Gosh there is a novel in there . So much to take in and all the words well placed too. I agree its a great performance poem.

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Very emotive poem . Has a fast pace throughout, gives it energy. Good work

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I remember Jamima the floppy rag doll on childrens TV. Showing your age there Pete. It took me back too " what shall we see through the .......Square window." Pete behind B&Q!!

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This is quite laid back for you, Pete.

Whimsical - is the word that leaps to mind. It's a very pleasant poem.

I won't accuse you of calming down. I know better than that.

"...he did skid and skip along into obscurity" made me laugh. Very witty and pithy.

Yeah, it's an odd addition to the Crompton oeuvre. Like it.

Steve

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Had to comment again because I forgot to say - I think this needs music with it. Rather Dylan-esque, I thought.
Cx

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HI Tony, Wow this one lives! Great ideas and emotions!

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Hi Tony, nice poem, song like.

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Great one Peter! Not usual style for you, but a nice change! Hope its not true.xx

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Well the title got me, made me think of the early african america art signs I used to own, but sold because I was called a racist, for owning it. Then I thought of Jamima puddle duck. Then while listening, I figured the cats must have loved hearing this one. It was funny!

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Hell of a performace piece Emmersom,
well put together, should go very well at
a Slam, thanks for the read.

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Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Hi Pete,
A bit of a boxer, years ago but I've been hurt
more outside the ring than in it ie love!! liked
this poem, it gets stronger as it moves along,
nice rhythm, hope you go the distance!! cheers.

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I like this one An.
I also love all your travel pics, im hoping they are all pinned upon a board somewhere in case you blackout from poetic overload.

Liking all your travelogues

'expecting sunlit lawns and time to wait'

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Oh for Pete's sake!!
You're not so down trodden.

Love the sentiment in this though.
Janet.x

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Wow! - sorry - inane comment - just speechless............... Mine took my music from me for the longest time - only just getting it back - I can't last a day without my music but it hurt me almost as much as he did.
Superb.
Cx

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Really liked this. Did you intend the double meaning of 'survived the fall'? We tend to think of fall as an American term for autumn, but actually it was in use in England in Shakespeare's day & was more usual than autumn.
Thanks for your comments about mine too, I feel I'm making progress - emotionally if not poetically!
Cx

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Aw Antonionioni,
this is a very touching poem for this time of year.

And now our frozen fingers push the gate
into the garden sheltered from the squall.

Beautiful lines, although i do love them all.
Sad aren't I?
'scuse me, this caught me unawares.
Love Janet.x

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Much enjoyed. Thought provoking stuff, well crafted and a great listen.

Regards,

A.E.

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Hi Winston,
And thanks for your comments on "testament." Much appreciated. I haven't got to grips with posting audio files quite yet, but thanks to help from cjd I seem to be heading in the right direction. I can certainly imagine from reading your "BIG TIME" poem why that Peter Gabriel vid would havce inspired you - one of my favourites too.

Regards

A.E.

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I like it, and its not your normal style that you post for us to read.

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Hi Pete,
Such a wonderful piece but then you know already i love this kind of poetry from you.
Love Janet.x

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Beautiful. And it feels like quite a different style for you? - or perhaps I just haven't read enough of yours yet.
Thanks for the comment about mine too - I feel that my voice is getting stronger (literally as well as metaphorically!) and much of that is thanks to writing it out.
Cx

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good work
with every new demon
I like the idea of a lost love taken by demons, it feels that way, love conjures so much, stirs all of this....all of this, and the hope, how much has happened through hope

I enjoyed this description of your pain and I dont mean it to pleasure in someones pain, I hope you know that, I mean that I feel those things too, and im sure many if not all, I like the way you bring it together, it sounds you are locked in a dungeon of emotion and I'm sure you know that the bolts and the locks won t keep you in for too long

the poem also reminnds of the story of grendel but as written by William Dick of Marillion (the band) aka fish, when he talks of this monster on the rampage for revenge, fuelled by emotions stemming from lost loves im sure.


Peter

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Thank you Zuzanna and Alan for you comments on my poem, it's much appreciated.

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Thanks for your comments about 'Daisy'.
I am trying to get audio on myself - I've been told you need a mic and a sound card (which apparently my computer already had) and a free downloadable programme called 'Audacity'. So far I've managed to record well enough but I'm having difficulty converting them to mp3 - do you know anyone who is good with computers (most 5 year olds it seems)?
Good luck!
Cx

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Well, Its an epic work, an one that requires a very deep breath at the start. You have managed to write so much on what is admittedly a big topic, but you have done it without any of the rhymes being forced or the meanings becoming tenuous.Like the shape too. Let's hear it performed. Winston

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nice poem Belinda Alan.

