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raypool

Fri 21st Mar 2025 16:36

A bit of adolescence creeping in I reckon Martin. So many long marriages might have started in this fashion that it is believable with the benefit of age!

Ray

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raypool

Fri 21st Mar 2025 16:33

Apart from the sheer delight in the lines, " confident in the friction of bare skin" stands out for me Jonathan.
A very fine piece indeed.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 21st Mar 2025 16:29

I think the first line says it all , from that all flows like a stream of dark consciousness -I was thinking of vitriol, a great word, (vitriolic sounds like a new spray cleanser - to be applied liberally! ) Sorry to go off piste.

Best, Ray

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David RL Moore

Fri 21st Mar 2025 14:57

Thanks for the likes Graham and Landi,

The old adage used to be until the threat is illiminated...but I might suggest until the magazine is empty, fire at will.

Thanks again.

David RL Moore

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Mike McPeek

Fri 21st Mar 2025 14:27

Thanks for commenting Martin!

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Hélène

Fri 21st Mar 2025 13:26

A powerful poem for these tough times.

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Hélène

Fri 21st Mar 2025 13:24

A splendid poem Luke. A lovely music-filled love song.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 21st Mar 2025 09:49

I’ve changed my mind several times reading this David. How many bullets are we allowed?

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 20th Mar 2025 19:59

Thank you, Martin, I really appreciate your kind comment! 😊

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Thu 20th Mar 2025 18:07

If I could afford
to buy sand,
a beachful, say,
I'd get my little plastic spade,
and a lot of hessian sacks,
then slowly, carefully,
fill each with bits of beach.

To the top, so there is
no more room.

I'd fasten each one,
tight as a fighter's fist,
then the next, and
the next, until
I had a huge pile
of sacks of sand,
enough to stand
one
on
top
of
the
other.

I would put the first one
beside my front door,
and another
on top of the first,
and so on,
and on,
until you couldn't see
my house for sandbags,
except the door.

Once I'd stacked
the sacks,
I'd empty racks,
of the supermarkets:
loo roll, bread,
fruit, tinned beans,
and coffee
(finest Arabica) -
just the essentials.

When the time
comes - when the
fading sunset appears
to our West,
or the orange glow makes
an off-the-cuff remark -
I would stack the last few,
sand-filled, hessian sacks
in front of my door,
lock it, make myself
comfortable, and
wait for
the inevitable.

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Marla Joy

Thu 20th Mar 2025 17:44

This poem tells a story anyone can relate to. Nice. Marla

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Flyntland

Thu 20th Mar 2025 17:05

I really like this endearing poem - written from an unusual perspective - it makes for interesting. reading.

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David RL Moore

Thu 20th Mar 2025 16:38

Hi Ray,

good to see you here, the piece certainly challenges us all to think...if not for those suffering at least for ourselves in years to come.

It is difficult for partners to soldier on when the other is suffering, to witness it and to remain in a receptive mode...this may sound selfish but I feel it is realistic.

Maybe the trick is to love the sufferer and save the bitterness for the affliction.

Things certainly do not get easier for us as we get older. We become invisible to many.

Love to you both pal.

David

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Wordseffectbrew

Thu 20th Mar 2025 16:08

Hi Lorraine, thanks for your comment on my TO LET poem. It just very strange to me that we all have a room we all use every day and yet it somehow feels strange to think it is not solely ours alone, knowing what a refuge it can be. Enjoying your work also.
Kind regards,
Rich.

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Lorraine Settanni

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:33

Hi Rich, thank you for your image of a nurturing safe haven. I love the energy of your vision.

best wishes,
Lorraine

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Martin Elder

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:30

succinct and too the point . Wonderful

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Martin Elder

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:28

Sorry to hear that you have this debilitating condition. It can't be pleasant but none the less I love your poem, particularly
the lines

but not this festering blood bound

contagion that swims through you

and never comes up for air.
marvellous. Glad to see you have not lost your creative edge.

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Martin Elder

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:22

I like this Holden not just for its clever use of words but also for its simple sense of poetry. Nice one

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Martin Elder

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:20

This is a clever play on words Stephen. Nice one

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Rolph David

Thu 20th Mar 2025 15:09

Hey Tom,

Your comment had me grinning from ear to ear! 😆 I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem—your kind words made my day. More laughs coming your way soon!

Cheers,
Rolph

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 20th Mar 2025 13:31

Thank you, Graham! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 20th Mar 2025 06:58

Like Graham, I have mixed feelings about 'likes" here, Ray. It is a great achievemnt to write something so profound and readable on such a tragic subject. This is the sort of poem that should be widely read, though behind it there is a difficult personal situation.
I can only sympathise and admire the day-to-day courage.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 20th Mar 2025 05:54

Wow!! susurrus of a sorceress,

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 19th Mar 2025 16:55

I feel guilty 'liking' this Ray. I was really pleased to see a new entry by yourself and then I read this tortuous piece about such a pernicious debilitating malady.

You imply it is your better half/partner who is the real sufferer but suffice to say that you have put the fear of christ up us all as we age. Bravo!

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TOM MERTON

Wed 19th Mar 2025 09:56

😅😅😅 hilarious Rolph, and then some ( more please 👍 )

A side split thank you sir!

my rib tickled regards my friend!

