Thank you for your praise of my ode to the king of all dairy products, I love performing this one. (John I'll get round to transferring photos and sending - sorry for delay I'm manic prior to holiday - bring on the Fijian tree house!)
Comment is about CHEESE (blog)
Original item by Mia Darlone
Wed 28th Oct 2009 21:42
Thanks for your comments on Sense of Silence. Your comment is a constructive comment that denotes careful and attentive reading, but, even so, I don't agree.It made me read it again and think, but, to me, that line has a place and iis a fundamental part of the whole.
Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)
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Deborah Jordan Bailey
Wed 28th Oct 2009 21:28
thank you Armando. I think you more than suceed in breathing this language. I wish I could breathe your language as succesfully. debzx
Comment is about Armando Halpern (poet profile)
Original item by Armando Halpern
[from September 28th 2009] ''Anthony: You have re-claimed from my universe a hundred million brain cells from oblivion.'' incase you failed to notice.
ta
Tommy
Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
Thanks for the kind words...
Glad you enjoyed my writing.
Daniel.
Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
Would like to come again Steve. I find that journey quite scary on my own though and my sisters don't like Mondays... Perhaps Janet would join me. Will discuss it with her.
Comment is about Steve Regan (poet profile)
Original item by Steve Regan
As a 'humanist' and committed atheist myself, I have always found it a struggle to 'respect' the ludicrous belief systems of any religion...I like a bit of Buddhism...like the best of 'em...but 'reincarnation'? I don't think so...this admirably sends up the pious obliquity of the religious...without denigrating the obvious sensibility of humanist atheism. I applaud you!
: )
Jx
PS, To you 'person's of faith' out there....gaaargh! But I respect your right to be misguided.
Comment is about British ? (blog)
<Deleted User> (6484)
Wed 28th Oct 2009 18:32
Steve, Spencer, Cynthia thank you all for your comments.
Bernie
Comment is about British ? (blog)
Hi Chris, I must agree with Isobel that is a very nice bottom, wish that mine was still like that!
I really do think that 'Your Label' is good, not just good but interesting which is even better than good.
You've been around on here longer than me -
How do you find the site?x
Comment is about Christopher Dawson (poet profile)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
Wonderfully said Christopher, but ( niggling question ) do you want a small select group of readers, who can extricate the multiple messages, or would you like to appeal to a larger group of readers? Many would feel overwhelmed at having to dissect a poem to find out what it means - a common gripe sometimes on here. I suppose it again boils down to the subjectivity of the reader, and the readership that you want. If it was me ( and you are not me which is part of the beauty of individuality and ability to express, and the sheer diversity of the medium of the poetic form of expression ), I maybe would have developed one message whilst hinting at another, and then develop it into a series of poems.
You can delete this comment by the way if you like - and continue discussion through profile, - again if you like.
None of this is to detract from the fact that I think it's a good poem by the way, and everyone has a certain agenda within their writing that they want to convey at different points in time.
Nicky x
Comment is about Your label (blog)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
If I had done that then they would have merely pandered and not provoked, however the essence is in the confliction, the point being the issue is, if you'll forgive me, not as black and white as most would have it be.
Comment is about Your label (blog)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
Thank you muchly David - would rather be responsible for that than a new Ice Age....
Isobel x
Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)
Original item by David Franks: Walkabouts Verse
I think a need for God is written into the DNA of every human. Many people in the modern age, deny this, of course, as they strive to be gods themselves.
There is nothing new under the sun.
Nice to see the Methodists get a mention in your poem. They were founded by an heroic, romantic man who literally got on his horse and took hope to the confused, the poor and the marginalised of our country.
Comment is about British ? (blog)
Hey, if I can organise some transportation, will be there, a week on Monday? Already sweettalked my better half to taxi me to Wigan, sounds like a good night.
Nicky x
Comment is about Steve Regan (poet profile)
Original item by Steve Regan
TOMMY, ta for your Roman alusions left as a comment on my poem about the Bra. As a toper myself, I chertainly appreshiate them.
