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Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:44

frighteningly enjoyable Tom.


Leave your neck uncovered tonight
I might drop in for a bite! ?





Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:42

unfailing quality as ever Keith. Fabulous!






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<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:33

nothing less than brilliant TW





Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:31

great loss Fred, and a great poem!





Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:28

a somewhat Ted Bundy-like conclusion to what has been for me a great ( though teetering on the spooky ) up and down carousel ride of good memories and murky ones mooching in the shadows-ooer Ian!

now keep your Carolli arse in the ring matey
we need to be further entertained!

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Rose ?

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Hugh

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:16

Great song by Julia Brennan.Inner Demons.Thanks for sharing.

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Wed 31st Oct 2018 11:02

Best Halowe'en poem so far Ian!

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 31st Oct 2018 10:57

thanks for commenting on 'a sting in the tail' Ray - glad you liked it mate :-)

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Don Matthews

Wed 31st Oct 2018 10:34

Hey Hugh you have gone and downgraded
Amelia's phone that she had
A brand new Epensive 6G one
For a common old 2G, so sad ?

No wonder the boys said I want that
Epensive ones cost a fortune
Could you please tell me where I can get one
Cos I'm wanting to upgrade mine soon ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 31st Oct 2018 10:24

I gotta get my hands on
This new Epensive phone
It's one I've never heard of
A real cool new ring tone?

I'm sure it must be 6G
Or else it's out of date
Apple's gotta keep ahead
And not be running late

Epensive phone? I'm flummoxed
What colour it portrays?
Multicoloured? fleckle-toned?
Surely not shabby grey?

The name Epensive brings to mind
A phone in serious thought
I gotta go and get one
This phone, I gotta bought ?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 31st Oct 2018 10:09

Hugh - if Amelia had been on her broomstick instead of on foot all this unpleasantness could have been avoided.

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Wed 31st Oct 2018 10:05

I'm not a believer myself, but if I were I would have to have great faith in a holy ghost, holy spirit...call it what you will. How else could God be on every believer's shoulder whenever needed? It must be comforting.

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Hugh

Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:46

An excellent scary description of Halloween,which fortunately just comes round once a year.Thankfully the kids that knock and scare are still at school.But come 4 o'clock they will be home to roam and scare.

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Don Matthews

Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:35

As MC says nice to see something positive on the site ?

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Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:17

Great poem Ray.
Very clever and amusing too.

Hannah

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Tom Doolan

Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:09

Hi M.C. - You are right. Halloween has definitely been hijacked and commercialised. I never went trick or treating as a kid. Although I did take my own children. A Christian festival stolen by pagans. What the devil. T ?

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Tom Doolan

Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:02

Hi Taylor - I will be knocking on your door later lol. ?

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Martin Elder

Wed 31st Oct 2018 07:56

A stunning poem full of colour and light..
Congratulations Jennifer

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Mike Bartram

Wed 31st Oct 2018 07:02

Hello Dave...it was a terrible tragedy and I am aware of Vichai's standing in Thailand, I have lots of Thai friends and they confirm what you say. Hopefully this was purely an accident, only a full and througher investigation will will reveal what really happened. My thoughts go out to everyone touched by this awful event. Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. Regards Mike

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 31st Oct 2018 06:36

Love the rythm and rhyme of this poem Ray..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 31st Oct 2018 06:33

A wonderful poem Fred. Very moving. Thank you for sharing. ❤

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d.knape

Wed 31st Oct 2018 02:45

Congratulations.
but on that island thing,
why did you pick your brother-in-law?
and not your husband?
your long-suffering husband,
beaten out by his own brother...
this raises many disturbing questions.

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 02:00

Thanks for the constant readings and support, Jon. ?

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:52

Even the 369th Infantry of the US were never paid proper dues by their own country for their ferocious skill and contribution in wartime during the Great War.

Great poem, John, as I'm sure you can tell from the warm reception.?

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:48

Great word choice in this.?

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Big Sal

Wed 31st Oct 2018 01:33

Thank you for taking part in something great. I will update you on anything of the book if you wish, just let me know.