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Absolutely fantastic. Can you upload it on an audio file? - would sound amazing performed. Reading it I found my heartbeat getting faster & my breath shorter with the rythm - quite uncomfortable but kind of excitingly visceral!
Cx

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You can afford to waste carrots like that in these hard times?!?!
Cx

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You old misery guts!!
Gifts in brown paper with a ribbon twist look great, just so long as we keep Gordons picture out of it, and at least you know the words to all those songs which keep cropping up each year.

I'm well used to those pound shops. It's amazing what you find in there.
You can buy a 50 pack of tea-light candles for 99p. Save on electricity. ( hey, that rhymes.)
Janet.x

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WOW!!
Great images there and a fantastic shape.
Turn it upside down it could be the bomb about to go off. You could probably even use the same kind of theme in your words.
Great stuff.

ps. I did lose the rhythm a bit in places but then it picked up again.
Janet.x

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Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Thanks Winston..... Just one of my little pleasures
regards
Gus

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First rate, Pete.. I bet you'll be ranting that out soon out and round!

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Hi Phil,
i really liked your poem.
Yes i do remember playing in the empty boxes instead of with the expensive gifts they came in.
My siblings lot still do it every year.

Believe it ir not, i've even been to the Christmas eve midnight service, (sober) at my local church for the last few years. Hope to make this years too.
Janet.x

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Hi Alain,
thanks for your reply. Since i sent you a message, a different friend of mine has a brother who's just been diagnosed Aspergers.
Thanks to your information i've been able to point her in the right direction for a better understanding of his condition.
It just shows to me how nothing is ever wasted in this life. I've never been so thankful for being a member of write out loud as i am right now.
Love and light, Janet.x

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1984 Pete?

Hello, by the way!
Janet.x

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Hi Chris,
I really like this poem. It shows strength and knowing there's a light at the end of the tunnel but still a fair distance to travel.
Lovely, Janet.

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Hi Chris, i think many women and men can relate to this poem.
It left me feeling quite melancholic.
Janet.x

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Bit of a dearth of events in my area - also seems everyone has stopped rhyming for Christmas!
Cx

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Thank-you! Probably won't get round to reading it aloud - sadly live quite a way from the Manchester area, and also am very nervous about performing my own stuff! - If anybody wants to give it a go for me though - I'd be delighted! - would love to know how it's received. On Pete Crompton's advice I've gone and got a mic - and just as soon as I figure out how the thing works, I'll maybe voice up a piece or two -it's a start!
Thanks again,
Cx

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Hi Alain,
There's a friend of mine doing some research into Aspergers. I've directed her to your profile on this site. She'll most likely email you for help.

I've found your blogs extremely interesting to read and very informative.
You're a brave man. I admire that.
Love and light to you, Janet.x

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Very funny Peter!

I find Im missing fruit in the house these days more then anything, esp bananas, Im strange, I like them green, and no other color will do.
Now I hear cherios are very good on plain ice cream. Have not tried it yet.
I will say, I tried the goats milk, paid 4.00 for a small bottle of it.GOD it tasted like a goat. I ran out of my usual, soy milk, and tried the goat in my coffee, I drank half the cup, each time thinking it will get better, and each time making that, little kid yuk face. Ended up down the drain, will say the dogs /not the cats, love the goat milk, so I put some in their food.A list helps me at the grocery store, and I go once a week, big shopping day, fills it all up, boys eat it all up! Loved the poem was funny

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Had just come back from a foray to Sainsburys when I read this (where I did buy cornflakes. And milk. But forgot the cat food - which is what I'd gone for) - I hate shopping. I hate Christmas. And I ain't that wild about Uri Gellar. But thanks for the cheer up - this is fantastic stuff. Think this one should be read aloud though. (Thanks for the advice - also bought a mic, apparently I already have a sound card)
Cx

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Are you writing here about someone you know? - I saw a documentary couple of days ago, self-filmed video footage of a guy called Ben who was an heroin addict. He was 32 when he died, and his testament left me reeling - this poem kind of reminded me of that desperation. Excellent.
Cx

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Hi,
Thanks for your comments - pleased you like one. Completely take your point about enactment rather than exposition - was trying to draw together salt, sweet, bitter - obviously not quite to your taste ( yeah, ok - obvious pun). I shall try and enact ... look out for the headline .... Woman helping police with their enquiries regarding a .....!
Thanks again.
Cx

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Hi Tony... Interesting construction. Challenging to read because of it yet once read through a few times seemed to fit for me. Its a desperate lonely poem and a as such the format seems to reflect the hpelessness of things. (Sorry not describing things very well) but imagine it in a tight da de da de da rhyming couplet. not good I think. Winston

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Hi Peter- Do you ever write short poems? Even Satanta sorry Sanata sorry Santana sorry Santa (Got there eventually) would stroodle with that lenthy list. Merry Christmas HoHoHO...

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Hi Peter

I have listened to your cover version and

Thank you..... a most delightful compliment.

My agent's a bit pissed because of the royalties
clause.....but I've explained that we're almost an item....
Regards always
Gus

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Good stuff. Like the way the language was so playful. I could see it go down the slide and on the roundabout.

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