Tommy I seem to remember that you live in Liverpool. I'd like you to come over over to the next Bards in New Brighton and perform. We meet at the Magazine pub on the second Monday of every month from 8pm to 11 pm. It's a pretty lively night. Cheers.
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
ISOBEL, I wish I'd scooped up the bra and taken it back home to New Brighton with me. Then I'd be able to produce it for performance purposes, smears and all. When are you coming back to perform at the BARDS, me dear?
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
NICKY, as a Wiganer, I can quite believe Bolton is littered with discarded nether-garments! Ta for your comments on my brassiere poem. Come to the BARDS and perform your stuff.
Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
<Deleted User> (6603)
Wed 28th Oct 2009 15:20
Thanks for comment about my poem.V. interesting.Not sure what you mean about equation of emptiness although it was written at a time when I was experiencing joy and woe in my life. But I can't see that in my poem.
Comment is about The Taleban are skittin' me Nan (blog)
Original item by stephen smith
Neil, you are really a romantic at heart aren't you?
What happened to the languish and anguage?!:-)))))x
You need to put music to this and develop it into a song, very bluesy feel to it.x
Comment is about Cry Me A River (blog)
Original item by Neil West
Hey, Steve, thanks for the great comment on 'Siren', really appreciated. Had a bit of a panic when I blogged it and toned it down a little, save the rest for a colourful performance. lol x
Getting a bit of a regular here on your profile. thanks again, nicky.x
Comment is about stephen smith (poet profile)
Original item by stephen smith
Thanks everyone so much for the great comments. Feel quite overwhelmed......really glad you all enjoyed it. ( Have you cooled down yet guys, I've been told there were a few cold baths and heads in the fridge yesterday!!) lol.......wonder if 'Siren' can have another outing at some point?..........haha.....get the ice buckets at the ready, she may pounce on a performance night!:-))))
Seriously, great encouragement, didn't know how a female would be received writing about mindblowing orgasms and using the word 'pricktease' etc. Thanks guys and gals for reading and commenting.
Nicky.......(or minx, to Gus) xx
Comment is about 'Siren' (blog)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
Hi Steve, I have read this several times this morning and the picture it paints is very vivid and powerful, even though I'm not sure what it is about - on one reading I think I do and then I change my mind. I'm curious - what was your original title?
Great piece, nicky x
Comment is about incoming (blog)
Original item by garside
Very difficult Christopher to get multiple messages across in a poem, mainly down to the fact that the reader will probably tune in to the one that they associate with most, or the one that is foremost in their mind at that present time. Which is good in that it may appeal to a wider range of readers. However, if you think logically about it, you could have developed each message into another poem. What do you think? I'm no expert. Just an idea.
Enjoyed it.x
Comment is about Your label (blog)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
Deborah Jordan Bailey
Wed 28th Oct 2009 13:46
"loneliness is falling backwards
through the darkness of a void"
i lack skills to make constuctive comments but i know that i want to keep this poem and your words linger in my mind and flow together beautifully like the meeting of the waters.deb
Comment is about Falling (blog)
Original item by Armando Halpern
My only worry is, Isobel, they could well be adding to global warming - from under-the-collar!
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
I think Stephen knows what he's writing about here: Not racism but ironical working class sufference.
Comment is about The Taleban are skittin' me Nan (blog)
Original item by stephen smith
Yes - I see. Hope you are enjoying the half term - though you don't have little ones. The weather has been so changeable - sunny one minute, grey and overcast the next - hard to keep them happy. Look forward to seeing you around. xx
Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)
Original item by Gus Jonsson
Wed 28th Oct 2009 12:27
An equation poem.Images of warmth over emptiness equals..? poignant.
Steve Smith
Comment is about THE COLD POOL (blog)
Wed 28th Oct 2009 12:22
well crafted, rolls like a wheel.,spins like a coin and comes up 'tails' when you call 'heads'.
Steve Smith
Comment is about 'Siren' (blog)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
Many thanks re Shirley's Bedroom... enjoyed seeing and hearing last night at Sale.... Keep in touch re The Alex Humphrey night.
