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FLOUNDERING

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FLOUNDERING

 

 

 

Unabating

memories

scathing

if they could fade

disappear

into deep twilight's shade

I'd find rest and relief

yet my waiting's in vain

 

skies are moving

clouds

gathering

grey

overwhelming

constantly hovering

they catch my eye

they leave me floundering

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

clouds dark emotions waiting floundering twilight

◄ BY THE LIGHT OF THE LOCAL SPAR

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Elaine Booth

Mon 21st Mar 2011 20:05

Everything we said last Tuesday - love this poem. Really appreciate how succinct and evocative it is. x

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Mon 21st Mar 2011 18:08

I know the feeling! Often wish my memories would bog off & give me a rest too. Nicely put John xXx

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Isobel

Sun 20th Mar 2011 20:54

ps I love the new profile piccie - one can really see the likeness!

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Isobel

Sun 20th Mar 2011 20:53

This is a bit of a change in style for you John. Don't recall you ever writing anything so dark or serious. Your poem is simple and stark - you express yourself well. x

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