This is purely a personal opinion - but I prefer them split into three individual poems - each stands well on its own and it gives the reader more time to digest your words before starting on another.
Or do I just have a reduced attention span (whoops, my age is showing)
It would be interesting to know what others think
Comment is about Processing (in 3 parts) (blog)
Original item by Hélène
My grateful thanks to Maria and Tom M. for liking my poem.
Comment is about FOR ANNIE (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
Conscience doth make cowards of us all. I loved your use of a chiming rhyme.
Comment is about The Flame (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
Many thanks Rolph for your incisive and in depth feedback. It is much appreciated. 🙂
Thanks for extra like: New Shoes 👍
Comment is about Happy Makes Me Sad (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
10/10 for using the word 'harse' Good work!
Comment is about The Forest (blog)
Original item by New Shoes
Murphy's Law (also known as Sod's Law) nicely written. G
Comment is about Why Murphy? (blog)
Original item by pallavitryingthings
Finding what true love is, is seeing that you are inseparable from it. Finding a rhythm to incorporate what you love can be a challenge, the mastery is in the details. The energy is out there waiting for you to find it.
Comment is about Rot. (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
You are a woman Jordyn
One who is facing her life rather than running from it!
Comment is about My Inner child still screams (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
A pointed limerick, Rolph. Thanks.
He seems to have really lost it - if he ever had it in the first place - and it's dangerous for us all.
Comment is about King Don The Delusional (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thank you, Rolph. This came to me on a train journey between Brussels and Antwerp. I always keep a notebook handy to jot down ideas.
Rows of houses, nearly kept, conjure up a sense of perfection, of contentment. And yet, who knows what emotions stir behind those walls? Untold stories, as you so rightly say.
Thanks again for your kind comments.
And my thanks to all of you who liked this poem.
Comment is about Neat (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
I love that your poetry is honest and real. Marla
Comment is about The Ghost in My Car (blog)
Original item by Steve Higgins
Thu 20th Feb 2025 20:19
Thank you very much, Andrew, for the kind comment, I really appreciate it! 😊
Comment is about Silt. (blog)
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cMOKamtpUA8&pp=ygUhcHJldGVuZGVycyBiYWNrIG9uIHRoZSBjaGFpbiBnYW5n
Comment is about overqualified (blog)
Original item by Landi Cruz
I’m grate full for your comments, Tom and Tom.
Comment is about GORGONZOLA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Or should my comment have been-well Krafted 😋 its worth raising a toast to methinks-now where did I put my coat? 😁
Comment is about GORGONZOLA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Rolph-I think Don has been reading Mein Kampf for too long
Spooky that we both had ' Don take two ' on our minds almost at the same time. I wonder if he has a mass manipulating wand
Thanks again-big time!
Comment is about King Don The Delusional (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Stephen,
Your words beautifully highlight the contrast between outward appearances and the hidden complexities beneath the surface. The neat houses passing by symbolise the seemingly orderly lives people lead, while the underlying "furious hearts" remind us that not everything is as perfect as it seems. The imagery of "airtight dramas" and the idea of keeping our heads down suggests a poignant reflection on how we often distance ourselves from the struggles of others. It’s a powerful reminder that behind every neat exterior, there are untold stories and emotions. A thought-provoking piece! I love it!
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about Neat (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Rick,
Your poem cleverly captures the humour and irony of hypochondriasis, blending wit with a touch of vulnerability. The exaggerated fears of the character, paired with his belief in terminal conditions over minor ailments, make for a delightful read. I love how you build up the tension around each "serious" health concern, only to reveal the less dramatic, and often comical, reality in the end. The twist of a psychological diagnosis is both clever and fitting. It’s a fun and insightful take on a very relatable human tendency—well done!
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about Hypochondriasis (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Tom,
Your poem is a powerful and honest expression of inner turmoil, and its raw emotion deeply connects. The contrasts you weave throughout capture the struggle of a mind at war with itself, making the piece both haunting and relatable. Though darkness looms in your words, your questions about light and sanctuary hint at the possibility of hope. I truly believe that even in the heaviest moments, the mind can find its way to peace. Keep writing—your words have meaning, and I hope you find the answers you seek.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about Happy Makes Me Sad (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Many thanks Marla - There are more questions than answers ?? 🙂
Thanks for likes: Red Brick Keshner, Stephen G, Aisha, Naomi, Holden &TOM MERTON 👍
Comment is about Happy Makes Me Sad (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Naomi,
What a wonderfully atmospheric piece—well done!
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about A WOODEN TAVERN (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thu 20th Feb 2025 11:08
Thanks for your thoughts, Graham and Tom. And for the Like, Red Brick.
Comment is about GORGONZOLA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you all for the likes on this one.
I suspect some might find the final line a little jarring. I am not a pacifist although I have in the past given it a great deal of thought.
I believe there comes a time when to defend decent human values of equality and respect for all is necessary. Unfortunately such resolve often means abandoning basic human values of not killing. This is not something I say lightly as I abhour violence.