Many Thanks
Gus
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
<Deleted User> (6875)
Wed 28th Oct 2009 11:54
Hi everybody we are very enjoyed the poetry night. We appreciate the kind welcome we will never forget that .We hope to enjoy seeing you again.thank from brass poetry.
Comment is about Val Cook at the Howcroft, Bolton October 2009 (photo)
incongruous?... Well Shirley is Australian... and it sort of sounds right because of the closeness of truth... but was it her only name??...just read the Auntie Norma item between the lines ...clue.?
Thank you so much for reading.as always
Gusxx
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
Thank you Nicky ... Not quite a siren but yes I believe she had an agenda... but hey ho!...whataway2go!
Gus xx
Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
No need to apologise John. I seem to remember you saying that red shoes frightened you... Other rhyming words spring to my mind - pity, great great pity...
Comment is about John Darwin (poet profile)
Original item by John Darwin
something else rhymes with pretty.
I am now ashamed :-O
sorry
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
Stop press - I must confess
I never thought my shoes were less
Important than a climate treaty
So pretty are my little feety...
Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)
Original item by David Franks: Walkabouts Verse
<Deleted User> (6353)
Wed 28th Oct 2009 09:58
I love the pace of this poem Neil x
Comment is about Cry Me A River (blog)
Original item by Neil West
Haven't had the pleasure of reading this before. Brilliant in its brevity.
thanks
John
Comment is about incoming (blog)
Original item by garside
darren thomas
Wed 28th Oct 2009 07:12
More images of this event can be found at -
http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=10083&id=1811493559&l=1179db3125
Comment is about Morton Arms, The Wirral October 2009 (photo)
<Deleted User> (6576)
Tue 27th Oct 2009 20:22
Truly lovely. Thank you.Jx
PS. Is there an extra 'f' in the second line? I once won a prize for spotting all the 'f's in a sentence...there's an extra one in the second last verse too...but it's still extremely lovely.
: )
Comment is about For Silence (blog)
Original item by Andy N
<Deleted User> (6576)
Tue 27th Oct 2009 19:58
sad and beautiful... and wonderfully written as always
Comment is about For Silence (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Rachel Bond
Tue 27th Oct 2009 19:30
For some reason I wanted spiderman to break the bed in 'Brief Encounters.'.Nice poem.
Rachel
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
Hi Jeff, thanks for the comments, I can see there is a lot of honesty in your writing too and I can hear the punk influence in your samples! I enjoyed 'cemetery gates' - lots of vivid images and plenty to reflect on. I was put in mind of a sign described on the radio recently in a cemetery 'placing flowers on the graves in no way benefits the dead'. I'm curious to know what they are lining up for in your poem? Is this a suggestion that there may be an afterlife?
Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Thank you Nicky, though I tried to get other messages over in this too, a mixture, that conflicted but contained validity...just like the subject matter ;)
Comment is about Your label (blog)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
Hi Nicky - many thanks for your kind comments on 'After' :)
I can readily identify with the thinking behind 'stuff' - we have so many reminders daily of how essential 'stuff' is - not so many reminders of how vast numbers of folk around the world have no stuff at all.....
Best wishes, Dave
Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
Rachel Bond
Tue 27th Oct 2009 18:32
thanks for this poem. It fits in perfectly with my day photographing homeless people .
Watching trees become twigs
carefully constructing coffins
Love these two lines and relates to my poem Cradle also.
Melting like hot matches.
The sulphurs of hell?
My dad had damaged cartilidge due to too many parachute jumps with the regiment. So you hooked me from the start.
Ill have to look up Tartarus now as im sure theres a different reading to this than one that includes a fish condiment! (only in my ignorant mind - not a criticism;)
Comment is about From Beneath Hades. (blog)
Original item by Kealan Coady
Rachel Bond
Tue 27th Oct 2009 18:15
I like this Nicky. How did you know me?
thanks for kind words on my poem Cradle,
Rachel
Comment is about 'Siren' (blog)
Original item by Nicky Burrows
John Darwin
Thu 29th Oct 2009 08:24
Astonishing. Love it.
John
Comment is about Lessons of loss (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels