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Steve White

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 20:10

Now with added chorus:
https://youtu.be/DK6rXNxhkcQ

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 19:34

Indeed, Stephen. Although I fancy it would have been Sarah Millican.

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Landi Cruz

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 18:52

I hope a million times again )

Joyous spring is like reprieve, every year so far without fail--what a gift...

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 17:32

Thanks to Nigel, Graham, Holden, Blackrose, Russell, Tom, Hélène, Bethany and Pete.

I should say that these poems are in the public domain, so anyone is welcome to use them.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 17:29

Fantastic, John. I bet someone's got a few bars stashed away. My money's on John Prescott.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 17:19

Good to hear from you, Rasa. A poem that's anything but mundane!

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David RL Moore

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 10:46

Thank you for your reading and likes.

One rather strange posted and subsequently removed comment, but thanks for reading.

I have had friends and colleagues who for various reasons have succumbed to the bottle in a manner which resulted in their death. In all cases the picking up of the bottle was not the origins of their ultimate demise, in all cases tragic.

The often invisible and silent battle that precedes the picking up of the bottle is worth considering when we see the more apparent damage first hand. That many are unable to articulate and speak of their tribulations is part of their added torture.

I speak with some knowledge although not yet drowned or drowning (I should possibly reserve that judgement for those who know me well enough)

There is humour even in tragedy, keep smiling.

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Bindu Trigunayak

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 10:16

Thanks, maám...I am doing fine...Hope for the same🌷💖

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Bindu Trigunayak

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 10:13

Thanks, Keith, for your like..💐

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John Coopey

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 10:05

Thanks, Pete.
Where ya gone, Bethany?

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R A Porter

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 09:16

A powerful poem on this desperately sad war Stephen. I felt uneasy from the beginning about how long it could last and how many lives it would claim. The one glimmer was when there was a direct internal threat to Putin (albeit from a brutal mercenary group leader), but once that was extinguished he was more powerful than ever - and if and when he does finally go there doesn’t appear to be much hope for anything better. It’s so important to keep reminding people about what is happening - watching Ukrainian soldiers training for trench warfare on the news whilst knowing how unequal the resources are was chilling.

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keith jeffries

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 09:12

This was the first poem I read this morning before breakfast. It gladdens my spirit to read such words. An uplifting poem.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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Wordseffectbrew

Fri 23rd Feb 2024 08:39

I’m glad you can appreciate. The time we do not plan on is a gift to reflect and feel for those around us. Our time is precious but at least it is still ours.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 23:54

John,
Thank you for this poem as it endorses the very reason I had to get out of the UK and rid myself of an intolerable environment. As Uilleam says we have money for foreign military adventures but fail to see our own house in order first. This poem is a litany, a summary of what ails Britain. A country mismanaged by mediocre politicians whose salary for sitting in parlaiment is augmented by second and third jobs. I thought there were at the helm of the nation to represent us and not moonlighting.
Excellent poem and thank you for putting it so eloquently.
Keith

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Pete (edbreathe)

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 22:55

Love it

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John Coopey

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 22:40

Ah, "Give it to me", Bethany. That was The Troggs as I remember.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y9VEeV_am8w

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 21:39

Many thanks, Keith. It's on the way.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 19:51

Stephen,
Congratulations on your latest book. I am a fan of yours and would appreciate a PDF copy if at all possible.
Thanks,
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 17:26

Brought back memories of those great days of rugby - sidesteps and all. One of the greatest. Thank you, David.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:58

Carlton,
Thank you for the information contained in your response to my comment. It's a wonder our paths never crossed as I worked in Oman for close on eight years. Whilst there I visited a few of the Gulf States. My experience of the Holy Land was in the main leading pilgrimages and raising funds in the UK for orphanges on the West Bank.

Whilst working in Oman I learned Arabic from a Palestinian gentleman and came to know many other such people who carried Jordanian passports but came from Palestine originally. I was made very aware of the situation in Palestine and this was supported by a Rabbi friend of mine in Jerusalem.

I used the words 'A Noble People' in a very general sense of the word. I found most Palestinians to be erudite people with an unusually high proportion who were University graduates. I also found them to be articulate and well travelled.

I understand and support your views on the use of term 'hitleresque'. I now live in Spain and have done so on and off since 1967 when I was stationed in Gibraltar and frequently hear the expression 'Francismo' referring to Franco the erstwhile dictator.

Your explanation of this poem and the historical facts you raise, I believe, are worthwhile especially for the benefit of fellow members who do not have a good knowledge of history. I thank you for taking the time and trouble in addressing me on the issue of Palestine. Incidentaly I enjoy your poetic style. Thank you again. Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:49

So much of modern warfare is anonymous, Keith, absolving participants from guilt if they choose not to have any. I think your poem illustrates this perfectly.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:44

Bravo! This gentleman is a most worthy member of a vital and
deservedly respected profession with his message of the
importance of instilling basic humanity in the business of
caring for others. The same message is equally relevant
to poetry itself.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:36

I am no expert on these events but certainly see their value and
appeal for the performing ranks in poetry. In passing, I wonder
if they ever see anyone secure enough (and brave enough) to
get up and say something positive from a Tory perspective-
with a poem called "Red Wall" perhaps? 😋

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:26

HM/AS and SA...thanks for the "likes".

