upon something that I didn't feel was entirely my own. So, this is basically the same idea cloaked in different language. Who among us has entirely original ideas?

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Don Matthews

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 01:00

You know I have two sides. Comic and Serious. Every now and again I like to challenge myself by trying to convert a newspaper report/article into rhyme as I believe rhyme in itself draws the reader in. It can be employed to carry along with it a variety of messages, emotions etc.

This one is a series of articles about true crime here. It appears insufficient evidence surfaced. Of interest is the now DNA tool which can sometimes solve and achieve justice for cold cases.

Thanks for all your comments. Will now let Comic have a go. ribbit...thanks Don

D😎

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Don Matthews

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 00:49

I believe there's got to be something after we leave here. With a science background logic tells me our spirit/soul ? goes nowhere? What a waste of 90 years. I guess I'm talking about recycling. There's gotta be a spirit recycling bank in the sky. I hope the keeper of the bank thinks I'm worth another try. Maybe that's the whole purpose of life.?
Continual recycling in a hope of spirit improvement....

Don 😎

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 00:25

Thank you for commenting on my poem Mortality Hugh. Appreciated..πŸ˜ƒ
Taylor

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Big Sal

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:50

Thank you much. . .🌷

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Fred Varden

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:49

Great poetry Jane!

Fred

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Fred Varden

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:44

Thank you very much ladies for the likes and kind comments πŸ˜€

Fred

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:42

Thanks for commenting Big Sal love the idea of a song. re book it took me about 6 months to write and another 2 months for me to organise format proof read and get to publication.
Taylor

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Tahira Rehman

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:42

Very deep. Unique style of words and how they flow. Good work

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Tahira Rehman

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:39

Thank you for your kind comments. It's her real name πŸ˜€

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Tahira Rehman

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:38

Nicely flows, and I like the rhymes.

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Anya

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:32

Thank you so much Big Sal 😘😘😘

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Big Sal

Wed 1st Aug 2018 23:16

Pictures accompanying a poem often help a reader visualize what the writer is saying, but even if you didn't include one in this, your words would have sufficed. Great imagery and sentiment.πŸ‘

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