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John Coopey

Sat 11th Apr 2015 14:28

Indeed, Ken. "Quaint" as they say.

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Travis Brow

Sat 11th Apr 2015 12:14

''ride mahout.../and tug reluctant'', lovely phrasing Jeremy.

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Travis Brow

Sat 11th Apr 2015 12:11

Thank you Lea; one from the heart.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Sat 11th Apr 2015 11:39

Oo-er what a carry-on

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Sat 11th Apr 2015 10:46

thanks Preeti and Rose.xx

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Eva Elizabeth

Sat 11th Apr 2015 09:43

Thank you! Your poems were great too! x

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 11th Apr 2015 08:45

Hi Eva, welcome to WOL, great to see you at Wigan, really enjoyed your poems, great performance too, keep writing and hope to see you again soon Jeffarama! x

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jeremy young

Sat 11th Apr 2015 04:12

@lynn thank you

@marie-anne I suppose in part - but it is a response to a below the line comment in the guardian

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:49

I really like this one! I love learning too x

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:43

I really enjoyed this one too Travis, thanks :)

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:41

Heh heh! Love this Louise, thanks :)

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:39

Jackie, this is so lovely - I can feel it, really sort of tactile, thanks :)

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:28

Hi Jack, I really like this - have always been intrigued by those checky trousers chefs wear :)

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Marie-Anne Marten

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:24

Nice! I hope it is a true recollection.

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:20

Hi Jack, thanks for your comments on my stuff. Am just having a read of yours and enjoying them - giving me a giggle, so thanks :)

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:12

Great answer! I like the idea that the afterlife might be in the ground - find that kinda reassuring.

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:07

I enjoyed reading this one, and then even more with the audio. Can relate to the nervousness, but I for one love hearing them in the poet's own voice. Favourite lines are 'a bog of wet denim on laundry day' and, well pretty much that whole second stanza.

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Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:03

Hey, thanks for your really lovely comment on Cool & Sad, I appreciate it :)

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John Coopey

Fri 10th Apr 2015 23:56

Yes, Louise, I thoroughly enjoyed it too.
My own take:-
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=40208

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Fri 10th Apr 2015 16:44

Indeed, Kenneth, well observed.

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John Bastard

Fri 10th Apr 2015 11:43

holy smokes this is beautiful.

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Fri 10th Apr 2015 11:10

love the submissive ending.Great poem.x

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Fri 10th Apr 2015 10:54

Agree with Preeti.And such a great title.Well done Stef.x

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 10th Apr 2015 08:48

I truly enjoyed reading this poem. Your use of the ink stain metaphor is done really well and I particularly like the last line which adds that little element of surprise at the end. Thanks for sharing :-)

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 10th Apr 2015 08:37

Thank you, it brings a big smile to my face when somebody enjoys what I have written. :-D

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 10th Apr 2015 08:35

Hi Zach - Of the poems of yours that I have read so far, this I think is my favourite one yet. Your poetry seems to me, to be multifaceted and when I read it I find different meanings within it every time. It is sort of disjointed and yet flowing.

There are so many lines in this poem that I like but I think the one I like best is, 'WE RE MADE OUT OF FUCKING PEOPLE!' which of course is true in every respect.

Keep writing !!!

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 10th Apr 2015 00:17

I do not know anything about the technicalities of poetry
but the Andrew Motion winning entry to me is an example of pushing credibility that bit too far. I've seen better descriptions of topical events in the free newspaper on the bus.
He,I think, has taken advantage of the Afghanistan tragedy to influence the judges with a meritless work that in my opinion, for such a highly estimable competition is a masterpiece in mediocrity.

There has GOT to be something more deserving among the other contestants.

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Julian (Admin)

Thu 9th Apr 2015 18:31

Well, I understand your concern, but I don't think Grayson Perry can be accused of being part of the poetry establishment, can he?

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jack purvis

Thu 9th Apr 2015 13:23

Beautifully silly

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jack purvis

Thu 9th Apr 2015 13:20

Glad I found you looking forward to more

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jack purvis

Thu 9th Apr 2015 13:16

My type of humour. Good on yer!

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 9th Apr 2015 12:25

Stef, this is fabulous ! And so sad...

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Thu 9th Apr 2015 11:52

Amazing, a virtual unknown wins major poetry prize.

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David Cooke

Thu 9th Apr 2015 09:33

Hi Thanks for the interesting comment on my kids poem.

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Jackie Phillips

Thu 9th Apr 2015 08:37

Oooh! I like this poem, you set the scene brilliantly and the words hold an icy tingle.

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Travis Brow

Thu 9th Apr 2015 06:41

Thank you Lynn.

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that bloody poet

Thu 9th Apr 2015 00:59

i really enjoy this. :)

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that bloody poet

Thu 9th Apr 2015 00:58

i really liked how adventurous this felt. really good read for me personally. :)

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that bloody poet

Thu 9th Apr 2015 00:55

very good read. i could go for this.

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Jackie Phillips

Wed 8th Apr 2015 21:46

Thanks Shirley

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Starr Steele

Wed 8th Apr 2015 15:47

I loved this

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Lynn Hamilton

Wed 8th Apr 2015 11:03

Brilliant!

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Lynn Hamilton

Wed 8th Apr 2015 11:00

Really enjoyed reading - lovely

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Robert Mann

Tue 7th Apr 2015 20:31

Love the idea Laura - but can you follow through?

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Robert Mann

Tue 7th Apr 2015 15:56

Jeremy - thanks for the comments and the advice on The Crow. On this occasion I have amended the second half of the line altogether. I also hope you enjoy the additional stanza!

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 7th Apr 2015 14:13

Attending this launch was a real delight. Firstly in seeing so many members of the Manchester live poetry scene supporting these two popular poets, and Flapjack Press; secondly in witnessing this perhaps tardy acknowledgement of their page poetry credentials; even more in the joy of hearing the pair read their words to us. Though both have huge claims to theatrical skills, their renditions were grounded in themselves, in their own vernacular voices. Edward Hirsch reckons that poetry is "a means of exchange, a form of reciprocity, a magic to be shared, a gift". This reading reinforced that thesis. Get the book to receive your own poetic gifts.
See photos of the event in gallery Melanie Rees and Sarah Miller anthology launch 23r (3)
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/galleries.php#_gallerypage1

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Tom

Tue 7th Apr 2015 11:08

Thanks for your comment on Division Street. Cheers, T.

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 7th Apr 2015 09:03

Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 7th Apr 2015 08:58

Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 7th Apr 2015 08:55

Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk

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