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J.D. Bardo

Wed 28th Apr 2021 10:15

A wonderful poem, I especially like poems about gardening, and you have done several. I love this one, and hope that it will be seen outside of our poetry community as this is so readable with great points being made. Definitely deserving of publication!! J.D.

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Tom

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:55

Great write and great message Julie. ?

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Tom

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:49

Thanks to Keither, Jordyn, Stephen, Julie, Stephen, Aviva, Holden Moncrieff, Nazia and Brenda for the likes and encouragement. Really appreciate you reading.

And thank you Keith and Jordyn, so pleased you got something out of this little birthday ramble. ?

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Tom

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:46

Thanks Tony, Jordyn, Stephen, Aviva and Holden for reading and the encouragement/likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 28th Apr 2021 09:28

Thank you for all the kind likes. Also for the lovely comments Stephen G and Aviva.

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Ghazala lari

Wed 28th Apr 2021 07:17

Thanks for reading the poem and leaving your thoughts.?

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Ghazala lari

Wed 28th Apr 2021 07:16

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it.

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d.knape

Wed 28th Apr 2021 03:13

the idea is to embarrass you
not...cover you!

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d.knape

Wed 28th Apr 2021 03:12

split down the middle. hahaha
you love puns don't you?

?

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John Coopey

Tue 27th Apr 2021 20:35

Thanks for your thoughts, Stephen and MC. And thanks for the Likes, Stephen A, Holden and Aviva.

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kJ Walker

Tue 27th Apr 2021 20:25

If that is the case then I apologize. I missed the news item about Wendy Cope.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 27th Apr 2021 19:38

An incorrect assumption in an age in which to be readily offended appears endemic. I was reading the news item on Wendy Cope
and it occurred that there had surely never been a time when poets
in either category had so much opportunity to be read and heard.
And that both could and should make hay now that the sun shines
so brightly on the stuff they produce. Cheers!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 19:17

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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kJ Walker

Tue 27th Apr 2021 18:59

If I didn't know better I'd assume that this is a dig at another poet on this site.
I hope that I'm wrong, and not reading too much into this.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:42

There must be something about Honduras. It always stumps me too.

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Your Royal Poetess

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:31

??

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:28

Wonderful poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:16

This is great.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:14

A beautiful tribute.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Apr 2021 17:09

I had not heard 'Thank you for waiting' before. What a remarkable poem it is.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 27th Apr 2021 16:58

Arachnids are interesting creatures - not least for the variety of their
size and effect - ranging from harmless (to humans) to deadly and
best avoided. They have both inspired and instilled fear. My most
recent memory was seeing one tiny specimen near my bathroom
window suddenly emerge and rush forward to literally wrap a tiny
passing insect in its enveloping thread in what seemed like seconds.
Size is only relevant to the parties and the situation involved ! I'm
glad to live in a benign land which has no dangerous specimens - like
the Brazilian Wandering Spider which is known to run AT people, its
venom being of the nasty necrosis sort that rots the infected flesh.
Meanwhile, armed with a glass and piece of card, I'll keep helping
those more congenial examples I find trapped in the bath ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 27th Apr 2021 16:39

Ah...those precious childhood memories. No wonder the young mind is a target for other aims and intentions...no names no pack drill !.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 27th Apr 2021 16:24

Sadly, there are too many instances where the brave would-be rescuer perishes and the person in trouble is rescued. Most often it involves pets in distress too. He certainly was selfless.

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keith jeffries

Tue 27th Apr 2021 16:10

Enticing garments but not yet ready for the catwalk.
Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 14:15

Opinion is split down the middle

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 14:14

Better a short love than no lover tall

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julie callaghan

Tue 27th Apr 2021 13:57

?

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Your Royal Poetess

Tue 27th Apr 2021 13:06

How you can nominate him for a posthumous (George across) award ?? -

https://www.gov.uk/honours/recommend-bravery-award

Go fund me page to support his family -

https://gofund.me/6f47fe15

Good Morning Britain Interview -

https://youtu.be/FcNolTyFc48

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 12:48

This feels very potent, thank you for your blessings ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 12:44

I like
'I have no red love in the pink world
nor green hope in the gray everyday'
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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 12:41

Lovely message, perfect from start to finish. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 12:38

I love this concept ?

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keith jeffries

Tue 27th Apr 2021 10:06

Tom,
Thanks for your message on my profile which I appreciate greatly. We seem to have a similar approach to the way we write poetry. The word inspiration is at the root of the matter. From where does this come? Is it random or formulated in the subconscious? I often pass through times of aridity then the opposite occurs and I find myself in full flood.

I enjoy your poetry. Never stop writing.
Keith

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Philipos

Tue 27th Apr 2021 09:24


Refreshingly nostalgic - enjoyed. P ?

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julie callaghan

Tue 27th Apr 2021 06:33

Thanks for the likes Aviva and Holden.

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julie callaghan

Tue 27th Apr 2021 06:33

Thanks for the comment MC, thanks for the likes Aviva and Holden.

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Tue 27th Apr 2021 05:41

Simply beautiful

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 02:00

Thank you for commenting John, ?

The words 'I love you' and 'trust me' always come in gaudy attractive packaging but inside each packet the quality and quantity of contents can vary immensely from what might have been expected. In that way many people must reach a similar place.

Also thank you Nigel for yet another lovely poetic response ?
I'm always honoured when my poetry inspires more poetry.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 27th Apr 2021 01:05

Good cheers brings good cheer.
Match makers make a match.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 27th Apr 2021 00:43

A crying heart
needs a love
gone far far away
when crying does not help
it stabs itself with pain.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 27th Apr 2021 00:24

All my mates had been to see their football stars and kept asking me when I was going to a match.
One day my Dad took us and I fell in love with football.

Thanks for your comment M.C. Newberry

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keith jeffries

Mon 26th Apr 2021 21:13

This poem for me spoke immediately of my best friend who I first met in Germany whilst serving in HM Forces 52 years ago. We have never been two peas in a pod as we differ on many issues. Yet it is a friendship rooted in a certain consistency, honesty and mutual respect. I was particularly drawn to your line "there have been gaps when you and I fell out of orbit" This was always temporary as we soon re established contact.
Thank you for this.

Keith

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John Coopey

Mon 26th Apr 2021 20:26

Simple, powerful, evocative. Who hasn't been here at some time?

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John Coopey

Mon 26th Apr 2021 20:22

The best time of year for the garden, in my view. I've got my taties in.
"Haulms up! Taties, haulms up!
Gimme your haulms, gimme gimme your haulms!"

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 26th Apr 2021 19:19

Many Thanks to M C Newberry, Brenda and Jordyn for the likes.

M.C I can almost hear you singing your poem there!

Brenda I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, good to hear you've been winning the wars in your garden!?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 26th Apr 2021 19:11

I ❤ this poem Brenda. Talk about the moon's glow getting stronger i was in Wales a few days ago & the almost full moon was staying visible in daylight so that's how bright it's getting ? Don't forget to make a full moon wish!

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Mon 26th Apr 2021 18:54

Another beautiful piece, thank you for sharing.

-J

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Brenda Wells

Mon 26th Apr 2021 18:47

Beautifully captured and so true. I have spent more time doing battle in my garden this year then I usually do and feel glad for having done so.
Thank you for sharing these sentiments in such a positive way. It is interesting how one can remove all manner of weeds, from the garden and one's past, when battling in the flower bed.

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Joe Marcello

Mon 26th Apr 2021 18:44

Thanks much

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 26th Apr 2021 18:43

Thank you for your comment Nigel ?
I'll take that as another vote for extending the poem.

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