Keep writing gems and keep going the distance.?? Your delivery and well-thought out flow make for something great.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:28

I remember Pharlap - Aussie wonder horse of yesteryear
whose demise was said to be skullduggery because he was TOO successful (for the crooks' liking!).
You have another down there now, I hear - a mare, I believe, who seems unbeatable. Fingers crossed for her!!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:24

At least we never feel conned
When Hugh waves his magic wand!?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:18

My reference work on phrases and fables makes NO mention of All Hallows Eve being anything to do with witches
and the rest so popular nowadays. It does mention the word as a derivative of that describing a holy man in the past, logical since All Saints Day follows on. There are
mentions of customs like bobbing for apples but NONE of
the current stuff. So, are we victim of some imported
additions that have no connection with out own calendar
date but provide useful commercial opportunities far in excess of mere fruit? Who can we blame? Let's do it soon!!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:13

Data protection? But then I have a sneaking feeling that if I
were an employer, I would wish to choose those working for me...not have it done for me by legal process or its threat. I can see why "family" firms like to keep it in the family, to see their plans and intentions through and not
waylaid by the imposed participation of others whose
commitment and reasons for applying may not be what is
sought by those with most sacrificed and most to lose.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:05

A useful and timely reminder of the wider participation of
those who took part in our conflicts against aggressive tyranny.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:58

Hurrah for the positivity - and the trouble taken to put one
of Churchill's favourite poems into a more modern idiom.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:55

Neatly constructed with a nod to our human fallibility -
Followed with a blind devotion
That surrenders logic to emotion.
But it seems that (near or far) fate
Will see us meet the devil incarnate!

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:46

November is a month of Remembrance of which All Souls Day and Remembrance Sunday are particular solemnities. A fitting month I have always thought as the season is also indicative of death. A powerful indictment on our inability to create a better world out of such sadness and inequality.

Thank you for this

Keith

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:42

Life should be that simple Mark, but we need to be awkward and challenging as well as anodyne in our work. Nevertheless the sentiment is a good one.


Ray

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:37

Good for him.
Horses are beautiful and they shouldn't have to run round in circles forever.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:34

Remarkably soothing and yet slightly disturbing with the questioning you are so prone to do Peter. You go inside a theme and view it from the very heart of it, spreading out all you imagine. A real treat and a feat too.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:30

Even apples have feelings, and this one being lonely makes us suspend disbelief, from twig and leaf !

Ray

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:29

So beautiful.
Magical.
Will want to read it many times.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:27

A curious tale indeed Hugh, whetting our appetites for kids to come knocking uninvited at our doors. Harry Potter watch out!

Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:24

Powerful words.
A lot of truth.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:23

A sort of mechanical analysis that works for me Tommy; it is strangely satisfying and I think written with tongue in cheek. Good enough for me!

Ray

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Becky Who

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:22

I'm sure there are some - perhaps even many - good, rich people, deserving of their wealth and philanthropic to a T. I'm sure MSN online also talks about those that are throwing their money around to blur climate change research, pay backhanders to get access to profitable but environmentally distastrous projects, taking private jets halfway across the planet on a whim, and generally selling all our futures for the sake of their own immediate profit. It doesn't do to generalise about rich people, I guess, any more than it does to make generalisations about beggars, people on benefits, migrants or "leftwingers".

Perhaps I over-reacted to your original comment in reading it as dismissing protest as a foible of youth. (I guess I was also nettled at the dig at poor Joe Hill, although it was a play on words he probably would have appreciated). I'm sure "protest" is sometimes - often, even - far from the best way to bring about change for the better. But we have to do SOMETHING, surely?

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:20

Very meaningful.
A strong message.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:11

Full on gorgeous Jennifer. A smorgasbord of delights and well set up with opening and closing lines. Congratulations!

Ray

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:09

Bravo. Fantastic story. Love it.

Hannah

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 19:25

Masterful

Thank you
Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:53

Thanks for reading and commenting on The Last Apple on the Tree Don..much appreciated..?

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:50

Fabulous....loved it

Thanks
Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 15:50

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on The Last Apple on the Tree, Hugh..?

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