Wow indeed ❤️

Comment is about Eat it (blog)

Original item by Corr Lens

Love this - my kind of poet x

Comment is about The Mountain Poet (blog)

Original item by Corr Lens

I'm new on here and just discovered you - I'm very glad I have x

Comment is about Corr Lens (poet profile)

Original item by Corr Lens

Thanks Tommy for kind words of appreciation!!

Comment is about When without you (blog)

Original item by Juhi Gupte

You have mail!'

Comment is about Be Mine Tonight (blog)

You clever girl.
The knowledge of his lack of knowledge.
However, pretending love doesn't hurt is a difficult ask.
It always does, even when it's good!

Happy New Year Preeti!

Graham

Comment is about Be Mine Tonight (blog)

I love the verse 'sellotaped - back up....' it's a powerful image x

Comment is about Lunacy (blog)

I like the photo you posted along with this - it really shows that if you never know what's lurking underneath if you 'scratch the itch' - I can identify with this x

Comment is about Below the Surface (blog)

Original item by PatricioLG

Hey Patricio thanks for reading my poems & posting comments

Comment is about PatricioLG (poet profile)

Original item by PatricioLG

Ah yes FB stalking.... so easy to do these days - and in a Zen like state - I do this trance like without even knowing I'm doing it half the time!! Nice one x

Comment is about Zen and the art of deletion (blog)

Thanks Preeti - it's tough being a single gal!!!

Comment is about The Perils of Online Dating! (blog)

Original item by Pixievic

Christmas drinking eating too
saying some things you might regret
then spending the rest of the year making up!

I did hope you did too!

Comment is about Katy Megan (poet profile)

Original item by Katy Megan

Thanks for reading my poem :) And leaving a comment

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

Love this!

Comment is about The Perils of Online Dating! (blog)

Original item by Pixievic

Thank you Freda for your comments on my profile - I think we have a similar style - I've enjoyed reading your work here - I like that you write about 'real' & otherwise thought of 'mundane' things - I think poems can be found in anything - I have one about head lice!! X

Comment is about Freda Davis (poet profile)

Original item by Freda Davis

Thank you Freda I'm pleased you enjoyed it - it's definitely written from experience, as most of my poems are, but I think most people can identify with baggage good or bad! x

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

It is a scary place believe me!! All the rules have changed! I'm glad I'm not a teenager too - although to them all this is perfectly normal!!

Comment is about The Perils of Online Dating! (blog)

Original item by Pixievic

Today's complication:- "are you going out with him/her?", no we're just seeing each other, "so when will you be boyfriend and girlfriend?", "we're not ready yet"..... What the hell does that mean, is it a licence to be casual or is it just means of using each other?, I'm so glad that I'm not a teenager anymore and if my relationship should crumble then I don't think I could do all that again!! So frightening!!!

Comment is about The Perils of Online Dating! (blog)

Original item by Pixievic

Yes interesting - body or baby - or both - and 'not yours...' Something I can identity with - I like it! Vic x

Comment is about Be Mine Tonight (blog)

Yes have a happy holiday.
Everybody must be having a great time as nobody is seeking out the WOL discussions to communicate.
Lets hope the new year is a bit drier than the tail end of this one.

Comment is about Happy Christmas! (blog)

Original item by Noetic-fret!

Hi Martin, thanks for reading Distance and commenting on it. Much appreciated!

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

Original item by Martin Elder

Hi Tommy, Yes, yes please :) Look forward to your suggestions !

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Nice one Cynthia. I am liking this a lot.

Comment is about Hymn of a Northern Clime (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Love a prerequisite for separation is a prerequisite for forgetting- well, maybe it's the other way around. Like I this. Tommy

Comment is about We Kissed As The House Blew Away (blog)

Original item by Tom

Baby or body? I'm tempted to advise you on the structure of this piece (very seldom if ever have I been so to do ((??)) )

Comment is about Be Mine Tonight (blog)

How have I missed your later work Juhi? "Whilst ardently slanting on walls"...the image is beholden to the words...Tommy

Comment is about When without you (blog)

Original item by Juhi Gupte

This one made me laugh :D
That last line!

