Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

My Little Red Haired Laddie

entry picture

 Id like to prefix this piece of work with an acknowledgment to Nabila for her lovely poem "Green Eyes" which started me thinking about genetics and inspired me to write this poem.

 

 

Whence do you come my little red haired laddie?

Your vibrant beacon light, blazing bright

In this ditch-dull drear-dull world?

What random thrown genetic dice

Created the glory of your past?

Those wild warriors, war cries echoing

Down time. Through mountain glen, a call to men

To rally, unite, attack and fight.

Let flow the proud MacDonald blood

In death defence of hearth and home.

They are your kin, these ghostly warriors.

I see it in the proud tilt of your head

Which says I will not yield.

I see it in the stubborn set of your jaw

The solid stance of your feet

Which root the ground whilst others flee.

I see it in the defiant glint of your eyes

That meet head on confrontation and censure.

I see it in the unbreakable will from centuries past

Of men who held the land and fought

Untamable and proud for what was theirs.

I smell the heather in your flaming hair

And hear the wild mountain bourns in your laugh.

That proud MacDonald clan did not perish

Long ago and forgotten

On the blood soaked earth

In the Vale of Glen Coe.

They are here.

Now.

In you.

 

 

◄ Stock Market

A Pretty Shitty Little Ditty... OR.. It Was Good Enough For Shakespeare.... ►

Comments

Profile image

Yvonne Brunton

Fri 4th May 2012 20:49

The Mc Donald massacre was a travesty. I love Jim Mclean's song 'The Massacre of Glencoe'
As My young granddaughter has red hair I really enjoyed the sentiments in this. XX

Profile image

Dave Bradley

Sat 27th Jun 2009 18:48

Hi Cate

I liked this, having MacDonald blood in the veins and a love of Scotland. History seems to mean so much more up there doesn't it. Something in the air and so much in the environment that is evocative, andf yes in the genes.
Thank you for the kind comment on mine.

Dave

<Deleted User> (6353)

Fri 26th Jun 2009 13:10

Very rich poem Cate!

Thanks for commenting on mine!

Ax

<Deleted User> (6352)

Mon 15th Jun 2009 23:27

I just soooo love this poem Cate and its soooo like our little Jackie, especially when he throws a epi !!!! One would really fear a red haired laddie with a few years on him weilding a claymore. Love Eleanor x

<Deleted User>

Mon 15th Jun 2009 09:51

sad history Cate...

Profile image

Cate Greenlees

Mon 15th Jun 2009 09:48

Thank you both for your comments. The little red haired laddie is my grandson, a McDonald with all the characteristics and traits I wrote about. He is a direct descendant of the powerful Clan MacDonald of ancient Scotland, one branch of which was almost entirely wiped out in the infamous massacre of Glen Coe in 1692 by King William`s men for not signing an Act of Fealty in time. The remnants of the clan were displaced and scattered. Ive based my poem on this tragic event.
Congrats Nabila to your uncle on his little green eyed son, and your little green eyed nephew!
Cate xx

Profile image

Isobel

Mon 15th Jun 2009 06:54

You know I love this one Cate. Much as I adore him, I would have to agree that there could be no more defiant or stubborn child than little Jacob. Those qualities my well get him far in life though...
x

<Deleted User>

Sun 14th Jun 2009 18:49

first of all let me say what a lovely boy. Secondly, I m very touched by your comment Cate. Lastly, I love your poem - it has been well thought out and constructed , love the tone and language . Thank you will re-post so those who didn't read green eyes can read it x (oh I had just blogged that poem and got phone call frommy green eyed uncle that he has just had a son and he has green eyes too :-)

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message