Sat 14th Sep 2019 11:49
Cancel the Government Credit Card.
Pay as you go or go into spiraling decline.
Comment is about Paying The Bills (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Great piece I can imagine this being performed on stage as part of a show somehow
Comment is about Him (blog)
Original item by Lisa C Bassignani
A well ordered piece Hugh! There's No Order in our land these days
Comment is about A political plea.ORDER! ORDER! ORDER! (blog)
Original item by hugh
Sat 14th Sep 2019 11:09
when you say Barbies
are you talking about the Doll?
(just kidding)
hahaha
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
Sat 14th Sep 2019 11:08
glad you liked the poem
eat your heart out!
eat the poem!
hahaha
Comment is about Lisa C Bassignani (poet profile)
Original item by Lisa C Bassignani
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Sat 14th Sep 2019 10:32
Your stuff makes me think, moves me. Very inspiring.
Julia
Comment is about new dawn (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Kevin,
Another gem. Can´t wait for Part Two. Where do you get the ideas from ? I would love to see you recite this one.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about A Bag Of Spuds And A Swede (part 1) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 14th Sep 2019 09:01
Well done Bobbie...looking forward to your second.
Like the hat BTW
Comment is about My first poem (blog)
Original item by Bobbie Standish
Dear Don, your mind is fine. These verses are just out of the blue! Only by being inside my messed up head you would understand! It is simply a fragment of an angst filled day. Thanks though, I quite like these slanted rhymes?
Mae
Comment is about The Wait (blog)
Original item by Mae Foreman
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 14th Sep 2019 08:57
Classic, gallows humour-like
Comment is about A Bag Of Spuds And A Swede (part 1) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Lisa D, your comment made me laugh out loud. Thanks for reading and sharing your beautiful sense of humor. I thought about deleting this poem a few times, but I’m glad I didn’t because your comment, while funny reveals a deeper truth. No less than five guys I know came to mind as I wrote this poem including my estranged husband! I don’t understand love that is only skin deep. I suppose it is more about fears and insecurities.
Comment is about Interpretive Dance (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
I love the line "cut adrift in a sea of discovery".
Comment is about My Other.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thank you Tom! I toiled on those last three lines for hours and changed them several times. I’m glad the ones I settled on work well enough to earn some feedback. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. ?
Comment is about Interpretive Dance (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Thank you, Tom, for leaving those kind words on my post about coffee. The autoreader function says 'hot beverage' on the emoji and it adds a bit of digital-millennial feel to the reading, Good for a laugh in the least. ?
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
Original item by Tom
Oh that Silly Sammy...
Comment is about Friday the 13th,a sad day for Sammy the skeleton (blog)
Original item by hugh
I had 2 plates!
Ribs, wings, beans, mac & cheese, veggies and cornbread.
Yum
Comment is about BBQ (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Ruth
Yep, plenty barbies down here but dk's doesn't seem to reach me - too far...?
Comment is about BBQ (blog)
Original item by d.knape
The content is deep for my 'simple' mind but the end-rhyming is good....
Comment is about The Wait (blog)
Original item by Mae Foreman
D.knape
Thank you for stopping by ?
Much appreciated.
Comment is about Lysa d (poet profile)
Original item by Lysa d
I like this very much Keith......
Comment is about My Other.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
So good.....In so few words
Comment is about Tomorrow is far away (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
Cheers Greg.
Comment is about Write Out Loud's Poetry Jam celebrates its 10th anniversary at Marsden jazz festival (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Bobbie,
I am a boy and I like this poem because you speak for equality and that is good.
Thank you
Keith
Comment is about My first poem (blog)
Original item by Bobbie Standish
An interesting poem which assails many people in a world which causes us to be very peripatetic. The old adage says that the home is where the heart is. Some search for a spiritual home and others never find home because there was no home in the first place. I now live sixty miles from where I was born 70 years ago and I know I am home.
