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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 31st Oct 2018 06:33

A wonderful poem Fred. Very moving. Thank you for sharing. ❤

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d.knape

Wed 31st Oct 2018 02:45

Congratulations.
but on that island thing,
why did you pick your brother-in-law?
and not your husband?
your long-suffering husband,
beaten out by his own brother...
this raises many disturbing questions.

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 02:00

Thanks for the constant readings and support, Jon. ?

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:52

Even the 369th Infantry of the US were never paid proper dues by their own country for their ferocious skill and contribution in wartime during the Great War.

Great poem, John, as I'm sure you can tell from the warm reception.?

Comment is about Anthem for all all these damned Youngsters (blog)

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:48

Great word choice in this.?

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:33

Thank you for taking part in something great. I will update you on anything of the book if you wish, just let me know.

Keep writing gems and keep going the distance.?? Your delivery and well-thought out flow make for something great.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:28

I remember Pharlap - Aussie wonder horse of yesteryear
whose demise was said to be skullduggery because he was TOO successful (for the crooks' liking!).
You have another down there now, I hear - a mare, I believe, who seems unbeatable. Fingers crossed for her!!

Comment is about Chautauqua We Salute You (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:24

At least we never feel conned
When Hugh waves his magic wand!?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:18

My reference work on phrases and fables makes NO mention of All Hallows Eve being anything to do with witches
and the rest so popular nowadays. It does mention the word as a derivative of that describing a holy man in the past, logical since All Saints Day follows on. There are
mentions of customs like bobbing for apples but NONE of
the current stuff. So, are we victim of some imported
additions that have no connection with out own calendar
date but provide useful commercial opportunities far in excess of mere fruit? Who can we blame? Let's do it soon!!

Comment is about Hallow Halloween (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:13

Data protection? But then I have a sneaking feeling that if I
were an employer, I would wish to choose those working for me...not have it done for me by legal process or its threat. I can see why "family" firms like to keep it in the family, to see their plans and intentions through and not
waylaid by the imposed participation of others whose
commitment and reasons for applying may not be what is
sought by those with most sacrificed and most to lose.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:05

A useful and timely reminder of the wider participation of
those who took part in our conflicts against aggressive tyranny.

Comment is about Anthem for all all these damned Youngsters (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:58

Hurrah for the positivity - and the trouble taken to put one
of Churchill's favourite poems into a more modern idiom.

Comment is about Don't say this struggle's all in vain (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:55

Neatly constructed with a nod to our human fallibility -
Followed with a blind devotion
That surrenders logic to emotion.
But it seems that (near or far) fate
Will see us meet the devil incarnate!

Comment is about THE HOLY GHOST (blog)

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:46

November is a month of Remembrance of which All Souls Day and Remembrance Sunday are particular solemnities. A fitting month I have always thought as the season is also indicative of death. A powerful indictment on our inability to create a better world out of such sadness and inequality.

Thank you for this

Keith

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:42

Life should be that simple Mark, but we need to be awkward and challenging as well as anodyne in our work. Nevertheless the sentiment is a good one.


Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:37

Good for him.
Horses are beautiful and they shouldn't have to run round in circles forever.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:34

Remarkably soothing and yet slightly disturbing with the questioning you are so prone to do Peter. You go inside a theme and view it from the very heart of it, spreading out all you imagine. A real treat and a feat too.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:30

Even apples have feelings, and this one being lonely makes us suspend disbelief, from twig and leaf !

Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:29

So beautiful.
Magical.
Will want to read it many times.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:27

A curious tale indeed Hugh, whetting our appetites for kids to come knocking uninvited at our doors. Harry Potter watch out!

Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:24

Powerful words.
A lot of truth.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:23

A sort of mechanical analysis that works for me Tommy; it is strangely satisfying and I think written with tongue in cheek. Good enough for me!

Ray

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Becky Who

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:22

I'm sure there are some - perhaps even many - good, rich people, deserving of their wealth and philanthropic to a T. I'm sure MSN online also talks about those that are throwing their money around to blur climate change research, pay backhanders to get access to profitable but environmentally distastrous projects, taking private jets halfway across the planet on a whim, and generally selling all our futures for the sake of their own immediate profit. It doesn't do to generalise about rich people, I guess, any more than it does to make generalisations about beggars, people on benefits, migrants or "leftwingers".

Perhaps I over-reacted to your original comment in reading it as dismissing protest as a foible of youth. (I guess I was also nettled at the dig at poor Joe Hill, although it was a play on words he probably would have appreciated). I'm sure "protest" is sometimes - often, even - far from the best way to bring about change for the better. But we have to do SOMETHING, surely?

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:20

Very meaningful.
A strong message.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:11

Full on gorgeous Jennifer. A smorgasbord of delights and well set up with opening and closing lines. Congratulations!

Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:09

Bravo. Fantastic story. Love it.

Hannah

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 19:25

Masterful

Thank you
Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:53

Thanks for reading and commenting on The Last Apple on the Tree Don..much appreciated..?

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:50

Fabulous....loved it

Thanks
Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:50

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on The Last Apple on the Tree, Hugh..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:46

Thank you for commenting on The Last Apple on the Tree Tom...?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:07

That sounds like a real fishy tale..nice one D.K. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:05

Sound interesting Tom great poem for Halloween..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:58

That is it Big Sal..so pleased you see it...both literal and analogy in symmetry...?

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Tom Doolan

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:58

Golden and delicious. T :)

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Tom Doolan

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:53

A tale of the unexpected. wicked work Hugh. T:)

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Big Sal

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:52

It's crazy how each and every line can be taken both literally and as an analogy.

Great piece as usual, Taylor.

Hone that craft.?

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Kporho Raphael Oyeke

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:42

Nice one, you and your pet are not looking bad.
Its obvious that you're pets lover...

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Kporho Raphael Oyeke

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:30

Thanks...

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:16

Excellent..?

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Don Matthews

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:04

A tree without an apple
Could be any tree
Even if it bared lots
It's bare for all to see

The last one it did hang on
Oh so valiantly
Some little blighter picked it
Was saving it for me ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 30th Oct 2018 13:38

A dad who drives the car in the back seat! Amazing!?

Comment is about Trick or eat (blog)

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Big Sal

Tue 30th Oct 2018 11:50

I'll see you all on the ballot.?

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Big Sal

Tue 30th Oct 2018 11:49

Sounds like a poet's version of Fyre Festival.

Come on guys, up your game!?

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 30th Oct 2018 10:02

I don’t travel very much but am always inspired to write when I do. this is a lovely, quietly beguiling piece Peter. I can see you sitting there compiling this and the view etc. Interestingly the tick/tick of a clock can be both peaceful and irritatingly noisy.

A wonderful observation.

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Hugh

Tue 30th Oct 2018 09:07

Amelia twitched her nose and changed the demon's name to Heath from Keith.Your absolutely amazing Amelia.What next?Tee hee.

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Don Matthews

Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:58

No way was Keith a demon. Tina might have been a bit of a girl, but not Keith. ?

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John Coopey

Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:52

Thanks, MC.. I’m told I sing like a bird. Unfortunately it’s a magpie.

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:50

Apples don't fall far from the tree, but yours doesn't want to fall at all! Good one Taylor.

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:46

Keith...no it can't be, can it?

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