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Our Old House.

I saw our old house today

For the first time in years

And I will admit

That I shed a few tears

 

I think you might have too

If you could see what they’ve done!

The walls are all white

And there was nowhere

Comfy to sit

 

I miss our old house

All cosy and warm

With mis-matching

Curtains

A bit weathered

And torn

 

Remember the throws?

Scratchy old wool

Made with love

By Granny’s hands 
~ A bit weathered and worn

 

The spring sprung beds

And patched eiderdowns

Shared by everyone!

Pillow fights

Were so much fun

Spitting feathers

Bumping heads!

 

It’s all prim and proper now

All shiny and bright

They don’t even have photographs

They have wide screens instead 

I couldn’t see the games table

I imagined Auntie Mable

Turn in her grave

With a furrow in her brow

 

It dawned on me right then

A house is not a home

A home is where there’s love

Your home is in my heart

Even though you

Are up above

 

I don’t need to see

An old house to remember us

I simply need to think of you

For you to be home

With me again. 

C.K.23. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Clare

Mon 12th Jun 2023 20:40

Thanks guys. I am humbled by your comments. For me, this was a walk down memory lane and a conversation with my foster sister who unfortunately died in a road accident at the age of 21. I saw our old house and it was so sterile with white washed walls and everything in it’s place - it made me think about what home really means. 😌

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Jun 2023 15:14

A fine poem on the meaning of home, Clare. We have seen our old house which we moved from, 4 years ago, after 35 years. Like John, the new house is lovely but not quite the same, and the old house is unrecognisable!

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keith jeffries

Mon 12th Jun 2023 11:14

So very good Clare. I revisited my Nan's house a few years and encountered the same as you did. It was sad indeed but the memories came flooding back.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 12th Jun 2023 11:14

So very good Clare. I revisited my Nan's house a few years and encountered the same as you did. It was sad indeed but the memories came flooding back.
Thanks
Keith

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 12th Jun 2023 05:53

So very true Clare- and JC.
a house is not a home.
What horrors are those sanitised characterless properties on daytime TV and the rest- worth at least half a million or so, with about as much charm as a butcher's fridge.💗

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John Coopey

Sun 11th Jun 2023 22:55

We moved house about 2 years ago from our family home of 40 years. It’s a nice house where we are. But it’s not home.

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