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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 13:02

I take the view that poetry should make you...
blink,
think,
drink.
Or all three, if you've a mind to!!

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Sun 23rd Mar 2014 12:08

You got good writing skills!

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Sun 23rd Mar 2014 11:33

Great piece of writing!

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Sun 23rd Mar 2014 11:30

compelling.

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Sun 23rd Mar 2014 11:26

Good write!

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 11:21

There's a lot of stuff on this site that makes me weep.

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Sun 23rd Mar 2014 11:13

I really love the Rhythm and sentiment of this, I'm sure Bob is looking from where ever he is beyond the veil and smiling.

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 09:14

Absolutely, FH. Once again, many thanks for your kind comments.
Mc - (I love it!)

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 02:51

A fitting concept in this centenary year of the
start of that terrible conflict. This site has
numerous references to Owen's work and is well
worth a lengthy visit for its own sake. How tragic that the man himself should die so near
to the war's end. But fame was already assured
by what he had written at such a young age.
Like Rupert Brooke, he became an icon of a lost generation.
I've already entered a poem...have you?!
Plenty of time to get something sorted in the
spirit of the man and his output. Good luck to
all who decide to have a go.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 02:16


JC...
I note that having a point of view - even (or should that be "especially"?) couched in humour - elicits personal abuse of the type that seems all too prevalent from a particular mindset in our
political spectrum. Laughter is a serious business, you know!!!
LOL on WOL :-)

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fitzroy herbert

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 23:04

yes, JC, smarmy insincerity is your stock-in-trade.

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 17:52

Why thankyou, FH. Always a pleasure to discuss the arts with a gentleman.

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fitzroy herbert

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 16:26

Yes, JC, precisely the kind of smug mildly patronising crap I've learned to expect from you. Not much of what you say has much bearing on the argument. Scape-goating works - clearly you're as susceptible to it as others. And no, most people don't bother to look behind headlines or the superficial op-ed's and commentaries. It does say a lot about just how much UK politics has degenerated when conviction and integrity become attributes to be mocked.
And I do not believe that you dismiss the influence of the press as much as you suggest.

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 16:09

Love it that you feel the need to label me in a box, MW. If that's how you see me, that's fine by me. But you don't seem terribly comfortable with Diversity.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 16:08

Now knowing the source and reason for the inspiration, it becomes easy to assess and
praise the content and style of this post.
Clever - and surely appreciated by those for
whom it was written, identified via the "sky-blue" banner.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 15:54

Successful politics has been described as "the art
of the possible".
Going to extremes (Thatcher was thus accused)
is seen as fatal. She paid the price, exacted by her own party in the end and not the electorate.
It can be said that Benn fell into that trap but
managed to forge a reputation as a high-minded
idealist when power was a memory not an option.

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Sat 22nd Mar 2014 15:40

Are you the same little Tory that wept on here when Thatcher died?

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 15:13

Interesting perpective, FH. But not what I was hearing on the streets and in the exit polls when I was campaigning. (This was in the Socialist Republic of South Yorkshire, not leafy Tonbridge Wells). Clearly those people ought not to be allowed the vote if they got it so wrong. No, wait! It was the capitalist press misleading them. Clearly those people ought not to be alloweed to vote if they were so gullible.
As an afterthought, you are aware that TB was defeated by the Conservative candidate in his own constituency?

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fitzroy herbert

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 13:39

This seems an extraordinarily unjust and blinkered view of recent UK political history. Unless of course you subscribe to the idea that Blair, Mandelson and Brown and the other closet-tories were actually good for the Labour Party. Rather than a Labour Party that still tried at least to represent the working people of Britain against the predations of neo-liberal capitalism.
But the Mainstream Media of this country saw in TB the perfect bete-noire to scare voters away from supporting anything that could restrain capital from doing exactly what it liked.
You're not the only one from that era. A close relative of mine with strong connections to the City came back home one afternoon after meeting with Blair and a group of City luminaries saying that yes, Blair was OK, was a good man and had been given their imprimatur. I found this deeply disturbing at the time. Was he putting on a cloak of electability, to take it off once in power? Was he hell. Tony Benn and a very few others, ridiculed and marginalised by just about every part of our 'free' press, were left howling in the desert. Now the very idea of Labour having links to organised labour is vilified as revisionist heresy. O tempora, o mores!
Your poem might be a harmless tongue-in-cheek literary conceit, but it's very cruel to accuse TB of destroying something he was actually trying to defend against those who couldn't wait to destroy it for their own selfish reasons.

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Dominic James

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 11:57

So it was like that.
Then I says,
hats off to Ferlinghetti

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Mar 2014 00:10

I think you need to be of a generation younger than us to offer unconditional adulation for the bloke, Harry. He was too destructive to the Labour Paarty for me to be able to do that.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 21st Mar 2014 22:14

One of your best John,
In the days when Labour politicians attended Union conferences we had
him twice...What an absolute bore!