Comment is about excuse me (blog)

Original item by Andrea Sharpe

Oh really thats incredibly wonderful! You even remind me of my late favourate artist from america :michael jackson. I quote :"your love is magical,that how you make me feel...But i have not the words here to explain...Gone is the grace for expression of passion...To tell you how i feel ...But i am speechless,speechless...thats how you make me feel...helpless and homeless,thats how you make me feel... But in your presence.I AM LOST FOR WORDS...WORDS LIKE,"I LOVE YOU" ". Your lines remind me me of that song and its really great

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Original item by Madison Martin

Oh really thats incredibly wonderful! You even remind me of my late favourate artist from america :michael jackson. I quote :"your love is magical,that how you make me feel...But i have not the words here to explain...Gone is the grace for expression of passion...To tell you how i feel ...But i am speechless,speechless...thats how you make me feel...helpless and homeless,thats how you make me feel... But in your presence.I AM LOST FOR WORDS...WORDS LIKE,"I LOVE YOU" ". Your lines remind me me of that song and its really great

Comment is about (blog)

Original item by Madison Martin

Hi Ria. If you receive two comments on this apologies. This is a brilliant piece and I'm thoroughly enjoying reading your work. Xxx

Comment is about Chemotherapy (blog)

Original item by Ria Richardson

Hi David. Its based on an experience I had at 5.10 am sat at a bedside in intensive care. I should have done as I was told! x

Comment is about Wisp (blog)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Mr B. Your comment in itself makes lovely reading! x

Comment is about Sink Ink (blog)

Thank you Maddy for your very generous comment. Much appreciated x

Comment is about Recovery Position (blog)

Heh heh! Because I said so....

Comment is about bluelit 2 (12/23/2015) (blog)

Original item by Zach Dafoe

Hi Vicky,

I specially like your Excess Baggage. You show us how to deal with our own issues, but you are also cleverly telling the story of Pandora's box, with hope hidden underneath all the woes. Nice one.

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

This is an interesting form Ria. It sounds as if it is a conversation between two people. It expresses bewilderment and pain from both sides I think. It shows how ambiguous this sort of situation can be, not wanting to give up but realising the danger. You are not afraid of hard subjects are you?
Well written.

Comment is about lost love pt 2 (blog)

Original item by Ria Richardson

See the general discussions for an explanation of the Octolune form.

Comment is about Octolune I (blog)

Original item by Freda Davis

See Discussion list for explanation of the form Octolune.

Comment is about Octolune I (blog)

Original item by Freda Davis

Tom - lovely and so sad - I imagine it touches a chord with many xx

Comment is about We Kissed As The House Blew Away (blog)

Original item by Tom

Thank you for your lovely comments Patricio - I think like most of us I write it how I see it - & it's often a way to say the things I struggle to say in person!! I hope you're enjoying the festive season & that the new year brings you everything you can hope for x

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

This is more real then anything i have ever said, this has real meaning and just naturally beautiful, and i love this so much.

Comment is about Recovery Position (blog)

why

Comment is about bluelit 2 (12/23/2015) (blog)

Original item by Zach Dafoe

Ria, Chemo, Setting fire to the hen-house to kill the fox inside. Tommy

Comment is about Chemotherapy (blog)

Original item by Ria Richardson

"If we all stand together one day we will be free . " Now that's an interesting thought Helen ;-) Tommy

Comment is about Worry Free (blog)

Original item by Wendy Higson

Thanks for reading and your comment makes me feel that I may have achieved to convey 'loneliness' using my scribble. That gives me great satisfaction. Thank you x

Comment is about Recovery Position (blog)

You have a very honest way in your poetry, lovely, thoughtful and refreshing, a strange encounter seems pleasing that it was a brief encounter too, although in the mans defence, I don't think he is on his own, I think most men notice charms first :-), bless you, have a merry Christmas.. What's left, I hope you have a fun filled new year too.

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

Thank you Nigel, I hope you had a lovely Christmas x

Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)

Original item by Nigel Astell

Merry Christmas to you too Patricio x

Comment is about Christmas Message (blog)

Original item by Pixievic

Thank you... It is from personal experience and sometimes when I get my feelings out of my head I can almost move on in myself

Comment is about Chemotherapy (blog)

Original item by Ria Richardson

Never....shame...Merry Christmas

Comment is about Christmas Message (blog)

Original item by Pixievic