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RESERVOIRS

They don't ask much from us

these broad reservoirs

geometrically serving their purpose

but without fairy fringes of willow

nuzzling eddies, sun dappled secrets

they give as good as they get.

 

Purified,sanitized water supplied

and replenished,

great bowls of solace for the thirsty masses

 

and they have their curious visitors

most in amazement, reverence even

at such expanse elevated in the sky

on mindless concrete

 

like the visit to a graveyard

then leave without a sigh.

 

 

◄ ANOTHER DAY IN SOFAWORLD

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raypool

Mon 3rd Oct 2016 11:29

Thanks Stu and Tony . I used to live close to one and they seemed shrouded in mystery. I rewrote this to try to get under the skin of it. We all do that don't we sometimes?

Congratulations of POTW Tony !

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Stu Buck

Sun 2nd Oct 2016 00:22

a fine, intriguing piece on a topic with untapped (aha thanks) potential

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