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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 17:04

Or answers than questions, or should we all just go with the flow and accept what is x without getting too stressed about it all.....

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 5th Sep 2020 16:58

Hey - I knew the answer to Cruella de Ville. Show me the show biz
questions ?.up to and including "101". That's my sort of entertainment !
P.S. Love the title "Coopey's Groupies".

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 5th Sep 2020 16:50

Conjures up a beautiful image, Abdul.

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Sep 2020 16:38

I think the “coming out” from Po to Paul is quite sufficient. I wouldn’t want to see you “coming out” in your panties.
It sounds as though Phil in your team, Brian, is the Glen in ours.

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Sat 5th Sep 2020 16:03

It's stood the test of time John!

We always knew when Phil in our team did not know the answer...when he said he was 99% sure.

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Sat 5th Sep 2020 15:40

I generally dislike repetition Keith, but this works.

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 15:24

Dan,

This poem comes from the depths of many thoughts and deals with a subject which fascinates me. I have written a number of poems along similar lines. Being in this world, our impact on it in terms of whom we are and how we can make a contribution of the best we have to give, is something to ponder on.

These thoughts occur as we advance in age. Some dismiss them others seek ways to deal with them constructively. However, it is perplexing for us all. We are here for a reason and participants of a plan which our finite wisdom is unable to comprehend. This I do believe.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 14:48

d.k.,

One of your best poems to date and with a strong moral message included.
Thank you for this

Keith

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julie callaghan

Sat 5th Sep 2020 13:27

I read this shocking story yesterday Hugh. Hard to believe that these young lads could commit such a horrific attack. Your poem sums up the story well.

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Rich

Sat 5th Sep 2020 11:39

This seems a really thoughtul poem, I really like it. Some really good thoughts in here, making me reflect. I love that to know is to love, and those things that don't turn to dust. Smashing.

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Rich

Sat 5th Sep 2020 11:33

Great poem - formed a lovely picture in my mind; I can see this place, and I can feel it, too.

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 10:24

John,

Thank you for this. I was particularly drawn to the line "Stones do not record the passing glance or look. Only words do that". So very true.
Thank you for this

Keith

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julie callaghan

Sat 5th Sep 2020 07:48

Thanks for the likes Stephen and Flavia.

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:39

The blues, I get them too when we fill our lives with random sex and drugs and rock and roll, is this love or just and excuse for not being alone, I will always hold you through your darkness, even if I'm not with you, I hold your hand, I stroke your forehead, I set you free from your chains, I send spells out into the ether to protect you from war and mayhem xxxx blessed be

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:32

So when I'm all choked up and I can't find the words, the part of me that's you will never die, I don't want to be just a memory baby, I'm all choked up and I can't find the words, xxx

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:24

It's 5am, sometimes it's a question of timing when it's right and the universe allows it, doors open and two people embrace again, the bonds are always there my thoughts are with you to dry your tears, I send light to your darkest dreams, God is with you my dear, God is always with you and your ancestors are too xxx

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:20

Xxx

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:17

I'm proud of you, my father's not proud of me either, I'm proud of You and that's all you need to know x

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Nicola Beckett

Sat 5th Sep 2020 05:16

You are a king amongst men x and your writing is beautiful again x

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John Marks

Sat 5th Sep 2020 03:03

Thank you Kevin and Cathy. You are both very thoughful, sincere and honest. The dark side is essential to all our lives but we should never live in it.

It's really a wonder that I haven't dropped all my ideals, because they seem so absurd and impossible to carry out. Yet I keep them, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart.

Anne Frank, The Diary of a Young Girl

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 5th Sep 2020 02:42

I agree with Kevin, there is a soulful comfort in your poetry even the ones that delve into the dark side. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen, my favorite poet. Don’t worry, you’re on the list too, right beside him!

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Sat 5th Sep 2020 00:20

You make darkness and gloom sound beautiful, almost comforting. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of your soul.

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John Marks

Fri 4th Sep 2020 23:28


And it's a battered old suitcase to a hotel someplace
And a wound that will never heal
No prima donna, the perfume is on
An old shirt that is stained with blood and whiskey
And goodnight to the street sweepers
The night watchman flame keepers and goodnight, Mathilda too

Tom Waits

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 4th Sep 2020 22:58

Thank you John. I am honored. You made my day. Write on my friend. ❤️

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 22:03

Democratically elected, soon to be voted out of office...or perhaps re-elected. Whatever we may think of him we can't argue with democracy.

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:36

A wonderful poem revisiting innocence.

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:34

Well Stephen another unique poem from your quill. Enjoyed it.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:14

Welcome to Write Out Loud, Sally. Glad that you managed to find your way in!

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:11

Very good Trevor. Others on here should take note on how to write a tight rhyming piece.

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:03

Stuart,

A beautifully composed poem with the final stanza hitting the nail on the head. A pleasure to read.

Thanks
Keith

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 18:37

Thankyou, Stephen.

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 18:37

Stephen...their best known song is "Three Lions" with Skinner and Baddiel.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Sep 2020 17:35

Brian, John and Manisha, thanks for the kind comments, and to Julie for the like.

I'm afraid that the Lightning Seeds have passed me by but I will try to listen to them soon.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Sep 2020 17:30

A really good poem, with a wonderful final couplet.

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John Marks

Fri 4th Sep 2020 14:36

A telling poem: confessional and absorbing.

I almost wish we were butterflies and liv'd but three summer days - three such days with you I could fill with more delight than fifty common years could ever contain.

John Keats, Bright Star: Love Letters and Poems of John Keats to Fanny Brawne

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 14:18

You’d certainly need more than a brace, Graham. It’s 4 for a boy so I reckon a growed man would need at least half a dozen. But be careful - they’re of the Corvid family.
And thanks for the comments and Likes, Paul, Don, Flavia, Brian and Julie.

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julie callaghan

Fri 4th Sep 2020 14:00

Thanks Nicola.
Thanks Brian, someone said the yacht in moored in the bay belonged to a wealthy sheikh. Now I am wondering how many women own giga yachts, I always think of them as boys toys?

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Nicola Beckett

Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:44

Therapy eh? Friendship love laughter and nature are the therapy I've found that works over the years and home made meals, x love to you

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Nicola Beckett

Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:43

A fab poem and so true money doesn't buy happiness, but it helps to pay the bills x

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Nicola Beckett

Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:41

Ha x

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Tom

Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:36

Many great lines here! The first verse in particular is really enjoyable to read.

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Tom

Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:20

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Flavia and welcome to WriteOutLoud. "The pot of my emotions are stirred / And you are the culprit..." I love that. ?

I'll have a read through the rest of your stuff shortly! Tom.

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 13:04

Interesting that you've written it from a man's perspective Julie...

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Sep 2020 11:04

This flows beautifully with some amazing descriptions. It was a pleasure to read and in such contrast to a world which is ridden with pessimism and bereft of hope. My favourite line is " follow not the orders negative and vile advices".

Thank you for this

Keith

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:59

Still into campanology Don?

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:33

Brian, have you reached this unfortunate stage yet?.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:29

Good idea Graham. They usually hang around as a family.....

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:26

Surely you need a brace of 'em? One for sorrow, two for joy etc etc. There's not a lot of meat on the legs!

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:24

Do you boil or fry it Brian?.....

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:01

Not Jack Hargreaves, Graham. John Betjeman’s “A Shropshire Lad”.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=-jnT4tOl_qQ
Mid-table, I’m afraid. Levy won’t part with enough brass for us to refresh.

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