The seed awakens
Watery light springboards life
Dormancy declines
Recognition grows
Pollination of ideas
Yields a bumper crop
Recognition slows
Fields of creativity
Decay, fall fallow
Dormancy begins
Hibernate ideas so they
Survive to revive
Cycle round again
Chain of life is circular
Season is complete?
A lovely poem, Laura. Really well structured. Some great alliteration. xxx
Hey Laura!
Great piece.Simple but really effective!Thanks for your comments on my recent entry also....you're right about my getting the 'windows' theme in again too! What's happening to me?
ah a lovely read hun
Thanks all - glad you enjoyed it. It calmed me to write it.
And Rachel - Spring IS here. We went for a walk on Sunday and all the trees were budding like crazy, Great Crested Grebes were courting, the daffs were all up and ready to flower, and you could smell it in the air. Proper buzz.
clever, laura.. bet this took some work to do, but i am impressed - nice one x
i want it to be spring again, make it be spring with your magic words x
a difficult task, you make it seem easy, a beautiful flow through the haikus making a complete cycle of its own. very clever x
Gentle. Reflective. The steady march of thoughts - almost like the clues in an analytical crossword - speaks of the measured cyclical progression of the seasons and those other forces in our lives that are hinted at. Well-written.
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shoeless
Sun 20th Mar 2011 16:42
i like the poem , why do you need the final question mark , what are you asking ?