Clever!

Comment is about Evolution of a Domestic Argument (From the Male Perspective) (blog)

Original item by James Roper

Haha Solar :0 Fair point!

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

Thanks, Natalie - glad you enjoyed it. I can't claim to be the vocalist - that's Pete
Dymond from Diamond Studios in Bristol.

Comment is about YOU SMILED - a song of renewed love (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Hi Sunny.Cool poem-I LOVE that word-'risibly'..!.x

Comment is about Confession (blog)

Original item by Sunny Chopra

I consider myself-'shamed into appreciation'..;0)


and! theres bugger all wrong with being schizophrenic-as long as you both get on ok with each other!....;0)...x

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

I am sorry to hear that. Glad all turned out well :)

Comment is about This is how I nearly died (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

James, thanks for reading and your uber cool comment :)

Comment is about James Roper (poet profile)

Original item by James Roper

I enjoyed listening to your poems on Tuesday. Can you recommend any other poetry nights worth visiting?

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hey Natalie, thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. I wanted to bring out the whole philosophical concept between doing things with your head and your heart. With regard to language, I've always loved the classical language as opposed to modern language, so i try to keep that gentle touch wherever i can. I think it brings out the effect better. Thanks anyways :)

Comment is about Significance of the Nineteenth Autumn (blog)

Original item by Ad Astra

How did you come across 'To plumb the depth of soul....'? I remember sharing it recently with someone, quite personally. Was that you?

Comment is about Mikhail Smith (poet profile)

Original item by Mikhail Smith

Indeed Preeti, a brain hemorrhage. Family arrived in time :)

Comment is about This is how I nearly died (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Nice, I find this relatable. And you also scare me....

Comment is about I Am Angry (blog)

It is fantastically meta.

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

This is as gorgeous as you!
Love it.

Comment is about Just the three of us. (blog)

Original item by Charlotte

"Just to taste

for a moment, what it is like

to unfold the meaning of it

all with colour."

This is beautiful, delicate and so tender.

Love it, Charlie :)

Comment is about Evenings, when in love with an artist. (blog)

Original item by Charlotte

Brilliant in its simplicity :)

Comment is about Enveloped and doped (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

So simple and yet so effective!

Comment is about A million little pieces (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

I love this one, Alex

Comment is about Our home, our castle (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

This is wonderful, a little dark.

Comment is about The words of God (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

Haha! Poor you :)

Comment is about The Dreaded Haircut (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

Lovely.

Comment is about Mind Game (blog)

Original item by Quiet Comet

Hi Alex,
Thanks for reading my poem :) Glad you liked it!

Preeti

Comment is about Quiet Comet (poet profile)

Original item by Quiet Comet

Dave,
Like your `doubling` word play in this

and the sunny optimism.

(just catching up)

Comment is about Life is boobytrapped (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Good man Steve!
Wait till your sent for.

(Like the humour of stanza three)

Comment is about Status Update (blog)

Original item by STEVE RUDD

STEVE,
As someone who has recently been conferring with God (and the N.H.S.) about my prospective mortality I like the `stand to` feel of this.

I like particularly the disillusionment of stanza five and the word-play about desertion and its consequences.

The whole thing rings true about the essence of courage.

Thanks.

Comment is about Sentry Duty (blog)

Original item by STEVE RUDD

''...full and heavy'' weight. Tommy

ps maybe pressing, perhaps pointing. tc

Comment is about Overcast (blog)

Original item by sian howell

what? eh? hm? ...and? (giggle) Tommy

Comment is about Charlotte (poet profile)

Original item by Charlotte

:)) x

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

Thanks for your thoughts on "Garbled" :)

Comment is about Charlotte (poet profile)

Original item by Charlotte

Thanks Charlie :) So glad you agree ;)

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

Ahh thank you for spying that! x

Comment is about Actions vs Words (blog)

Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis

McGonagall and McGonigal on the same bill? Has that ever happened before?

Comment is about Yes or No, Elvis McGonagall is on his way to Worcester (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

This is great and funny! I would be exactly the same haha.
Wonderfully written x

Comment is about Garbled thoughts (blog)

You've really succeeded in capturing the essence of this black hole the subject is in. The whole work feels suppressive and dense. Well done.

Comment is about (blog)

Original item by dieana

The idea of a gentle storm smudging is a really nice touch and the comparison of a kiss and the storm, very clever.

Comment is about Overcast (blog)

Original item by sian howell

Hello Dieana,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

It would be great if you could upload a picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

Comment is about dieana (poet profile)

Original item by dieana

Guest poets on the night will be Fergus McGonigal, current Worcestershire Poet Laureate, Claire Walker, runner-up Worcestershire Poet Laureate 2014, and Maggie Doyle, Worcestershire Poet Laureate Emeritus. Should be an excellent evening.

Comment is about Yes or No, Elvis McGonagall is on his way to Worcester (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Thanks Martin and Tommy :)

So "kind" of you to read and comment!

It made my day.

Preeti

Comment is about Nature (blog)

No one can judge you more mercilessly than yourself.

Brilliant read :)

Comment is about Look at me (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

So true. How we all need some validation, appreciation. Just some company!

Comment is about Tall tales (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Hi Martin,

Thank you for your kind words on "Nature" :)

Preeti

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

Original item by Martin Elder

Did you have a near-death-experience here?
Very interesting with a clear sense of danger in these words.
Preeti

Comment is about This is how I nearly died (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Tommy, thank you for comments on "Nature" :)I was trying to get a rhythm going there.
Preeti

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Hi Daniel
Thanks for your comments on tall tales. I can remember many moons ago when there would always be somebody older and apparently wiser in the pub dispensing words of wisdom or tales of what they had or hadn't done. just hoping I haven't got there ....yet

Comment is about Daniel Dwyran (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Dwyran

Hi Laura
I'm doing O.K. how about you. Thanks for your comments on Tall tales.

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Hi Preeti, '

''How kind the rain
to tiptoe
down
my window pane...''

''How kind the breeze
to whisper
past...'' this is sweet.

Tommy

Comment is about Nature (blog)

Hi Preeti

I like this poem. the way each verse starts with 'How kind' , particularly how kind the rain.

Comment is about Nature (blog)

We love this poem Alexandra.One little repair needed-I can wear them-WOUND-around my wrists.xx

Comment is about Actions vs Words (blog)

Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis

'I fight for the imagined Us'...wowsers! xx

Comment is about Us in Imagination (blog)

sooo nice to see you back-and!-in style!xx

Comment is about Overcast (blog)

Original item by sian howell