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:22

UOC - I guess that time will be the ultimate arbiter about that.
Faint heart never won fair future! As for the parlous state of
Parliament these days, there can be no better (worse?) example
than the farce seen there yesterday as a result of the Speaker's
decision to override accepted convention and fiddle with the
voting process - essentially letting the Opposition leader escape an embarrassing revolt in his own party ranks. Impartiality
took a dive that day!

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:08

An excellent illustration with a poem to match.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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David RL Moore

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 16:00

My brief period of City commuting was peppered with suicide's causing track delays. It's one of the reasons I decided more dangerous places were safer for me.

Commuting nearly killed me, souless, life sucking drudgery. And yes we cursed those who delayed our homecomings, how utterly despicable.

Good poem, escape as soon as possible, my advice.

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David Subacchi

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 12:11

Tribute to Welsh and International rugby legend Barry John.

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Chris Armstrong

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 10:36

Clare - I have just found a poem by Paul Celan: Line the Wordcaves, which you may like!

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 09:28

This poem is a statement to wake up humanity. Everyone should read it.
Thank you,
Keith

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David RL Moore

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 07:56

Thank you for the recent likes.

Reflecting on the comments I made yesterday and reading them this morning has reminded me of the vulnerabilities people expose themselves to when they actively seek to support others, irrespective of their own allegiances and beliefs.

Knowing the realities of situations having had first hand experience of them is burdensome, especially when attempting to describe honestly what you have seen and learned.

Of course many might say there is no necessity for anyone to unburden themselves on this forum. I say why not?

I'm pleased with my poem and am continually motivated by the thought outlined in its final stanza. Thankyou.

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 07:28

😂😂😂

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Steve White

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 06:12

Thanks Stephen.

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David RL Moore

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 05:24

This surely qualifies as fast fiction.

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Jeff Bresee

Thu 22nd Feb 2024 03:46

Steal away 😃

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 21st Feb 2024 22:09

Thanks John.
We've money for bombs and bullets to kill poor folk in faraway places, but not for crumbling NHS maternity units, beds and staff, and our childrens' schools.
Good to see that we "civilised" folk in the UK have our priorities sorted out.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 21st Feb 2024 21:48

Yeah, who needs principled stands eh Reggie’s?
let’s get rid of laws against terrorism, rape and murder.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Feb 2024 21:04

A very well-crafted poem with a strong message, Steve. So many of us are cogs in a wheel, possibly without even realising it.

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Steve White

Wed 21st Feb 2024 19:16

And thanks Reggie's Ghost.

Actually I'm pretty comfortable that my employment choices haven't contributed to the murder of other people but that's not the point. The point is that there are human beings with human emotions and human inconsistencies wherever you look, in this or any other story, and sometimes those people will help you understand the story better.

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Steve White

Wed 21st Feb 2024 19:12

Thanks Keith!

I've been doing a floor spot at Poems Not Bombs in Walthamstow quite regularly so the poem will no doubt get an outing there.

The band are gearing up for the music festival season and we'll be announcing our appearances as and when the stages publish. Gig announcements usually end up here: https://protestfamily.com/live/ (We could always do with more of them if there are any promoters reading this...)

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 21st Feb 2024 18:39

Thanks JD.
Just because...you're worth it.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Feb 2024 17:08

Beautiful and sobering, Hélène. Puts life into perspective.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Feb 2024 17:06

Cheeky little number and good fun, Ray. Reminds me of Gary Bloke from Private Eye!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Feb 2024 16:58

Thanks, Greg. A dreadful anniversary indeed.

Thank you, John. Yes, there seems to be too much wavering on this crucial matter in the West, while Putin seems horribly implacable.

And thanks to Rob, Tim, Hélène, K Lynn, Holden, Stephen, Steve, Graham and RG for liking this one.

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Jon

Wed 21st Feb 2024 16:27

Thanks Aisha

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Reggie's Ghost

Wed 21st Feb 2024 16:24

A well constructed piece Steve with a strong message.

There are probably not too many jobs that don't have some sort of impact on things we find unpalatable, which could be environmental, military, health etc. If we all took a principled stand then we will indeed be jobless and queueing at the foodbank.

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keith jeffries

Wed 21st Feb 2024 16:19

Very well put together and to the point. A poem worthy of being disseminated as it would gather quite an audience. Do you have any gigs lined up Steve.
Thanks for this,
Keith

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Steve White

Wed 21st Feb 2024 15:26

Thanks Uilleam.

Funnily enough it'll end up in a series I'm writing called Songs From World War Three.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 21st Feb 2024 15:22

Thanks Keith.
I often contrast in my mind the slight sense of insecurity, that feeling of "adventure" in a foreign land, which I experienced whilst backpacking, with the plight of those forced to flee their homes under threat of bombing, only to be killed whilst on the road.

We should be bringing the whole of London and our cities to a standstill in protest at the abomination being perpetrated in our name, and expelling the ambassador of that fascist government reponsible.

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John Coopey

Wed 21st Feb 2024 15:19

MC - Gerry Fitt was the last of the SDLP which got squeezed out of the middle ground by Sinn Fein. He famously refused to support the Callaghan government on a vote which ultimately brought it down and ushered in the Thatcher government of 1979.

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