Four women side by side,
cycling
Their kinship cemented - like the
spokes on their bicycles.
They pedal proudly, against the cold chilly
air
skin fair, perfectly powdered
hair thick and strong.
Sisters bonding, swapping stories from
their day: Then they spilt -
wheels turn
different directions
Four women say goodnight
as the moon turns in.
By Belinda Johnston
Thank you Zuzanna and Alan for you comments on my poem, it's much appreciated.
<Deleted User> (5625)
Tue 16th Dec 2008 19:59
nice poem Belinda Alan.
<Deleted User> (4281)
Fri 5th Dec 2008 18:50
Dear Belinda
Your poem paints a wonderful picture in my mind seeing the ambitious woman cycling through Beijing streets this summer. They are cemented and one can see the hard work the team effort in competing-Lovely piece of poetry.
Thank you,
Zuzanna
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Jeff Dawson
Wed 4th Feb 2009 18:28
Hi Belinda, happy new year, I'm just catching up!
Like this, quite mysterious in a way, hope things okay over there, take care Jeff X