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Dinner Party

Tomorrow evening,
with supper and a smile,
I'll stay awake with the ghost
of the girl you used to be,
and talk shit about the girl
you are now.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 14:55

Agree with all the comments, Terry, I enjoyed this.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 29th Oct 2011 18:57

sad,superbly succinct!

Philipos

Sat 29th Oct 2011 16:51

Much impled in so few words. Such a wry ending too. Enjoyed.

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Isobel

Sat 29th Oct 2011 14:28

I thought it was sad. I liked the brevity of it and the way you paint the mood.

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Andy N

Sat 29th Oct 2011 12:11

little tellie and has a element of Bukowski i think, but i like your humour in this... good stuff.. A

<Deleted User> (6315)

Fri 28th Oct 2011 19:07


Clever twist Terry..brought a wry smile to my face.

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