This poem is a wonderful compliment to the nature of this story. Great vision Martin. Wonderful.

Comment is about The troubadour (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

M.C. Thank you for your kind appraisal on 'Another Grey Day'. Nose and nasal hair as well. Glad you liked it. Very much appreciated.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Anthony. Thank you very much for your very kind words on 'Another Grey Day'. There is indeed a lot to be said for the 'Rockfords' ;)
I like to think we all have a touch of the Peter Pan syndrome within us.
I would also like to say that 'Visiting Neil' is such a wonderful and moving piece of work.
Sincerely.

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Thank you all for your comments on Firefly over the last days. They were all appreciated.

Comment is about FIREFLY (Revised) (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

'I turn from a Saint
Into some Kamikazi
Ninja Commando
Courage grows...'

I missed this first time round. I agree with Phil it is a marvellous work.

'Where war is fun Because lives aren't
Splattered like paint..'

Great thoughts.

Comment is about Paintballing (blog)

Hi Anthony.

Having now read your paradise poem. (lovely piece) t
Together with mine,both give the impression ones final years are not much fun.

On the contrary performing the last act myself I find the general demeanor to be one of cheerful optimism, right up until the inevitable, despite varying levels of physical discomfort.

Not a long tear soaked episode in anticipation of an agonizing end.

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Hi Anthony

Thanks for that very kind comment, it's always nice to get endorsements from, someone of your standing

Ken.

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Well said, Krissy.
Ah, music...the muse of so much that is good in this life; its language crosses boundaries,
cultures and generations.

Comment is about Music (blog)

Original item by Krissy

Thanks Greg Freeman, for this article; & thanks Daniel Dwyran for the lovely comment. If anyone is within travelling distance of Bradford on Friday 17th October; my new booklet should be available at Glyde House, Gldegate, Bradford BD5 OBQ at the Sentimentalists gig, only £3 entry fee, for an excellent band, with great music & lyrics http://www.sentimentalists.co.uk/live-dates.html

If you can't make it there, look out for a scruffy looking bloke (me) on the streets of Leeds, holding up an A5 booklet & saying 'excuse me please, could I interest you in reading my poetry'. My most regular pitch is on Woodhouse Lane near Becket University, between 3 & 6pm, but since I'm only there when I can make it; don't travel miles trying to find me. You can send me an email if you want a copy: yunojo@hotmail.com

Comment is about Suits you, sir: footslogging poet Joe is a winner as he sells new poems on the streets (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I enjoyed this - with its staccato rhythm A most pleasing evocation of time and place in memory,
real or imagined.

Comment is about So Far Away So Long Ago (blog)

Original item by Gus Jonsson

Hi Daniel,

I think there's a little of the "Peter Pan" in all of us. Call them what you will - Plymouths, Nobbys, Chalfonts, farmers - are a pain in the ass.

Strange how blog entries with similar themes often seem to bunch together (see K.E.D's below yours.) Never admit to growing up, it takes all the fun out of life!

Regards,

A.E.

Comment is about ANOTHER GREY DAY (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

Hi Laura. I'm really happy you enjoyed my poem. The truth is that I make these things up. Depending on what issue I'm writing on I try to get into someone else's mind and shoes. Words just come out and really try to feel what could be felt. Thank you for your comments.

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

A real mood piece that readily evokes the chill
of death and autumn.
For my part...
I'll settle for the passing pyre
Of the convenient cremation fire
(And it says as much in my will!)

Comment is about funeral days (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Dear Susan, thank you. I was moved by your kind words. Please consider that you have a new friend in Venezuela. My best to you.

Comment is about Blackworld (poet profile)

Original item by Blackworld

And did you know your nose never stops growing?
As one of the above - but thankfully minus
the piles - I'll say here and now that
adaptability is the secret of success.

Comment is about ANOTHER GREY DAY (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

That's how it is performed, and thank you so much! :)

Comment is about Town (blog)

Original item by Joe-Conor Williams (Saboteur)

no apologies needed for me Daniel,I'm a go with the flow kinda gal! main thing is keep this quality coming! love it!x

Comment is about FIREFLY (Revised) (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

sooooooo well done Clever Cath.x

Comment is about Getting a Ribbing (blog)

Original item by CathyLCrabb

and in this poem Martin you have done as the last line suggests-brill stuff mate!x

Comment is about The troubadour (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

I like this one a lot. So much said and to the point.Nicely packaged. I look forward to more

Comment is about Getting a Ribbing (blog)

Original item by CathyLCrabb

Thanks Natalie.
I was trying to be clever and did need to apologise for the first draft. It was liked but my innermost concience disliked why I did it. Honesty is the best policy even to yourself.
Glad you like this version.

Comment is about FIREFLY (Revised) (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

To Die For

High priest demands
a human sacrifice.

Those that question
stand against faith.

Wars of destruction
between hostile tribes.

