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The Body Builders Lament

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Here ya go chaps.... tis a little poem all of forced rhyme to sink your literary fangs into....

 

Want a good shag

Mag?

Need a good lay

May?

Want a bit a totty

Lottie?

Roll in the sack

Jac?

Rough your fancy

Nancy?

 

Seen this tone

Joan?

Look at this pec

Beck

Spotted this swell

Belle?

Noticed these abs

Mabs?

Loving this pose

Rose?

For fucking sakers

ANY takers????????????

 

◄ A Pretty Shitty Little Ditty... OR.. It Was Good Enough For Shakespeare....

What Do You See... ►

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 4th May 2012 20:26

After I'd stopped drooling at the photo I had a good giggle at your poem. Just the job for poking fun at Narcissus and his mates. This is definitely a performance poem with attitude. XX

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 4th Jul 2009 14:37

Hi Cate, yeah babe just mail me your address!!

Good stuff, its got attitude and good to read something very diffrerent, nice one Jeff XX

ps thanx for re-adding my comment on Joe Strummer sang, much appreciated, would have kept the original one on, nothing wrong with being modest, not that you'll find me doing that, lol, right see you soon! X

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Isobel

Wed 1st Jul 2009 06:57

Oo er Clarissa - can't say I've ever dated anyone like that - I find 'over build' quite repulsive - as the majority of women, I suspect.
A super poem Cate - can't wait to hear you perform it - and to hear the F word actually pass your lips!
Isobel xx

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 1st Jul 2009 01:26

Hi Cate,

My six-pack became a "Party-Seven" a long time ago! (Can you still buy Party Sevens?)

Regards,

A.E.

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Francine

Wed 1st Jul 2009 00:06

This made me smile...

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clarissa mckone

Wed 1st Jul 2009 00:00

Hi Cate
This is wonderful, I used to date guys like the one in your poem.The rumors are true by the way.Just say no.He so pretty, but thats all. haha good poem!
worst lay you will ever have.

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Cate Greenlees

Tue 30th Jun 2009 23:54

See youre the first one to pile in here Gus.........

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 30th Jun 2009 23:49

Hey up Cato

What we talkin about here...carpets or tobacco...??

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