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Sun 1st Jan 2023 01:36

Lovely poem Julie and such a beautiful coloured species of bird.
Thank you.

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 1st Jan 2023 00:03

Thanks kindly Hélène, WOL is quite the place to be. 🌷

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:39

Love and best wishes for 2023.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:16

Love and best wishes for 2023.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:15

Love and best wishes for 2023.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:14

Love and best wishes to all for 2023.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:11

Love and best wishes to all for the new year.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:10

Love and best wishes for the new year.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 23:08

All my love to you and yours for 2023.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 31st Dec 2022 21:10

Time will not wait
the past moves on
so should we.

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keith jeffries

Sat 31st Dec 2022 19:45

Thank you, and the same to you Julie.
Keith

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Greg Freeman

Sat 31st Dec 2022 19:03

Many thanks for your kind comments, Ray, Uilleam, Steve, and Hélène. And for the Likes, Nigel, Frederick, Chris and Holden. A very happy new year to you all.

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Hélène

Sat 31st Dec 2022 17:25

Love this! The poems on WOL on the cusp of the new year 2023 are full of beautiful imagery. Thanks Frederick & all WOL writers!

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Hélène

Sat 31st Dec 2022 17:21

Beautiful!! So vivid I felt I was there.

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Hélène

Sat 31st Dec 2022 17:19

Yes, like Graham & the others, I found this to be a powerful poem. Really vivid imagery & deep sentiment. Like Uilleam points out, so so different from tech devices. I suspect Mrs. Binfield would have a pleased smile on her face to see her little prayer book rescued & cherished. Well done Ray & thank you!

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keith jeffries

Sat 31st Dec 2022 17:05

I have one almost identical but with a blue cover dated 1960
"Be a good soldier" was taken from the lesson for the day..
Hold onto it Ray
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 31st Dec 2022 16:58

As an activist and a renegade I applaud this poem
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 31st Dec 2022 16:57

A masterful poem of epic proportions which speaks for many of us who have become disillusioned in the eternal hope for something better and more just.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Red Brick Keshner

Sat 31st Dec 2022 15:50

Thanks Keith (Jeffries) Happy New Year! 🌷

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Dec 2022 15:45

A timely theme for the arrival of a New Year when we are
exhorted "Out with the Old/ In with the New".
Passed - but not handed on
Its journey focusses thoughts upon
A move that guarantees an existence
Continues through humane persistence.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:47

A fascinating poem, Hélène.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:35

Glad to see that you saved it, Ray, even if it does live in 'Pious obscurity'. I'm sure that it's quite grateful.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:30

A very evocative poem, Greg. The (relatively new) moon in conjunction with a planet or star is a wonderful sight.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:27

A very powerful poem, David.

Best wishes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:20

Thank you for your positive comments, Keith. As a general rule, I don't like the removal of statues but I can understand this one. Hopefully, some solution will be found, perhaps involving a museum.

And thanks to Frederick, Greg, Jordyn, Uilleam, Your Royal Poetess, Rudyard and Flyntland for liking this last poem of 2022.

A happy new year to everyone.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 14:04

Learn to love your ownself first 

For if you can't love yourself 

Then it's impossible to love others 


So true!

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keith jeffries

Sat 31st Dec 2022 12:20

Beautifully and thoughtfully crafted with good imagery.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 10:02

Oh gorgeous Northumberland, with that beautiful coast.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 09:58

The pocket book with its red cloth cover

well thumbed by a neighbour's hands

Such items speak to us in a way that no mobile or PC screen ever could.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 09:51

Do not be silent!

I will not be silent.
I will refuse to "go gentle into that good night"

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 31st Dec 2022 09:13

Lard an gin

Must try it sometime!

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Martin Elder

Sat 31st Dec 2022 08:59

Thank you Keith. I do tend to get more than a little cynical at this time of the year. i always value your comments
Thanks again old friend

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raypool

Sat 31st Dec 2022 08:41

Full of romantic undertones, it's easy to build a picture and sense the passion behind your move Greg. Up north feels almost as far away as Jupiter itself! Enjoy your new year together....

