Dinner Party
Tomorrow evening,
with supper and a smile,
I'll stay awake with the ghost
of the girl you used to be,
and talk shit about the girl
you are now.
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Comments
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 29th Oct 2011 18:57
sad,superbly succinct!
Philipos
Sat 29th Oct 2011 16:51
Much impled in so few words. Such a wry ending too. Enjoyed.
I thought it was sad. I liked the brevity of it and the way you paint the mood.
little tellie and has a element of Bukowski i think, but i like your humour in this... good stuff.. A
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 28th Oct 2011 19:07
Clever twist Terry..brought a wry smile to my face.
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Lynn Dye
Wed 2nd Nov 2011 14:55
Agree with all the comments, Terry, I enjoyed this.