The God to
worship and obey.

Is the one
who gives you.

The life that
you fight for.

Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport in Halloween mood tonight at Stockport art gallery (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

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Comment is about Agony Aiane (poet profile)

Original item by Agony Aiane

A great article on a unique purveyor of the spoken word. If his exploits do not inspire or give you a large portion of the feel good factor... check for an appointment with your GP!
"Go Joe"!

Comment is about Suits you, sir: footslogging poet Joe is a winner as he sells new poems on the streets (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Carrie you might already have noticed that when someone posted several poems in one go only the last one posted stays live on the blog listing, the other go to your archives. The problem with this is only the latest one tends to get seen. Just a thought!

Comment is about Carrie Kreger (poet profile)

Original item by Carrie Kreger

Hello Carrie,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

Could you please upload a picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

Comment is about Carrie Kreger (poet profile)

Original item by Carrie Kreger

That's very true Natalie.
(Good luck on your course and awaiting 'the deeper stuff';)) Keep on keepin' on.

Comment is about Different Styles (blog)

Clever title. Great poem. Mother's love.

Comment is about Getting a Ribbing (blog)

Original item by CathyLCrabb

This poem is like a testament to true love..
'with eyelids plastered together by a false hope they created in their imagination
making dreams their heaven
because they were too weak to open their eyes up to hell'
Sounds very much if it is written from the heart.

Comment is about Dreaming (blog)

Original item by Roxie

'Crying rivers to slowly dislodge you from your refuge
reminiscing about translucent thinking...'
Great lines... you can read the inner fear which can only compliment the title.

'Self-hatred being flattered by jealousy
You're so wondrous
I bet your blood flows like poetry'
Mixed messages here but great descriptive words. (...and thanks for your note):)

Comment is about Afraid (blog)

Original item by Roxie

All previous comments were removed as an apology for my percieved hidden joviality which I now realise had the potential to hurt and offend. Thank you for your comments. I have now revised the poem and hope you can feel the spirit of it in a proper manner.
DD

Comment is about FIREFLY (Revised) (blog)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

I love this!!! Couldn't agree with you more. Your great rhythm and word choice drives your points

Comment is about Rant (written 2009) (blog)

Original item by Krissy

Thank you for the comments guys!

Comment is about Blink (blog)

Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis

It's quite amusing, my writing skills. I cannot simply write a masterpiece, I acquire my writing abilities from "out of the blue" moments. I have an idea and I, in a fickle manner, dash to writing material and "Voila!" Poetry.

Comment is about Piecing of the Broken Heart (blog)

Original item by Agony Aiane

I only came across Hannah Lowe on the weekend, "Chick" sounds very good, sent off for my copy, hoping to be impressed.

Comment is about Family odyssey: Hannah Lowe's tale of the first ship that brought Caribbean migrants to Britain (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Hello Edith,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

Could you please upload a recent picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

Comment is about Edith (group profile)

Original item by Edith

Hello Chris,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

Thanks for uploading a picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

Comment is about ChrisJay (poet profile)

Original item by ChrisJay

Hello Roxie,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

Thanks for uploading a picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

Comment is about Roxie (poet profile)

Original item by Roxie

This is so touching. Beautiful writing x

Comment is about Mini Me (blog)

Original item by Dominique Smith-Bryant

This made me giggle. I'll remember it!!! x

Comment is about Sound advice (blog)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

Lovely!! Sometimes I wish it wasn't the same magical almost painful feeling, but it is. We would all be hungry without it! Wonderfully put xxx

Comment is about Music (blog)

Original item by Krissy

Deep introspective stuff but with a really readable and accessible quality. Excellent work,
Steve

Comment is about Arsonist (blog)

This is interesting. Is this a day after feeling when you can't decide why you said yes, or something more?

Comment is about Man Handled (blog)

Thanks for looking in Natalie and you two Wildes

Comment is about Mother (blog)

Original item by Steve Higgins

I loved reading this lol. Awesome job!

Comment is about Mania (blog)

Original item by Charlotte

sooooo sweet,sooooo moving!Thanks Dominique.xx

Comment is about Mini Me (blog)

Original item by Dominique Smith-Bryant

Awww! God bless 'em all! now then Steve,although it is nice to see you blogging,will you do as you're told,and put that bloody glass down-or pass it in our direction!...:o|..xx

Comment is about Mother (blog)

Original item by Steve Higgins

fabgear samples Joe.

Welcome and keep on rolling-as in poetry

not the *other*-haha!.xx

Comment is about Joe-Conor Williams (Saboteur) (poet profile)

Original item by Joe-Conor Williams (Saboteur)

Thank you so much guys :)

Comment is about Under City Boy (blog)

Original item by Joe-Conor Williams (Saboteur)

This is absolutely lovely Natalie! :) x

Comment is about I Am An Ocean (blog)