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Sat 31st Dec 2022 06:33

Thanks, Graham ... and a happy new year to you, and all at Write Out Loud. Living up here is changing the kind of poetry I write, at least at the moment.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 31st Dec 2022 00:13

It’s beautiful up that way Greg, lucky fellow.
Jupiter was really showing off wasn’t it. I need an app to help me recognise the planets these days.

Lovely evocative piece. I see you’ve also got dolphins up there now!
Happy New Year

G

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 31st Dec 2022 00:06

This struck a chord Ray. Can’t really explain why for some reason.
Happy New Year

G

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ZTK Space

Fri 30th Dec 2022 22:45



more prevalent than ever before as now, apartheid is placed in the subliminal conscience of yourself they never want you to get in touch with.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vP4iY1TtS3s

I have a dream too MLK. xxx

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John Coopey

Fri 30th Dec 2022 22:43

I remember him being carted off against Portugal, Greg, but the damage was done against earlier teams (Bulgaria rings a bell).
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Nigel and Chris.

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Dec 2022 22:14

Thank you to all for your 'likes' and also to Graham and Stephen for their comments. They are all much appreciated. Keep on writing folks
Keith

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raypool

Fri 30th Dec 2022 21:30

Thank you Uilleam for your effective protest in support of my view. I wonder that millions can be so misled, it has me scuttling into dark corners of discontent.

Thanks for looking in, Brenda and Frederick!

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Fri 30th Dec 2022 21:24

Marvellous stuff, John. He was certainly kicked out of the World Cup in '66.

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John Marks

Fri 30th Dec 2022 19:31

Thank you Rose, Hélène, Stephen, Flyntland and Keith. Flyntland, I think my mood was certainly not manic, more a low level depression that lingers. Rose, I do hope that your derrière is responding to treatment! WE can wallow in emptiness or try to fill the void - that's why I write poetry.

“We're all going to die, all of us, what a circus! That alone should make us love each other but it doesn't. We are terrorized and flattened by trivialities, we are eaten up by nothing.”
― Charles Bukowski

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Dec 2022 18:47

"it's short term remember", are the words that stand out for me in this poem. The need to realise that we are only passing through as all is transient. This should spur us on to be positive and make good use of the time we have.
A philosophical poem about life's journey with a good sense of optimism in it.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Dec 2022 18:42

Stephen,
Well rhymed and well written. This does not come as a surprise as the Ukrainians are endeavouring to establish their national identity, their language and culture without the influences and memories of the past. They are also inspired by anger for what they have suffered.
A topical poem with a good sense of awareness.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Dec 2022 17:23

I like the physicality of this piece, Keith. It highlights the contribution of body and mind to what is finally produced on paper. Thanks.

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John Coopey

Fri 30th Dec 2022 17:23

Thankyou, Graham and Stephen. Another one of his famous misses was when he lobbed the Czechoslovak (I think) goalie from the half way line. He looked like man chased by a ghost.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Dec 2022 17:12

A heartwarming, positive poem, Hélène.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Dec 2022 17:10

A great tribute, John. His greatest moment that I remember was one when he FAILED to score - selling the Uruguayan goalkeeper an outrageous dummy in Mexico '70 and just missing in the side netting. I'll look for it on you tube. Happy New Year, in spite of the sad day.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Dec 2022 16:59

Indeed, John. A blast from the past which hasn't aged at all.

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keith jeffries

Fri 30th Dec 2022 15:23

Martin,
this really is a work of art as you have turned the festive into a lament. Perhaps this was not your intention. As Christmas approaches I find myself wishing it was already over and done with. The same goes for the New Year. Surely all this frenetic energy and spending does not constitute joy. When it is all over we are financially worse off, suffering with hangovers and with the winter left to face and deal with. I somehow feel that we have forgotten or lost the reason for this festive celebration.
Thanks for a well thought out and truthful poem.
Keith

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