Any escalation toward murderous conflict needs to be mananged with the wisdom of Solomon, it seems we are short on Solomon's wisdom at this time.
David RL Moore
Comment is about Advice from fallen angels (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thank you so much @Flyntland for comment. Justice for some is a relative term. Justice can never be truly done.
Comment is about "Black Hawks" (blog)
Original item by Emeka Collins
Is it really ten years JC? Almost as long as the mousetrap!!
Comment is about GORGONZOLA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Tom, you have asked some good questions. Marla
Comment is about Happy Makes Me Sad (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
That's seems very true Graham, at least one moron has made himself available. Let us hope that the dynamic of "The Kings New Clothes" begins to fade.
I fear that some will never recognise a moron, even if that moron exposes himself for all to see.
David RL Moore
Comment is about Advice from fallen angels (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Gorgeous poem Jeff. The twirling mind intertwined with the expansive New Mexico lands. Wow. (In New Mexico mountains, it feels like you can touch the sky.)
Comment is about Deserts Of New Mexico (blog)
Original item by Jeff Bresee
Thanks for likes: Holden, Red Brick Keshner, Yanma Hidayah, Stephen G & TOM MERTON. 👍
Comment is about Cry Cry Cry (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Thanks kindly, Dana 🙏🏻🕊🌷
Comment is about sheen of young love (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
When a catalyst is needed, one often appears. Often that catalyst is a moron.
Comment is about Advice from fallen angels (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Inter-meddling's putting billions of futures at stake and as usual created by and involving only a tiny percentage of dare I say people? or blind fools more like!
Thank you Rolph
Comment is about A Deal Among Devils (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thankyou Stephen,
It's sometimes interesting to add context to the creation of a piece of writing.
Much appreciated.
David
Comment is about A lull in the fighting (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
RBK. John, Trevor and Stephen - also to Aisha, Holden, Yanma and Naomi, I appreciate your gift of flowers.
Comment is about FOR ANNIE (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
Tom and Rolph, Thank you for your very kind comments.
Comment is about FOR ANNIE (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
Thanks for the Likes, Tom and Aisha. Am I the only one to recognise that this isn’t about securing peace in Ukraine? It’s about US and Russia agreeing areas of unopposed “influence”, Russia in Eastern Europe, US in Greenland, Panama etc. Otherwise what’s in it for US and why else exclude Europe from the talks. The new world order is being formulated.
Comment is about UKRAINE - I'LL FLUSH YOU DOWN THE DRAIN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Revised and re-edited, I hope for the better!
Comment is about Phoenix (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
Thanks Stephen - my cardiologist has a mantra; "Don't think about what you've lost, think about what you can still do." What a crock of sh1t !
Comment is about Memorabilia (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
As ever you have your finger on the pulse - I just hope that Europe stands united and does not start to make fragmented individual 'deals'.
Where does Brexit leave us? we are a tiny island in conflict with itself, we need to pull together and we need friends.
The Second World War would not have been won if we had been so friendless - we must learn that lesson.
Comment is about A Deal Among Devils (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Another fine poem, Rolph. A warning and a wake-up call which should be read by European governments as a matter of urgency.
Comment is about A Deal Among Devils (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Enjoyed this one, Rob. The ecstasy of memories. 'Life's scrapbook', as you say. Great writing.
Comment is about Memorabilia (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
Thank you for this fascinating and moving explanation, David. Much appreciated.
Comment is about A lull in the fighting (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thank you, Rolph, for your kind words. Trump seems at ease with authoritarian figures, probably because they have so much in common, such as only accepting election results when you win.
Comment is about The Sunshine Boys (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thank you for your kind words, @RolphDavid. Your thoughtful interpretation means a lot to me. A little about the backstory of the poem: the main concern lies in the line, "Does a queen need to show her skin to win the king?" That was the first line that came to my mind. I came up with it shortly after I saw Kanye West and his wife on the red carpet at the 2025 Grammys. However, that doesn't mean I consider Kanye to be a king. For me, as a woman, witnessing that makes me feel his wife is being demeaned. This statement may be controversial, but I think most would agree that something valuable should be protected. An analogy I can provide is that if we have money, we would certainly keep it safe rather than display it publicly. This doesn't mean women shouldn't appear in public, but it pertains to how they dress. Their bodies are valuable, and it is something that needs to be treasured and kept safe. Even though there is freedom regarding how women dress, I believe there should still be boundaries applied. I think, for women, there is a sense of self-worth that they need to uphold. However, when I see her, I feel that a woman's value is merely an accessory to a man. And that truly breaks my heart. Through that poem, I aim to present a perspective from a girl who is asking her mother what a queen should be. I personally believe that a mother's position holds the title of queen, as she has successfully won the heart of her king, who is her husband.
Regards,
Yanmah
Comment is about The Flame (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
Hi Aisha
Nice poem. I'd like to see you write something that doesn't rhyme. Just for a change? But whatever, just keep writing.
John S
Comment is about Love Is Love (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Naomi
Fri 21st Feb 2025 13:12
Thank you Rolph☺️
Comment is about A WOODEN TAVERN (blog)
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