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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 16:21

Fascinating poem, Holden. Without a paddle, it seems, and perhaps up the creek, or worse.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 16:13

An atmospheric poem of discovery ( especially self-discovery), Rasa. Very enjoyable.

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Clare

Sun 24th Apr 2022 12:42

Hey, Stephen. Just want to say thankyou for your continued support and positive comments on my work. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Love your stuff.😀

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Clare

Sun 24th Apr 2022 12:39

Thanks, John for your continued support of my work. Always very humbled by your lovely feedback. It is very much appreciated. 😌

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Apr 2022 11:41

Maybe, Graham. But Shakespeare didn’t stop at a couple of murders, did he?

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 24th Apr 2022 10:13

Apologies to the Bard on the weekend of his birthday.

This is the hag, when maids lie on their backs, that presses them and learns them first to bear, making them women of good carriage.

Peace, peace, John Coopey, thou talk’st of nothing.

True, I talk of dreams, which are the children of an idle brain, begot of nothing but vain fantasy, which is as thin of substance as the air.

Enjoy your Sunday JC

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John Botterill

Sun 24th Apr 2022 09:39

Phenomenal, Clare. So much skill within the emotional intelligence!

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John Botterill

Sun 24th Apr 2022 09:25

Thanks Stephen for the lovely comment! This poem came literally out of the blue! 😀

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Grant Aspinall

Sun 24th Apr 2022 09:10

Dolphin Moon

How we love your Dolphin Moon the parting of the waves The shore where our future lies the grass among our graves
Let me take you to the sea where we float so merrily and smile and wave on lost souls saved the parting of the waves
Dolphin moon sing the tune let me see thee lie Dolphin Moon not too soon no more tears goodbye
How we love your Dolphin Moon down the hatch old friend can’t wait to see you again when the pain is at an end
Dolphins sing your melody the prisoner’s sufferings cease just for a glimpse of a Dolphin free surfing on the Ocean Sea

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 09:06

A stunning poem, David. Oh, the tragedy and irony of this whole bloody mess......

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 09:02

An original and enjoyable piece, John. An underrated accessory, the skylight.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 08:51

Thanks to the continued comments, John B, John C and MC.
It's important that festivals like the Proms showcase new music and of course the choice will not be to everyone's taste. It is unfortunate that many fine composers (thanks for highlighting George Lloyd, MC) do not get their music played at these events, while some overrated junk (Boulez, for example) is constantly stuffed down people's throats. Music, and what makes it enjoyable, is subjective, like so many things.
Having said that, the reaction to 'Panic' smacked of intolerance and a grim resistance to anything new or unfamiliar.

Thanks to Rudyard and Holden for liking this piece.

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John Botterill

Sun 24th Apr 2022 07:03

Thanks Holden. A lovely comment which means a lot to me. 😀

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 24th Apr 2022 05:56

A wonderful poem, John, you've definitely done justice to the "framed moving pictures" that "depict the heavens"! 😎

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 24th Apr 2022 05:44

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, John, I'm truly grateful! 😊

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 20:21

Ingenious poetry, Holden. There is a message for us all in this! 😀

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 13:19

To which should be added the question "why?". Is there any
simple answer? 😏

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John Marks

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 13:18

“Mighty is the charm
Of these abstractions to a mind beset
With images, and haunted by herself
And specially delightful unto me
Was that clear synthesis built up aloft
So gracefully.”
― William Wordsworth, The Prelude

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 13:07

If you want brilliance, try George Lloyd's Symphonic Mass - or
my favourite, his 11th Symphony...with a finale the composer
referred to as "the light at the end of the tunnel we all hope to see". Then ask yourself why the BBC Proms has continually
neglected this music, except for a nod during the centenary
of his birth. It's a state of mind, I suppose, but I much
prefer George's optimistic stoicism that saw him survive near
death and medical loss of hope after his Arctic Convoy cruiser
HMS Trinidad was mortally wounded by a rogue torpedo and
his Royal Marine comrades drowned in oil at their battle
stations deep within the hull of the ship.

