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Still a Little Crazy

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Lion King in your sheepish sweet meadow sleep

Reap the rough and tumble sure shot

Firing from the hip hop spot music slot

Shooting for the star edges of the farthest flung

Hey ho!

 You are a shag bag wrung out to dry

Try rock and roll and watch Judy lights shining

Tit tattle speak easy jelly talk

Tumble talking bumble walking dream machine

Scheming to bring me down drowning

 Crowning her Queen of the May

 

I’m still a little crazy

Lazy some would say

 

Lazy across my minds pages and it’s been ages since

Turning over a drip dry new day in a way that’s cookie

Chicken diving dance town waiting for the music to stop

Dah dah da

Da da da

Dah dah da

Just waiting for the music to stop

Yeah

For sure

 

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Isobel

Tue 8th May 2012 06:48

So what's wrong with my face? ;;)

Life has been a little hectic of late. Things should hopefully get back to normal at some point and I'll try to make a few venues. It would be good to catch up. xx

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 7th May 2012 23:22

Thank you Isobel... yes it does sing along.. the internal rhyming plays out a tempo... I can undrstand that ...yes an audio clip is possible... I 'll try it in a day or so .

I hope you are well, miss you, especially your legs..... no no no ...I mean your mind!!!!

Loveya ta bits hope to c u soon!!

Gus xx

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Isobel

Mon 7th May 2012 11:29

I like your use of internal rhyme Gus. This sounds like it should be set to music - were you aiming for lyrics? I also think it's one that needs to be heard - you should try loading sound - easier said than done, I know. I can only record mine when I have my son around to sort out the technicalities :)

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