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RISE N' SHINE

RISE N' SHINE

interior
fractured
exterior
manufactured
scrambled
fried
toasted
diced
ground
down
no stalk
found
bleached
drained
lost in
maze
fissures
and splits
served
with grit
hard
egg
borrowed
begged
great
fall
hit the
wall
shell
broke
uncloaked
whole grain
golden yolk
pieces
and bits
made an
omelette
those
dawns
long...long
gone
rise
n' shine
time
to dine

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Comments

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Martin Elder

Sun 14th Apr 2019 15:01

I agree it has a marvellous rhythm and pace to it.

Nice one

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Josie

Sun 14th Apr 2019 08:57

This poem is so playful - great rhythm - I bet it sounds great read aloud. I really liked it.

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