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Gareth Writer-Davies

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:04

Unveiling of new statue of Sappho this Saturday at noon. Will be reading a poem along with two colleagues inspired by Sappho.
If you are near Letchworth, come along!

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:33

Hi Ann
I meant to say in my earlier 'thank-you' that I enjoyed listening to the great north diver. I'm afraid I didn't catch first time around.
Is that you reading?
I don't have the facility to 'audio' my stuff, and I'm not sure what I'd sound like. I used to tape-record 'letter' donkeys years ago, and it never sounded like me

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:27

Good afternoon (again)
your comments, as ever, are much appreciated. the ramblings of one returning to childhood are just that, but it makes one realise the things that one took for granted perhaps

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:26

Great to see poets and poetry getting rewarded.
Well done, that man!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:23

Great fun - especially for those of us who have
often wondered! This is well done.

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:12

Hi Ann
Pleased you enjoyed 'Childhood'.
I've found that just about anything and sneezing is painful. I have (on the odd occasion) sneezed whilst breaking ****, and that is unbelievably painful. You don't know which end to concentrate on :-))

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Thu 3rd Nov 2011 15:14

Made me chuckle at lot!... :)

Oh and John?..they ALWAYS have a sister!!!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 15:12

I know this has been on before but I couldn't get the audio to work before so I gave it another go. Call it a duet!

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 14:52

Hi M.C.
Absolutely no apologies necessary. The end result was still the self-interest of the Union man.
Strawbs? - You won't get me I'm part of the Union'

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:20

Great poem
Come on John - you're already hitched aren't you? Think of the needy (me)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:06

Hello, Winston! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:03

Hello, John! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and certainly would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 12:57

Thank you my dear friends for your comments. I've made some changes. So, please, do me a favor and tell me what you think about them.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 12:38

Does she have a sister?

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Cathy Bryant

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 11:19

Hi Emma - lovely to meet you in Wolverhampton. I love your poems! I'm Maturing as a Poet made me laugh like a nutter.

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Marcia Calame

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 11:17

Yasus Afari and Marcia Calame will be performing a night of FIREWORDS. Alongside PING WING, who will make you laugh all the way.

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Marcia Calame

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:52

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:43

congrats Chris

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:35

Oh to be in love again!!!!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:30

Many congratulations, Chris

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Philipos

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:16

'Undermined', I thought you were referring to the goo ants converted their prey into. Gourmand slobbering jelly eh? OK we'll go with that.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:15

Can't use the audio yet, MC, as I'm at work. But the lyrics work on their own.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:52

Hello Greg. Yes, you're right "Now, then" is a Yorkshire greeting similar to "Sithee!" and you're right it is more a tone of challenge than of caution. I could imagine two stags greeting each other that way!
When I first came to Barnsley as a 22 year old I nearly fainted when my landlady called me "cock". A boy can get the wrong signal!

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:44

Sorry Larisa - spelled your name wrong!

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:43

Hello Larissa
I agree with Win. The stanza about love is a cracker! The first three lines are wonderful.
Have you tried non-rhyming poetry? It must be awfully difficult to write in a foreign language within the constraints of rhythm and rhyme.
I always check your work because I recognise the unique challenge it poses you.

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winston plowes

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:52

I’ve learnt to understand that….
Love can't be found where it doesn't exist,
Love can't be hidden where it is.
And... always has it’s own sound .

I have been pondering this part for some time... (And listening for the sound). Maybe I should be feeling its sound? Loved this section Larisa,

Win x

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:26

Hi John. I always thought "now then" was just a kind of Yorkshire greeting, like "hello", but with more of a challenge to it.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:25

You are a woman of great insight Laura. ;o)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:24

Thank you, dear Stella!

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:21



I’ve learnt to be patient,
Though not everyone knows it.
It’s better to be absent
Than to throw a stone into a shit.


Larisa I think this so far is my favourite poem written by you..most enjoyable :-) x

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Rachel Bond

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:12

guitarnverse 4 doggers wipeeee

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:06

Nice one Rach, yes the general Bolton mindset is not to be arsed, keeps us chilled, most of the time! Wish Bolton could win a few more cups!

yes I can still be arsed and will be organisin a Guitar n verse 4 Doggers so will give you and Laura a shout! Great poem Jeffrey Vernon Dawson X

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:45

...gave me shivers - marvellous !!

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:41

Norick Abe was a motorcycle GP racer of some distinction...

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:27

I have used verse in some letters to my local
MP when it seemed appropriate. There are times
when a few pithy lines can be far better than
anger indulged in at length!

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Philipos

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:22

Hello John, 'Undermined' guess the insect world is pretty gory eh? A sort of mass Hoovering device for recycling. Can't help being mesmerised by it though - often think of comparisons with human heirarchies.

Thanks for commenting.

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Philipos

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:18

Hello Ann, 'Te Deum' much obliged for the kind words.

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Philipos

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:15

Just think Stella, you invented Narapho. Don't let the film producers own your copyright for less than a million.

Nice poem. Banter priceless .......

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Ray Miller

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 19:45

Thanks all.I can't really decide how best to arrange this. Four verses of 5 lines was a last minute alteration. The urge to spit should be on its own, for instance.

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Steve Smith

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 18:40

Dear Elaine,
Thanks for the comment on the haikku - absolutely loved the last verse of your poem 'The Old World' (and that's not something I get to say very often...)oh dear that sounds so .. (word beginning with 'p')...parsimonious but it's a beautiful stanza
Steve Smith

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Rachel Bond

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 18:11

thanks stella, i took the jarring verse out :)

yes 15th your on. crap date has been sacked so ill be there with nobs on.
you neednt have give up, 'grim revenge the night' is a cracking line

bye for now xx

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 17:24


Ok fess up!! Narapho will not be found on google cept for the one in my mind..ha!

Dave pleased it summoned up a mood, that is what I was aiming for

Rach cheers m'dear for liking xx

Laura..first title was Sacrifice but decided to change it :)

Ha John..I shall make Narapho into my lover and luckily I won't be the woman sacrificed! Well sometimes we can be just a tad stubborn can't we?..

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 17:20


Nice one Laura, I like the clipped form very much here..this Nurikabe explains a lot and it is a great thought to work with..hence two great reads, similar but so very different too..can that be lol ?? anyways I enjoyed your take very much..xxx

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 17:14


Great to read both Dave..Like the way that others offer strength when another is struggling..lovely write :)

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 17:09


Oh Rachel.....still laughing here, well done you I read it a few times and nuffin jars for me..can't wait for the performance and it better be on the 15th lol and yes they still have the venue at La Gondala too...I had a bit of batman but gave up..hold on a mo..

You thought the 60's
one big party,
an exploration
of sexuality, rarely
did you grim revenge
the night.


You can see why I gave up lol..x

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 16:19

OOz this Narafo then? Google just refers me to some stella fella.
...and another thing....
women??? stubborn??? where do you get that from?

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Lynn Dye

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 15:12

Hi Larisa, really enjoyed reading these. (I'm a bit slow catching up because I broke the screen on my laptop!) These are funny, and I have to agree with Stef's comment about not knowing what to expect - and like you, I don't always know where mine are taking me either!!
Love, Lynn xx

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