Majestic flames
Yellow to ochre
Leaping sparks
Out of Hades
Aimless spark, Oh
Delightful ember
Of Lilliputian beauty
Fragrance akin to
Burned incense
On hot charcoal
Lovingly
Lying low, in state
On the Tuareg
Carpet of dreams
Kaleidoscopic flames enhance
Subtle shades
(C) Daniel Dwyran
Thank you all for your comments on Firefly over the last days. They were all appreciated.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Fri 10th Oct 2014 16:45
no apologies needed for me Daniel,I'm a go with the flow kinda gal! main thing is keep this quality coming! love it!x
Thanks Natalie.
I was trying to be clever and did need to apologise for the first draft. It was liked but my innermost concience disliked why I did it. Honesty is the best policy even to yourself.
Glad you like this version.
All previous comments were removed as an apology for my percieved hidden joviality which I now realise had the potential to hurt and offend. Thank you for your comments. I have now revised the poem and hope you can feel the spirit of it in a proper manner.
DD
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Jeff Dawson
Sun 12th Oct 2014 17:42
Shame I missed the original mate, great images here though, can feel the warmth radiating through, no need for the apology, just what we need with the autumn nights closing in, Jeff