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Sunshine

Sat 25th Jun 2022 13:42

To me freedom means everything. It's like a blind person seeing the light for the first time.😔

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Sunshine

Sat 25th Jun 2022 13:40

Good night Nigel. Sleep tight. Just a little bit more sleep you need.😴

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Sat 25th Jun 2022 13:12

Beautiful!

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Sat 25th Jun 2022 13:07

That last line says it all!
'may these blossoms fruit among their vines'.

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raypool

Sat 25th Jun 2022 11:48

Thanks for all the likes folks, forgive me if I don't list them all this time!

Yes Graham, good advice, i'm a hoarder of tools , the older the better but the steel is great. Thanks.

Mark, you've hit the nail on the head there!

Ray

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John Marks

Sat 25th Jun 2022 10:45

Thanks Ray and Stephen. She's holding on.

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John Coopey

Sat 25th Jun 2022 09:40

One does one’s best, Kevin, to push back the boundaries of high brow literature.
And thanks for the Like, Pete.

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Sat 25th Jun 2022 09:06

'And the focus that was narrow,

Effervesces to welcome

The essence in the flight

Of every sparrow...' love this!

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julie callaghan

Sat 25th Jun 2022 09:01

Thank you John for the brilliant reply.

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John Botterill

Sat 25th Jun 2022 08:49

Oh I see, Julie.
You change Amir's words
Into poetry.
Well, please allow me then to
Disagree.
You should take great credit!
Your skill is sublime!
I like to read them all time!
Shakespeare adapted Hollinshed
And he wasn't too shabby
When all is said! 😎

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John Botterill

Sat 25th Jun 2022 08:34

Only just found this poem KJ. It's fabulous! A marvellous piece of narrative with a fine conclusion! 😀

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kJ Walker

Sat 25th Jun 2022 07:47

Nice one John.
We need more class like this on this site, and some of the younger members of the site could learn a lot if they read more of your fantastic musings.
I must say though, being a nonsmoker I don't know about starting the day with a fag.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 25th Jun 2022 01:42

Just a little bit more
heartfelt heaven sent Moonlight poetry
before I go to sleep 😌

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Pete (edbreathe)

Fri 24th Jun 2022 23:46

Lovely

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John Coopey

Fri 24th Jun 2022 23:00

In truth, Stephen, I only ever mastered the last three.

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raypool

Fri 24th Jun 2022 22:48

A strange mix of fatalism and resignation about this John but with a love shining through.

Ray

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John Botterill

Fri 24th Jun 2022 22:14

Thanks Stephen and Bethany for your comments. Deflating balloons is a game of for children of all ages 🎈
The analogy is a bit of a stretch, but I enjoy a bit of metaphysical contortionism haha 😁

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 24th Jun 2022 22:04

This is a winner, John. I love the idea of the balloon as a metaphor and I'm sure William will - in time.

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Sunshine

Fri 24th Jun 2022 21:56

Definitely Nigel. Love is what keeps the bond.💕

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 24th Jun 2022 21:56

Quite agree, John. This could put you in line for the Costa prize (or Caffe Nero), if there is any justice. I rarely got past the first step, mind you.

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furkan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 20:28

perfect

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İrem Duygu Kömürcü

Fri 24th Jun 2022 18:23

Thanks for commenting on my poem! That is so perfect to see such an amazing thoughts on my work! 🌷

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Tiera R.

Fri 24th Jun 2022 17:48

This is beautiful. God bless your soul.

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John Coopey

Fri 24th Jun 2022 14:30

Thankyou, Kevin. There should be more of this experimental poetry on this site.
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Stephen and Branwell.

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İrem Duygu Kömürcü

Fri 24th Jun 2022 13:47

Thank you for liking my poem "Evil" ^^

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Berkay

Fri 24th Jun 2022 11:52

Nicee 🌻🌻

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Linda

Fri 24th Jun 2022 11:14

Well done🤗

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Fri 24th Jun 2022 10:02

seeing a balloon flying around the room as it deflates never fails to inflate laughter does it John 😄

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John Botterill

Fri 24th Jun 2022 08:53

Thanks Holden and Julie for the lovely supportive comments ant to K. Lynn and Frederick for the likes. 😀

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:29

Thanks for the likes

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:28

Thanks for the like Holden

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:28

Thanks for the like Holden

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:27

Thanks for the likes and lovely comment John.

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:26

Thanks for the likes and lovely comment John.

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:25

Thanks John, these posts are taken from videos shared on Twitter by Dr Amir Khan. He writes inspirational posts each day using wonderful words. I try take those words and put them into a poem. I have his permission and have been doing this for over a year. Sometimes I don’t need to change very much and sometimes I add quite a bit. I can’t really take any credit for them. Jx

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julie callaghan

Fri 24th Jun 2022 06:18

Lovely poetic tale.

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John Botterill

Fri 24th Jun 2022 05:20

Lovely picture and poem.
You were reet lucky to 'Ave a sunny day day up' ere! 😂

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John Botterill

Fri 24th Jun 2022 05:12


A gentle, profound, subtle, powerful gem, Frederick. Bravo!

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Nigel Astell

Fri 24th Jun 2022 02:47

One of the locals Old John who used to wear a slightly worn cowboy hat, would say had to change my pint too warm but still had drank most of it.

How I miss the many Landlords as well as the drinkers who always had a good tale to tell Stephen.

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 24th Jun 2022 01:36

Another wonderful poem, John, and I love the existential dimension that the blue balloon inspires! 😊

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John Botterill

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 22:13

Thanks so much Clare. I have already given his mum and dad a mini anthology called 'Just William' for his 4th birthday. I just hope Richmal Compton doesn't sue me haha
Thanks for the like Rose.

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Clare

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 21:42

I love you grandad poems. William is going to love these when he is older - such a gift!

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Clare

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 20:49

Thankyou all so much for the likes and comments. We poets know how amazing it is to get positive feedback from our peers. I am always truly touched when I feel I may have moved just one person with my words. I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to read and like/comment. Thankyou again. 😌

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Steve White

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 15:33

Cheers Greg! It has been a breath of fresh air watching Mick Lynch speak truth to power and completely unravel the news-as-entertainment model.

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Thu 23rd Jun 2022 15:26

so much enjoyed Stephen thank you

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Greg Freeman

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 11:37

Great stuff, Steve. No, I don't think it is that Starmer fellow. I rather think it's a heroic bloke called Mick.

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Steve White

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 09:30

Cheers Stephen!

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John Coopey

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 09:25

Thanks, Greg. I don’t think you’ll hear the M25 from Northumberland.
And thanks for the Likes, Kevin and Stephen A.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 08:58

Brilliant poem, Steve. I love how you mix humour with the bewilderment of...well, quite a lot of them, I guess..

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Jun 2022 08:53

Many thanks to Rose, Leon, Stephen and John for the very kind comments. I am pleased that so many enjoyed it because I think the issue is of prime importance and the fact that a large part of the world does not (or does not want to) listen, is very disturbing.


Thank you to Frederick, Tom, Bramwell, Holden and K Lynn for liking.

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