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pandora's jar

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I’m formed from clay

turned on the potter’s wheel.

Spinning made me

and I spin still.

Smoothed thumb and finger

and wet earth.

From honest mud,

that was my birth.

The gods made me to carry the can.

Poor womankind, to get the blame from man.

They put in my possession all the gifts

without my knowing

when the pot was raw,

that they were throwing.

And as to womanhood I was growing

they gathered round.

Flattering words are such a pretty sound!

And just to show them all, the lid I lift

to prove to them the value of my gift.

A cacophony of hate and pain leapt forth

and illness and depravity made howl

like all the evil demons down in hell.

I fought and struggled with the wooden lid.

With all my strength I pressed it back, I did.

Was blamed, as women are, for ever more

though I still harbour hope within my store.

Ask Eve, my sister, about apple trees,

and snakes and Adam, and fig leaves.

 

 

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Pandora's box

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Cate Greenlees

Sat 22nd May 2010 22:34

A lovely reading of your interesting take on the title. I like your first four lines... they cleverly lead the way into the rest of the theme.
Cate xx

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Anthony Emmerson

Sat 22nd May 2010 01:40

Hi Ann,

Can't add much to previous comments unfortunately; except to say that I loved your conclusion (and you already know I love the voice - move over Ms Lumley!)

Regards,
A.E.

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Isobel

Fri 21st May 2010 18:04

Av changed my mind - can't resist reading and commenting. Love your take on the theme - I would wouldn't I? You express yourself a lot more gently than me though - a lovely audio also. x

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Ray Miller

Thu 20th May 2010 20:45

Liked these lines very much:Spinning made me
and I spin still.
Smoothed thumb and finger
and wet earth
from honest mud.
That was my birth.
The gods made me to carry the can.
Poor womankind, to get the blame from man.
Though you could probably omit "from honest mud" same as wet earth, really!

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Thu 20th May 2010 09:29

I love your voice! And I read that it was a jar too.

Maybe hope is a nasty pastie - it is just prolonging humankind's torment...

great poem ann! x

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Andy N

Thu 20th May 2010 08:16

nice stuff ann.. enjoyed this

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Isobel

Wed 19th May 2010 22:40

Another rebel changing the title! I won't comment on the poem cos I'm trying not to until I do my big resume (accent on the e). Was reminded of one of my dad's old jokes. When is a door not a door? A. When it's a jam jar.

Groan, groan. x

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 19th May 2010 18:40

Gus! Pasties aren't nasty! How very dare you! (Speaking as an inhabitant of Kurnow.) But I wondered that too. All Greek to me!

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 19th May 2010 18:37

If Hope was left within the box... what was it doing locked up with all the 'nastie pastie stuff in the first place.

... Mmmmm

Good poem, liked your reading voice very much too.

Gus x

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Wed 19th May 2010 17:55

Well it is really good I have joined in with the spirit too... yes all you Pandora's are to blame ha ha
TC XXXX

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 19th May 2010 17:35

I expect I'll be disqualified now - calling it a jar an' all. But it was originally a jar not a box I read somewhere. My attempt at rhyming gets a bit lost somewhere in the middle. May redo. But is feels like a race! Great fun it is too!

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