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julie callaghan

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 11:43

Thanks for the likes

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 11:42

@stephen Atkinson, You're welcome, the imagery I created is a reflection of the imagery I saw in yours, thank you

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John Coopey

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 08:53

Would anyone know if any of the orchestra had played a bum note?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 08:20

I'm flattered Russell. And your's is much better than mine! Excellent imagery 🌈

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John Coopey

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 07:29

You might be right, MC. They certainly used to giggle when I showed them what was in my underpants.
Thanks, Kevin. Not sure I’ll make this one. We might be on holiwags, although a funeral might stop us going (silver lining and all that).

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kJ Walker

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 06:57

I'm sure that this will go down as well as the Donny version did.
Another Coopey classic.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 23:34

Could it be that In places like Goole
There's some unspoken female rule
Among the ladies who play it cool
That sees them fancying someone who'll
Make them laugh by playing the fool?? 😊

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John Marks

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 23:31

Thank you Mark. Surprising how many roads in London are 'Lanes' e.g. Cricklewood Lane.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 23:19

Thanks for the kind comments, gents.
I managed to upload the photo from my PC's docs. file, but for
some technical reason beyond my ken, it doesn't transfer when
the "Read and leave comments" line is clicked. 😐

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 22:03

I'm sure you're right, Mr Strapp, I think.

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Jock Strapp Jr

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 21:24

Och! ef awnla yudda ben borrn scaw-esh mester C! therrs naethen moore the lassies like tharn a marn en a skurt-et gevs tham revengefal reason tae goo aroond weth merrors glood tae theyer shuz

Sl'ainte Mhath!

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John Botterill

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 20:21

Love the poetic tribute and the way you've pointed out that times change but reactionary instincts still need to be challenged 😀

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 17:59

Thanks, John and Bethany. It's not exactly a toe-tapper, I agree, John, but I am amused by the idea of a few thousand Sir Bufton Tuftons all ranting at the Beeb at once.
Sorry Bethany. I guess you can't please everyone, as Harrison might have said!

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 16:07

Don’t knock Goole, Greg. I’m something of a celebrity there, what with me having most of my teeth.
Can you be a reluctant “incel”, Jennifer?
And thanks for the Likes, John and Holden.

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jennifer Malden

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 15:02

Nice one! Hope at least your're not an Incel!!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 14:57

Beautifully written, loved the articulate rooks, and unfortunately not so far off.

Jennifer

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Mike Bartram

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 14:26

thank you

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Fri 22nd Apr 2022 14:08

yes make the most of any inspirations Russell

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 14:02

I was inspired to write this after reading Equilibrium by Stephen W Atkinson

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Fri 22nd Apr 2022 14:00

regarding the last line-the sooner the better-the more the merrier

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Fri 22nd Apr 2022 13:58

my mum says to tell you Stephen it wasnt her but she wishes it had have been

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Greg Freeman

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 12:38

A wonderful addition to the cultural capital of Goole, I'd say, John!

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 11:12

love it, thank you for the images

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John Botterill

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 09:43

Lovely moving poem, MC. 😀

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John Botterill

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 09:24

Thanks Stephen. I'm really glad you liked the poem and thought the tone was correct. I didn't want to sound irreverent but living is difficult enough without additional grief, as you say 😀

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 08:12

Not one I hummed along to, I’ll grant you, Stephen. “Carpet slipper rage” - wonderful.

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 08:07

And master lyricist of the “naughty”, Stephen.

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 07:58

😁

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 07:38

A worthy successor to George, John, though I wouldn't take the Order of Lenin at the moment. Cheeky chappie with just a little self-censorship!

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 07:31

The perfect poem, Clare. Informative and humorous! This is one area where men have it quite easy, I think.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Apr 2022 07:23

I suppose undertakers hope for a quiet holiday period. You're right, John, those left behind have to do all the work and continue to run their lives, as well as grieving. I think your poem hits exactly the right tone, culminating in the last line, as MC says.

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