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John Coopey

Fri 21st Mar 2014 17:04

Spitting Image - Yes. Give me satire over ranting any day.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Mar 2014 16:46

Electronics couldn't have done any better - and I
don't include electrodes you know where! 10/10
for effect. I was watching a TV repeat last night
of a programme about the glory days of "Spitting
Image" - with those terribly cruel - but terribly
funny caricatures of Margaret Thatcher and her team - not to mention the rest. I'm sure T.Benn
was among them somewhere but didn't spot him.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 21st Mar 2014 13:04

Ha - spooky synchronicity has happened more than once on this site!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 21st Mar 2014 10:42

And the really sad thing is that I heard a group of women in work yesterday planning to go to the bingo, purely because of this :(

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Laura Taylor

Fri 21st Mar 2014 10:40

Yes, another one of yours that I really enjoyed reading.

And it comes hot on the heels of my re-reading V by Tony Harrison yesterday, so I like that synchronicity.

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John Coopey

Fri 21st Mar 2014 07:58

That iss indeed me, MC. The elaastic band worked a treat but I can't get it off. A little historical juggling at work but who would not pay to see margaret Thatcher, Tony Benn and Michael Jackson appearing together?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Mar 2014 02:22

Reply:
If folk keep an open mind
Unknown rewards may they find
When spirits leave this mortal coil
And flesh returns to earthly soil
Religious teaching can seem odd...
Who, pray, has first call on "God"?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Mar 2014 02:02

Neatly done. I would have been tempted to add
Emotions
Inspire
Love.
...to come full circle, so to speak.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Mar 2014 01:55

Is that your voice JC...?? My eyes are watering!
Love the catchy adaptation and that lovely pay-off
("free from Den..."). The inspiration never seems
to flag up there in Coopey-land. I shall now
retire to bed - late as usual from online browsing - but with a grin on my face.
Thanks.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Mar 2014 01:46

K.E-D and JC - your comments are appreciated as
always. The words are mine...the setting and
recitation are courtesy of Pete Dymond - of
Diamond Studios, Bristol. He and Marcie Summers
are busy putting my conception of poetry to music
and effects on a CD compilation for me. It is
fascinating how various poetic themes work in this
way - and both say how much they are enjoying
the challenge - and the fun of something a bit
different.

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John Coopey

Thu 20th Mar 2014 21:34

Nice work, Jeremy. Skillful accentual rhythms complement the subject.

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John Coopey

Thu 20th Mar 2014 21:28

Your words, MC? Your voice?
Lovely rhythm and delicately done.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 20th Mar 2014 17:39

Hello Nichola, and welcome to WOL. I'm really looking forward to reading some of your work. You'll find WOL a friendly place where fellow poets are only to happy to give constructive feedback to your work. It often helps if you give some to others too. Creative flux as it were.
Anyway we're glad you've joined us, and welcome again,

very best regards

Graham

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Shirley Smothers

Thu 20th Mar 2014 17:29

Hello Neil,
Thanks for the funny comment you left for my "Two Line Horror(ible)Story", LOL!
I got this idea when my 20 year old son told me the game "Bloody Mary" one he never had the nerve to play.
Thanks
Shirley

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Thu 20th Mar 2014 16:36

Hi Jeremy

A most appealing poem expertly accomplished, in good old fashioned rhyme.

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Thu 20th Mar 2014 16:36

Since I have one of the 1,000,000 copies of 'Coney Island of the Mind' in front of me - to show my age, bought when first came out, here is poem #9 from it

The words go like below: but the layout disappears

See
it was like this when
we walk into this place
a couple of Papish cats
is doing an Aztec two-step
And I says
Dad let's cut
but then this dame
comes up behind me see
and says
You and me could really exist
Wow I says
Only the next day
she has bad teeth
and really hates
poetry

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Thu 20th Mar 2014 16:15

I like this M.C.

So much imagery, in so few words.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Thu 20th Mar 2014 16:04

I like this.

A skillful alternative description of
what's seen every day, Through talented eyes.

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Frances Spurrier

Thu 20th Mar 2014 11:12

That's amazing news. What spirit. What an interesting life. Thanks Greg.

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Neil West

Wed 19th Mar 2014 21:58

Fab! And of course you know where they bury mathematicians? No?

In a symmetry!

I'll get my coat!

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jeremy young

Wed 19th Mar 2014 20:04

I enjoyed your poem, it has a wonderful air of stillness.

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 19th Mar 2014 19:04

this is fantastic Jeremy - love the images and language very much - I've just posted something about 'dusk' myself and hadn't realised you had posted this until I went to the poetry area to make sure mine had posted - hopefully it steers away from most of your fantastic narrative - great stuff

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 19th Mar 2014 19:01

unreal - I've just seen Jeremy's posting - the one before mine - and it's the same subject matter and includes the same title - I swear I hadn't seen it before I posted - I went straight to the poetry blog section - quite spooky really :-)

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Isobel

Wed 19th Mar 2014 13:52

Lovely - and the images you evoke tie in beautifully with your profile pic - I'm thinking of the wildness of Kate Bush and Wuthering Heights...

Very enjoyable!

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jeremy young

Wed 19th Mar 2014 13:36

Thank you Graham.

I wonder how the Urban Dictionary defines hoo-ha? Probably best not to look.

I appreciate your feedback.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 19th Mar 2014 13:03

Laura's right, the feel good in this is palpable.

Considering the current hoo-ha about rhyme, this shows that done correctly, it works perfectly.

Well done Jeremy,

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 19th Mar 2014 12:59

Marianne Daniels, I do believe you're becoming accessible (at least to me that is).

This is quite lovely.

Graham

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