Tom

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TOM MERTON

Wed 19th Mar 2025 09:13

Thank you Hélène for liking
''The holding back of tears and anger'

kind regards

Tom

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 18th Mar 2025 22:16

Thanks @Rolph David. Been a while since but I find it beneficial to craft along the range and be bothered to do so periodically. Most appreciated 🌷🙏🏻🕊

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 18th Mar 2025 22:14

Thanks @Tom Merton 🌷kind of you to say so🙏🏻🕊

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Naomi

Tue 18th Mar 2025 17:57

Dear Rolph,
Thank you for such an insightful and encouraging message. I wanted to explore the idea of hidden intentions being brought to light. The thought that there is comfort in the truth being revealed is something I also find peace in.
Your words are greatly appreciated.
Kind regards,
Naomi

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Rolph David

Tue 18th Mar 2025 16:21

Dear Naomi,
Your yesterday's poem carries such a powerful message. You brilliantly remind us that no matter how much someone thinks they can hide their intentions in darkness, the truth always finds a way to shine through. The way you personify darkness as a force that exposes hidden schemes is striking—it’s like you’re showing that no plot is truly safe from being revealed. There’s something almost comforting in knowing that, no matter the deceit, truth has a way of standing bare.
Kind regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Tue 18th Mar 2025 16:14

Manish, you’ve captured something so powerful in your journey. It’s inspiring how you went from waiting for life to carry you, to learning how to take control and harness your own path. By letting go of doubts and taking action, you found real growth and happiness. Your realisation that waiting for serendipity would have kept you stuck in a fantasy is a beautiful reminder to embrace life as it comes, and create your own truth. It’s a message of empowerment and living fully.
Kind regards,
Rolph







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Rolph David

Tue 18th Mar 2025 16:08

Hello Red,
Such a very different poem on your part! I also like it very much! In the search for truth, words can twist, but in carefully crafted verse, clarity shines through. The "tree of truth" rooted in simple verse suggests that amidst complexity, something pure remains. Poetry doesn’t lead us through darkness but lifts us with crystal-clear meaning, guiding us along a winding path where truth holds sway. Great job.
Regads,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Tue 18th Mar 2025 15:49

Hello leonidas: Three years of Russian invasion of Ukraine in violation of international law were already over on 24 February. I like your poem - a nice idea.

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Rolph David

Tue 18th Mar 2025 15:43

Another big thank you to my loyal readers. I really appreciate it. Thanks to: Tom Merton, Naomi, Manish, Flyntland, K. Lynn, hugh and Red B. Keshner.
👍

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TOM MERTON

Tue 18th Mar 2025 08:59

Perfect poetry. Thank you VERY much Red'


best of regards as always

Tom

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Tom Doolan

Tue 18th Mar 2025 08:21

Thanks for likes: Red Brick Keshner, hugh, Holden & Naomi. ☘️👍

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 18th Mar 2025 07:31

Thank you very much, Rolph. I sympathise with your concern that Trump is overshadowing everything at the moment. This must stop one day...musn't it?

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 18th Mar 2025 01:07

Hoping that this wasn’t too irreverent in tone or delivery 🙏🏻🕊☘️

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Robert C Gaulke

Mon 17th Mar 2025 15:58

Cheers, Landi

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David RL Moore

Mon 17th Mar 2025 15:18

I thought the use of the word "Revelation" was way too far up its own arse, I deleted it.

Anyway, lets bring it "Closer to the Heart"

David RL Moore,

love to all xx

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Mike Bartram

Mon 17th Mar 2025 13:47

Thank you reading my poem about Stuart Adamson.

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Tom

Mon 17th Mar 2025 12:12

Thanks for the comments Uilleam and Flyntland 😃 I had a lot of time on my hands in January to contemplate the freezing city. I normally prefer to write narrative poetry but here, I just thought I'd let the cold grey winter in...

Thanks also to Red Brick, Hugh, Stephen, Aisha, Holden, Helene, Yasoda, Yanma and Naomi for reading!

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Flyntland

Mon 17th Mar 2025 10:40

Thank you, Rolph. You are right. It was pure nostalgia, and I saw it through the eyes of a child. For those who worked in the mill and went back to their little back-to-backs and narrow cobbled streets, it was unrelentingly hard.

Thank you also to Holden and Naomi for your likes, they mean a lot to me.

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David RL Moore

Mon 17th Mar 2025 07:01

Thanks to RBK, Hugh and Landi for the likes and comments.

David RL Moore

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Landi Cruz

Mon 17th Mar 2025 01:53

No escape, no easy answers.

I heard a guy hint recently that if you don't know what to do, then you should probably do nothing.

That's my escape )

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Landi Cruz

Mon 17th Mar 2025 00:29

speaking of personal musings...

someone asked me recently if there were anything about which I was passionate. Sensing a catch, I answered, "my autonomy".

Maybe I should learn to let my guard down sometimes.

Then again, maybe not )


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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 16th Mar 2025 21:37

...on 'whale-watching season' - Thank you so much @Rolph 🌷so glad that it came across just as you so eloquently detailed. I too can never look at a grill without noticing the wider world around me. 🙏🏻🕊️

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 16th Mar 2025 21:36

Thank you so much @Rolph 🌷so glad that it came across just as you so eloquently detailed. I too can never look at a grill without noticing the wider world around me. 🙏🏻🕊️

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Landi Cruz

Sun 16th Mar 2025 18:52

"why are you in such a hurry..."

what a great verse.

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Landi Cruz

Sun 16th Mar 2025 18:46

A lovely piece of writing, and suits some recent personal musings of my own about being in a state of want in this world where there's always something else for which to strive.

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