A very good poem. Well done and thanks
Keith
Comment is about Belonging (blog)
Original item by Kate Hubbard
Words of wisdom for a world in a rush.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Tomorrow is far away (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
Fabulous words of desire.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Him (blog)
Original item by Lisa C Bassignani
Just in case you can’t see it on my picture
I am a girl
I am a girl,
Men thought they did more work,
They had to hunt,
They had to lurk,
But they weren’t told how to speak,
Or how to dress,
Nor did they need to shout to be heard,
They don’t know what it’s like to be a girl.
I am a girl,
Women’s rights are vital,
We couldn’t vote or leave the house,
Women cleaned, cooked but no appreciation,
Ask Rosa, Coco, Beyoncé too,
Ask Wangari, Malayla, even Florence,
They helped with this,
So thank them,
Or we could not vote, have tutors or even go to school,
I am a girl and you might be too.
I am a girl,
We now can play football, basketball, hockey as well,
We vote, learn, run for president and have tutors,
I am a girl and I’m proud to be too,
I am a girl,
I am a girl,
I am a woman.
By Bobbie Standish
Comment is about My first poem (blog)
Original item by Bobbie Standish
Thank you, Avishek and Chrystel.
Comment is about Thorn in her side (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Philipos
Fri 13th Sep 2019 18:19
May - Hi and thanks for the comments on the Muses - where would we have been without them. Blessings. P. ?
Comment is about Mae Foreman (poet profile)
Original item by Mae Foreman
Thanks for your Sweet poem Nigel, and for your mini analysis on my printed words poems by the way, I enjoyed that.
Comment is about Bumblebee (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Thanks a lot Keith.Its a pleasure and gift to hear from you.
Comment is about What more ? (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
This poem is thought provoking. I enjoyed the style of writing used. The ultimate question holds the key.
Thank you for this Keith
Comment is about What more ? (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
I have got stung
not by a bee
but a honey sweet poem
that keeps flying higher
each and every time I see.
Comment is about Bumblebee (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
I really enjoyed this, particularly the last 3 lines. It's quiet but feels very assured and firm. Really nicely judged.
Lisa's comment made me laugh too. ?
Comment is about Interpretive Dance (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
I really like this Lucas, lots of nice touches of detail to make it both intriguing and feel very real. The last verse is particularly strong. Looking forward to reading more of your work - it looks to be right up my street. Tom.
Comment is about 'Could've Been (blog)
Original item by Lucas Chihinga
Well done Don
you have got a match
with Thalia
and I hope it goes well
keep meeting up at
Hillbillys don't have a drink
She might say - - -
are you coming back
for a coffee!
Comment is about WOL Muse Bus Tour and Thalia (thankyou Philipos) (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
100% Ruth. Without pain there would be no growth ❤
Comment is about Good bye old thoughts (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
A moment captured and nicely infused in words - like a good coffee. ? Nice work.
Comment is about early brew (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Typical isn't as soon as we see the slightest bit of sun, some one gets the BBQ out d.k
Don I thought the smell of Barbie's would be constantly permeating your skies being in Oz!
Comment is about BBQ (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Your humour is a force to bee reckoned with!
Comment is about Bumblebee (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Skeleton was very lonely 'cos he had no body.
Comment is about Friday the 13th,a sad day for Sammy the skeleton (blog)
Original item by hugh
I think he was itn the rebound when he got reboned?
Comment is about Friday the 13th,a sad day for Sammy the skeleton (blog)
Original item by hugh
He was reincarnated and became a rebone christian.Oh my goodness that rattled my funnybone.
Comment is about Friday the 13th,a sad day for Sammy the skeleton (blog)
Original item by hugh
Fri 13th Sep 2019 12:37
It's called unleashing your mind Ruth and waiting to see what it brings back....
Comment is about Bumblebee (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Lisa C Bassignani
Sat 14th Sep 2019 12:32
Thank you all so much.
Comment is about Him (blog)
Original item by Lisa C Bassignani